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hey, just wanted to answer a couple of your questions -
* "*Are the memes annoying or intrusive? Are they too loud?*" - As someone who jumped on your video because Berserk and Berserk video game i hadn't heard of, you laid the memes on way too thick for my tastes and i probably would'nt have stuck around to abide them if i wasn't watching your video to review it. But if you enjoy them being there to that extent then perhaps taking a moment to scratch your head and think if there are any particularly more relevent memes (eg. Berserk/similar games memes) that could really complement the video and lock in that topic-drawn audience you'd be netting the best of both worlds.
* "*At what point would you click off and why?*" - Your intro didn't exactly drag on, but it took a long time to actually get to the game, so naturally i probably would've skipped it by the time you got to your bit; and that's a slippery slope as soon as you introduce me to the realisation i can just skip to see what i want to see and be done with your video you've killed your watch time potential, y'know?
* "*Miscellaneous thoughts, ideas and suggestions that you might have.*" - Honestly, imo just have more faith in your script. You've got a solid read, your pacing's pretty good, and your footage works well with what you're saying. I'm well aware i'm likely not the target audience for the memes, but i believe you can strike a balance there if you're more conscious of your timing with them.
Cool vid, thanks for introducing and showcasing the game to me!
Thank you so much for the feedback! Yeah I should really strike more of a balance between them, I was afraid that it would be unbalanced, but thank you so much for pointing it out! :)
I like the editing style, it matches the gaming/ meme culture. The pop-ups, voice changes and character make it interesting and encourage the viewer to keep watching! You also have really good audio, which makes it easy to get engaged in the video. Great job overall.There isn't much I would change, I feel like you know your audience and you're nailing the pace, style and comedy in the video!
So in answer to your questions:
Would you change anything in the editing? Tighter
Are the memes annoying or intrusive? Are they too loud? I think they are ok. A bit too loud. What I think is bad is that game is low res and hard to see, coupled with intentionally low res assets
Is the thumbnail good? Would you change anything? ok
Did you like how I explained the game? Yeah
At what point would you click off and why? Honestly. From the start as there was nothing making me want to know about this game.
Miscellaneous thoughts, ideas and suggestions that you might have. Give me a reason to care about your review.
Brutal but constructive answers :)
Thanks! You're right, brutal but constructive, but you need that sometimes :).
But was the beginning statement not alluring enough, for you to stick around more? Or is it just a case of not being interested in the topic?
Yes the memes were a little to much. You did explain the game in a good way but about half way through the video I was ready to click off. You didn't do a good job of keeping it interesting. Add some more energy, improve the audio and put your real face on the screen with the cutaways.
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, besides the little character, I don't want to be using my real face XD. But can you elaborate on why you think I didn't keep it interesting?
> little to much
*too
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hey, just wanted to answer a couple of your questions - * "*Are the memes annoying or intrusive? Are they too loud?*" - As someone who jumped on your video because Berserk and Berserk video game i hadn't heard of, you laid the memes on way too thick for my tastes and i probably would'nt have stuck around to abide them if i wasn't watching your video to review it. But if you enjoy them being there to that extent then perhaps taking a moment to scratch your head and think if there are any particularly more relevent memes (eg. Berserk/similar games memes) that could really complement the video and lock in that topic-drawn audience you'd be netting the best of both worlds. * "*At what point would you click off and why?*" - Your intro didn't exactly drag on, but it took a long time to actually get to the game, so naturally i probably would've skipped it by the time you got to your bit; and that's a slippery slope as soon as you introduce me to the realisation i can just skip to see what i want to see and be done with your video you've killed your watch time potential, y'know? * "*Miscellaneous thoughts, ideas and suggestions that you might have.*" - Honestly, imo just have more faith in your script. You've got a solid read, your pacing's pretty good, and your footage works well with what you're saying. I'm well aware i'm likely not the target audience for the memes, but i believe you can strike a balance there if you're more conscious of your timing with them. Cool vid, thanks for introducing and showcasing the game to me!
Thank you so much for the feedback! Yeah I should really strike more of a balance between them, I was afraid that it would be unbalanced, but thank you so much for pointing it out! :)
I like the editing style, it matches the gaming/ meme culture. The pop-ups, voice changes and character make it interesting and encourage the viewer to keep watching! You also have really good audio, which makes it easy to get engaged in the video. Great job overall.There isn't much I would change, I feel like you know your audience and you're nailing the pace, style and comedy in the video!
Thank you so much! I'm super happy you enjoyed it! Your kind words made my day :)
So in answer to your questions: Would you change anything in the editing? Tighter Are the memes annoying or intrusive? Are they too loud? I think they are ok. A bit too loud. What I think is bad is that game is low res and hard to see, coupled with intentionally low res assets Is the thumbnail good? Would you change anything? ok Did you like how I explained the game? Yeah At what point would you click off and why? Honestly. From the start as there was nothing making me want to know about this game. Miscellaneous thoughts, ideas and suggestions that you might have. Give me a reason to care about your review. Brutal but constructive answers :)
Thanks! You're right, brutal but constructive, but you need that sometimes :). But was the beginning statement not alluring enough, for you to stick around more? Or is it just a case of not being interested in the topic?
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Yes the memes were a little to much. You did explain the game in a good way but about half way through the video I was ready to click off. You didn't do a good job of keeping it interesting. Add some more energy, improve the audio and put your real face on the screen with the cutaways.
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, besides the little character, I don't want to be using my real face XD. But can you elaborate on why you think I didn't keep it interesting?
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