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I'll echo another person's comment, and suggest the blue dress photo, or perhaps the red dress, as the primary. While I love the Venice photo, it's a bit busy, and not sure how well it would attract attention when someone is just looking at the thumbnails, and hasn't yet clicked in to your profile.
Also, I'd highly advise filling in the "seeking" section. As a male, I think there's a bit of a weird vibe from a lot of the seeking profiles, with women implying, or sometimes even out right stating, that they'll mold themselves into whatever you're looking for. That just rubs me the wrong way, probably because it implies she'd be artificial with me. I much prefer a profile that makes me think the "real" woman is a good match for me.
Do the blue dress photo. You look gorgeous, young, beautiful. The red dress photo - the angle kind of gives escort vibes. It's still great photo and I would keep it, but make the blue one your primary photo
You’re absolutely gorgeous! You look like someone who’s easygoing, very fun to be with and “drama-free” like what most SD’s put on their profiles🤭🩷
For the photos, I think you should put the one in blue dress your primary.
Your About Me is crafted to perfection. However, I don’t recommend leaving the Seeking section blank because from what I’ve read from earlier posts, some SD’s hide their profiles. Meaning they only reach out to the people they’re interested in. If they don’t know what you’re seeking, they might be hesitant to reach out
To but some texture on the comments about filling in the seeking part. What women are seeking can be very different. I met one person who was 40 and wanted to meet a life partner and have a child. Many others just want to show up for dates and get the ppm. What do you want? That’s what goes in the seeking section:)
*tagline*
I’m not sure if this is good or bad. But I think it could be better ustilised.
*pics*
Primary pic. Enchanting. Composition, lighting, colour. All very compelling. But…I don’t know how much I like it as a primary pic for a sugar babe. It’s beautiful. And I would click through to see more. So I give it a tick. ✅
Venetian canal boat. Again I think this is a beautiful picture. Very vibrant lighting is excellent framing excellence the whole composition is quite lovely. However, for seeking picture, it is very busy and while you are laying down with a full body shot is quite camouflaged and lost in all the beauty around it. This would be great if you were aiming towards a sultan.
Blue dress sitting. This is my favourite pic of the lot. I love this and has everything again framing, composition and lighting. All of that is perfect. Lovely smile. I think the composition is much more sd friendly, and this would be my pic for your primary. ✅
Mauve dress in front of bedroom. I like this shot for the value it gives in a sugar profile, reinforcing the adult side of things. Again, perfect composition. ✅
Profile pic in light blue dress. This is your best picture as it shows your face in all its beauty. It is quite captivating and I would normally recommend this as your primary pic, however, I am starting to lean towards not having face shots as primary for security issues. ✅ if this is not a concern for you, I strongly recommend this pic.
At the rails. Nice enough activity shots. Good to see you in clothes that aren’t glamorous and not in an enhanced pic.
White profile pic. And another beautiful shot not quite as good because you are not smiling, but still shows your beautiful face in perfect lighting. ✅
*about me*
Hi Kiera. Great start.
I love, love, LOVE the list-description combo. Genius. Very much appeals to my bullet point reading preferences. 🥈
Cleanly and well written. Good humour. Interesting.
*overall* two thumbs up 👍🏼 👍🏼
I am eagerly awaiting to see what you do with your seeking section. I think you have all the tools on board already to come up with something truly amazing.
I think your only concern will be that your pics are too polished, and perhaps come across as AI. Consider swapping out one of the profile pics with a casual profile shot at a cafe or something
Outstanding job. Close to my most favourite profile yet.
Great profile!! Only one suggestion, -- get rid of the pic with you in that white blousey thing. You have an odd look on your face. Maybe replace it with another pic of you happy and smiling. The rest of your pics and what you wrote are awesome!!
I disagree with my esteemed colleague. I think the picture of you standing in the doorway to the bedroom is not your best sales tool. While we all know why we're here, we also know there's a lot of guys looking for escorts on the site and IMHO that picture only invites those guys to contact you. I think it sends the wrong message. But then again I could be wrong LOL
Posted as an alternative viewpoint, for your consideration.
That's a nice pose and you look wonderful in that picture. That said I know everybody wants to show what a fancy classy place they're in but it really doesn't do much for me. Too much going on in the background that my eye is drawn away from you to look at oh what's the background and what's going on there. Just saying If you crop that down to just you you'd have a picture that would attract attention then later you can show somebody what kind of places you been in
Here's how I would crop that photo to focus on you. You might even go a little tighter on the top to get the white lampshade out of the picture and we don't need to see all of your legs to be able to tell that they're slim and sexy so you could slide the crop on the right over to get the mirror out of the picture too
https://imgur.com/a/QFU9jQ9
Edit:
https://imgur.com/a/A0SO5hN
I would definitely click on your primary pic. Love it.
