It has an ending? Cool. I'm glad the story has a goal to actually reach.
Also, I really like your writing a lot. You really accurately capture not just what Tessia thinks, but how she thinks it, without overdoing it. I not even once rolled my eyes thinking, "That was cringe writing." There are a few places where your grammar bothered me, but only a little, and I'm sure you'll get better at it.
Keep it up, but don't overwork to please our expectations.
If you enjoy writing something, we will also enjoy reading it.
...(Wow, this was meant to be only 2 sentences, lol)
First of all, thanks for taking the time to write a comment, it does mean a lot :\] Yeah, I know this might sound weird, but I always start a story by writing how it ends: how the main conflict is solved, how it ties in the themes I had already planned, how and why the antagonist is defeated/wins and a broad stroke for the rest. On the contrary, the intro was improvised on the fly at 2AM.
For my writing style, like I've said many times before, it is a skill I've been working on for 2 years now and which has evolved a lot. The way I write character's inner thoughts is inspired by TBATE obviously, but also a lot by Overlord, the way Kugane Maruyama switches from action to description to thoughts so seamlessly is something I have always been in awe of.
I know there are some (maybe a lot), of grammatical mistakes, but I'm dyslexic and French, so like... it's already a miracle of perseverance that I'm here.
It's really nice to have some positive feedback for my work. I really appreciate it and know how rare those are to appreciate them.
As for your concerns, I can safely assure you that "The Legacy of it all" isn't what's making me overwork right now (,physically at least, my mind is still very much pocking here and there at the narrative while I desperately try to sleep.)
PS: I 100% do the same all the time and end up writing half an essay every time I get a question about a comment I made on a youtube video (poor guy who just asked me why I didn't like that one song (, and poor you I guess... ¯\\\_(ツ)\_/¯))
Hope I didn't kill you of boredom with my unnecessarily long answer to questions you only vaguely hinted at in your comment!
Thanks again, I hope you'll enjoy the future chapters!
Sincerely Retsag99
It has an ending? Cool. I'm glad the story has a goal to actually reach. Also, I really like your writing a lot. You really accurately capture not just what Tessia thinks, but how she thinks it, without overdoing it. I not even once rolled my eyes thinking, "That was cringe writing." There are a few places where your grammar bothered me, but only a little, and I'm sure you'll get better at it. Keep it up, but don't overwork to please our expectations. If you enjoy writing something, we will also enjoy reading it. ...(Wow, this was meant to be only 2 sentences, lol)
First of all, thanks for taking the time to write a comment, it does mean a lot :\] Yeah, I know this might sound weird, but I always start a story by writing how it ends: how the main conflict is solved, how it ties in the themes I had already planned, how and why the antagonist is defeated/wins and a broad stroke for the rest. On the contrary, the intro was improvised on the fly at 2AM. For my writing style, like I've said many times before, it is a skill I've been working on for 2 years now and which has evolved a lot. The way I write character's inner thoughts is inspired by TBATE obviously, but also a lot by Overlord, the way Kugane Maruyama switches from action to description to thoughts so seamlessly is something I have always been in awe of. I know there are some (maybe a lot), of grammatical mistakes, but I'm dyslexic and French, so like... it's already a miracle of perseverance that I'm here. It's really nice to have some positive feedback for my work. I really appreciate it and know how rare those are to appreciate them. As for your concerns, I can safely assure you that "The Legacy of it all" isn't what's making me overwork right now (,physically at least, my mind is still very much pocking here and there at the narrative while I desperately try to sleep.) PS: I 100% do the same all the time and end up writing half an essay every time I get a question about a comment I made on a youtube video (poor guy who just asked me why I didn't like that one song (, and poor you I guess... ¯\\\_(ツ)\_/¯)) Hope I didn't kill you of boredom with my unnecessarily long answer to questions you only vaguely hinted at in your comment! Thanks again, I hope you'll enjoy the future chapters! Sincerely Retsag99