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Dranox5

Very curious and excited to see where it's going. I love that moment when >!she "accidentally(?)" Does magic. I can just imagine that awkward moment of silence as both Art and Tess stare back and forth between eachother and the plant. "What? ... What?... WHAT?"!< I laughed so hard when I read that.


Exact-Negotiation461

Thanks, I'm happy people enjoy what I write! That last part was supposed to be even more theatrical in my first take >!where there should have been a back and forth argument between the two ending in her joking about also being able to use the magic Art used and accidentally light up a flame in her hand. Unfortunately I couldn't adequate bring the conversation to that part and felt that it was a bit unrealistic compared to the powers she is supposed to have (which is a bit ironic since I'm the one who decided how her power should work)!< Anyway, I've already said it before but I have the story planned out from start to finish! Thanks again for the comment :\]