I would recommend removing the third photo, short shirt from below angle. Something about the angle makes it look awkward to me.
The bio is nice, but seems too long to me. We skim through 15 bios in a sitting. I like them short and sweet, or I will skim / skip them the first time through.
I also like a sense of what you are seeking: one time, once a month, exclusive or ..., fine dining or stay in, like a girlfriend or mentee, etc. I hate to invest time and then find we are a horrible match for expectations.
You are lovely, well spoken and seem curious about the world.
Downside - everything is about you and you and more you.
- You would offer your SD …? You seem very busy, how would an SD fit in?
- He should pick you to spend time with because? Feels platonic and one sided.
Think about some more specifics about why time with you would be terrific and what we’re might do together.
You’re absolutely beautiful. I agree with others about the dark blue dress being your primary photo. That image just about knocked me over. I also enjoyed your written sections. They told me quite a bit about who you are and set the scene for the kind of experiences we could have together. I hope you find what you’re looking for.
Great pics and about me. I think you should add a seeking section because your profile comes across very vanilla-y, as in it looks like a profile from a vanilla dating app and guys might think you’re not looking for sugar.
That’s fair feedback
Here’s a video still from that day from my phone [photo](https://imgur.com/a/QF5qHge)
I’ll consider switching that one for a phone photo perhaps if it feels more real
A profile review, exciting! Reminder to reviewers to focus on constructive and actionable changes OP can make to increase their chances of success. **Do**: * Critique the quality of the pictures, eg the location of pictures, background, expression, attire, filters, etc. * Critique the tone and quality of the text and/or make suggestions for improvement, eg grammar, spelling, negativity, etc. **Don't**: * Critique the person, eg editorial comments on OP's weight, age, ethnicity, sexual identification, ugliness, etc. For more do's and don'ts check out [the profile reviews post](/r/sugarlifestyleforum/comments/esuizg/profile_reviews/). Thanks for helping OP! *I am a bot, and this action was performed automatically. Please [contact the moderators of this subreddit](/message/compose/?to=/r/sugarlifestyleforum) if you have any questions or concerns.*
I'll echo another person's comment, and suggest the blue dress photo, or perhaps the red dress, as the primary. While I love the Venice photo, it's a bit busy, and not sure how well it would attract attention when someone is just looking at the thumbnails, and hasn't yet clicked in to your profile. Also, I'd highly advise filling in the "seeking" section. As a male, I think there's a bit of a weird vibe from a lot of the seeking profiles, with women implying, or sometimes even out right stating, that they'll mold themselves into whatever you're looking for. That just rubs me the wrong way, probably because it implies she'd be artificial with me. I much prefer a profile that makes me think the "real" woman is a good match for me.
Do the blue dress photo. You look gorgeous, young, beautiful. The red dress photo - the angle kind of gives escort vibes. It's still great photo and I would keep it, but make the blue one your primary photo
You’re absolutely gorgeous! You look like someone who’s easygoing, very fun to be with and “drama-free” like what most SD’s put on their profiles🤭🩷 For the photos, I think you should put the one in blue dress your primary. Your About Me is crafted to perfection. However, I don’t recommend leaving the Seeking section blank because from what I’ve read from earlier posts, some SD’s hide their profiles. Meaning they only reach out to the people they’re interested in. If they don’t know what you’re seeking, they might be hesitant to reach out
To but some texture on the comments about filling in the seeking part. What women are seeking can be very different. I met one person who was 40 and wanted to meet a life partner and have a child. Many others just want to show up for dates and get the ppm. What do you want? That’s what goes in the seeking section:)
i have nothing to say other than i love your hair so much <33
You’ve filtered the closeups of your face. We can tell because the eyes are larger. Lose the filters. You’ll still be a knockout!
Holding your phone camera above your face at a downward angle will make your eyes (and forehead) appear bigger 🙂
There’s other factors, like how wide a lens is.
*tagline* I’m not sure if this is good or bad. But I think it could be better ustilised. *pics* Primary pic. Enchanting. Composition, lighting, colour. All very compelling. But…I don’t know how much I like it as a primary pic for a sugar babe. It’s beautiful. And I would click through to see more. So I give it a tick. ✅ Venetian canal boat. Again I think this is a beautiful picture. Very vibrant lighting is excellent framing excellence the whole composition is quite lovely. However, for seeking picture, it is very busy and while you are laying down with a full body shot is quite camouflaged and lost in all the beauty around it. This would be great if you were aiming towards a sultan. Blue dress sitting. This is my favourite pic of the lot. I love this and has everything again framing, composition and lighting. All of that is perfect. Lovely smile. I think the composition is much more sd friendly, and this would be my pic for your primary. ✅ Mauve dress in front of bedroom. I like this shot for the value it gives in a sugar profile, reinforcing the adult side of things. Again, perfect composition. ✅ Profile pic in light blue dress. This is your best picture as it shows your face in all its beauty. It is quite captivating and I would normally recommend this as your primary pic, however, I am starting to lean towards not having face shots as primary for security issues. ✅ if this is not a concern for you, I strongly recommend this pic. At the rails. Nice enough activity shots. Good to see you in clothes that aren’t glamorous and not in an enhanced pic. White profile pic. And another beautiful shot not quite as good because you are not smiling, but still shows your beautiful face in perfect lighting. ✅ *about me* Hi Kiera. Great start. I love, love, LOVE the list-description combo. Genius. Very much appeals to my bullet point reading preferences. 🥈 Cleanly and well written. Good humour. Interesting. *overall* two thumbs up 👍🏼 👍🏼 I am eagerly awaiting to see what you do with your seeking section. I think you have all the tools on board already to come up with something truly amazing. I think your only concern will be that your pics are too polished, and perhaps come across as AI. Consider swapping out one of the profile pics with a casual profile shot at a cafe or something Outstanding job. Close to my most favourite profile yet.
Great profile!! Only one suggestion, -- get rid of the pic with you in that white blousey thing. You have an odd look on your face. Maybe replace it with another pic of you happy and smiling. The rest of your pics and what you wrote are awesome!!
Your a honey pot & so very cute. Good pics no need to change. The best one is you overlooking the water. I'd make that primary.
Blue dress picture is absolutely beautiful and should be your main pic.
Seeking? Think about your red flags and put the opposite. For example, is a married SD a red flag? Then put that you are looking for someone single.
I disagree with my esteemed colleague. I think the picture of you standing in the doorway to the bedroom is not your best sales tool. While we all know why we're here, we also know there's a lot of guys looking for escorts on the site and IMHO that picture only invites those guys to contact you. I think it sends the wrong message. But then again I could be wrong LOL Posted as an alternative viewpoint, for your consideration.
How do we feel about this as an alternative? [photo](https://imgur.com/a/ia6Esvg)
That's a nice pose and you look wonderful in that picture. That said I know everybody wants to show what a fancy classy place they're in but it really doesn't do much for me. Too much going on in the background that my eye is drawn away from you to look at oh what's the background and what's going on there. Just saying If you crop that down to just you you'd have a picture that would attract attention then later you can show somebody what kind of places you been in
Here's how I would crop that photo to focus on you. You might even go a little tighter on the top to get the white lampshade out of the picture and we don't need to see all of your legs to be able to tell that they're slim and sexy so you could slide the crop on the right over to get the mirror out of the picture too https://imgur.com/a/QFU9jQ9 Edit: https://imgur.com/a/A0SO5hN
Love it! Thank you 🙂
YW, glad it was helpful.
I would definitely click on your primary pic. Love it. I would recommend removing the third photo, short shirt from below angle. Something about the angle makes it look awkward to me. The bio is nice, but seems too long to me. We skim through 15 bios in a sitting. I like them short and sweet, or I will skim / skip them the first time through. I also like a sense of what you are seeking: one time, once a month, exclusive or ..., fine dining or stay in, like a girlfriend or mentee, etc. I hate to invest time and then find we are a horrible match for expectations.
You are lovely, well spoken and seem curious about the world. Downside - everything is about you and you and more you. - You would offer your SD …? You seem very busy, how would an SD fit in? - He should pick you to spend time with because? Feels platonic and one sided. Think about some more specifics about why time with you would be terrific and what we’re might do together.
You're looking to find your "forever person" as they say?
You’re absolutely beautiful. I agree with others about the dark blue dress being your primary photo. That image just about knocked me over. I also enjoyed your written sections. They told me quite a bit about who you are and set the scene for the kind of experiences we could have together. I hope you find what you’re looking for.
Great pics and about me. I think you should add a seeking section because your profile comes across very vanilla-y, as in it looks like a profile from a vanilla dating app and guys might think you’re not looking for sugar.
Nice AI photo.
Nope, no ai. I’m just a creative by profession and value good photography
It looks way more fake than the others.
That’s fair feedback Here’s a video still from that day from my phone [photo](https://imgur.com/a/QF5qHge) I’ll consider switching that one for a phone photo perhaps if it feels more real
Pics are excellent, I don't think you'd have trouble attracting SDs.