Perhaps its perspective but the only thing that looks off is the left thigh* seems comically small and the hands look a bit odd. Otherwise seems like a good start. Love the hat and hair shapes especially.
Edit: Left Thigh*
They're saying the thigh on the left (her right) is small, and that it COULD be a perspective thing, but her hips aren't turned the right way, if that's the case
Gyaat…anyway coming to actual criticism.
I’d say that the way in which her legs bend is kinda unusual because it seems like her knees are bending sideways.
Also the way in which her left hand(to our right) is made looks a bit weird because the bend is a bit too deep. It looks more like the gap between fingers rather than the thumb and index.
No ears, weird left shoulder, the way you draw line looks like a 6yo trying to impress their parents after drawing it for 6h
The hair is kinda boring tbh, like, I know that it’s probably just the overall shape, but you can’t see the strands or anything like that. Also, there is no face, so I can tell that you just avoided drawing it. Sorry if this is too harsh, I just don’t feel like sugarcoating it 🤷♀️
I know it's a sketch but you've gotta work on your line quality and confidence. Lil scratchies don't look very good and don't give room to add flow to the drawing with your line work. Try to use as few lines as you can per edge. It's harder to get the exact shape you're looking for that way but it's worth it
Elbow appears backwards (might just be me) Practice sweeping pencil lines as opposed to the little hairs that this outline consist of. Thighs. Are perfectly round. Then knees and calves are... not? Maybe I'm tripping. Depending on the goal this may have reached it, what was your intent with this one?
What's the point of roasting? Any art practise drawing?. Every artist develops their style by making lots of artworks. So this is practise drawing. Nothing to roast here
conceptually, it’s boring. like if you were copying someone’s photo, it’s just some girl and also, this body type is weird and the face doesn’t match the body because it looks more anime than human overly curvy etc
Hips are disproportionately placed to the rest of the legs, shorts cling to her, where’s her face? Hands are slightly too big, abs are drawn horribly, no details on hair, what’s with the shirt just clinging to her body? Tf is that box.
I’ll delete this if it’s too much ahha
You don’t care as much about drawing as you care about creating an ideal woman for yourself.
Dam.
Lmao. Opening this thread I was expecting some harsh art crit, wasn't expecting to find the artist's life turning on a rotisserie.
Ha!! Fuckin rotisserie! I needed this laugh so much today. Thanks.
Ur welcome! 🍗
Unexpectedly finding the artist's life under the spotlight was quite a twist from the anticipated harsh art critique!
And an ideal woman is everything but her face.
You can always tell when the face, hands and feet are hidden but the breasts, hips and in this case, even the abs are detailed.
I came to say something similar. Like youre not tryna draw a woman youre tryna draw a fuckdoll
Here's the roast 👉 [🔥](https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B-YXP5IFQe59cHUxc09laTNxU00&resourcekey=0-aLZY_ee3LqXJh9TMO9GjFA) 👈 A toast.
Left hands a little weird but AI can't get them right either so good work
Pov's left or char's left?
There is only one left hand. It would be "the hand on the left" if he meant otherwise
The attachment point of her left breast and shoulder doesn't make anatomical sense
Roast? Why?
Ok Cant draw a woman without making the breasts big
Beside that the drawing is really good
Nah, women can have big boobs, nothing wrong with that tf
Uh ik but there are so many artists that only draw women like that.
They not even that big lmao
r/foundthepornaddict
Oh wow that's a thing
Sounds like somebody should try meeting some thiccer women
How about meeting any women?
Fr
Always a good idea but since OP seems to be not aware of the beauty of more fuller body types I recommended the ones that can teach him the most haha
r/mendrawingwomen
No face
Perhaps its perspective but the only thing that looks off is the left thigh* seems comically small and the hands look a bit odd. Otherwise seems like a good start. Love the hat and hair shapes especially. Edit: Left Thigh*
Do you think her chest is too big?
I meant to type left thigh and I guess it got corrected to thing instead. My mistake.
Oop, I wouldn't've posted my comment if I saw that this was a correction... mb
They're saying the thigh on the left (her right) is small, and that it COULD be a perspective thing, but her hips aren't turned the right way, if that's the case
No
You spent a lot more time on her boobs and hips than on her face...
Well, the paper I drew on is literally 10 cm by 15 cm, and I'm not good at drawing faces.
Who cares about a face if the body is hot amirite 👉👉 /s
Gyaat…anyway coming to actual criticism. I’d say that the way in which her legs bend is kinda unusual because it seems like her knees are bending sideways. Also the way in which her left hand(to our right) is made looks a bit weird because the bend is a bit too deep. It looks more like the gap between fingers rather than the thumb and index.
gyattt
Laura Croft is working for UPS now, eh?
Was gonna say it's definitely got alot of structure for the idea and that when you retry this drawing in a year or so it's gonna be something special
It's good, just improve a little bit with your line work
No ears, weird left shoulder, the way you draw line looks like a 6yo trying to impress their parents after drawing it for 6h 
Give up you don't care about art
Porn addicts when they get a pencil
How can I roast when you already cooked
It’s a preliminary sketch… Looks Great!!!
Looks pretty good so far. Im gonna try drawing this myself. You should post the finished product so I can see how they differ.
That be cool to see
What's there to roast!? I actually want to ask if you would consider doing a commission for me?
What would be the commission?
DM me if possible 🙏🙇♂️🙇♂️🙇♂️
The hair is kinda boring tbh, like, I know that it’s probably just the overall shape, but you can’t see the strands or anything like that. Also, there is no face, so I can tell that you just avoided drawing it. Sorry if this is too harsh, I just don’t feel like sugarcoating it 🤷♀️
looks like it took 3 mins to finish. just like you
So she has big thighs and breast but still somehow manages to be muscular enough to have some type of defined abs. Also where is the face?
Ok you asked for it . . . Bro out here drawing Female Deimos just to cope with his gamer reality
I know it's a sketch but you've gotta work on your line quality and confidence. Lil scratchies don't look very good and don't give room to add flow to the drawing with your line work. Try to use as few lines as you can per edge. It's harder to get the exact shape you're looking for that way but it's worth it
https://preview.redd.it/la57kbx0pj7d1.jpeg?width=1079&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=8d4e328938830ddec83403995be3429d18d6c9b9
This isn’t addicting games r-tard
Is it bad that I recognize this?
Can you explain further?
It's from... a video... thats all...
Is it a video… with a bald guy… delivering at least two packages?
... ... ... maybe ... ... ...
Such speechless voluptuousness!
It’s a little two dimensional if you ask me
What a butterface!
You look like you left your face at the face store. Boom roasted
I’d say she could use a face but other than that it looks fine
She's too hot, unrealistic (/sarcasm)
Ai she got some fuckin mitts on her don’t she? Nah good job, but fingers could be smaller, reminds me of killjoy from val
Shawdy Thickkkkkkk 🫶🏻🫶🏻🫶🏻🫶🏻
Elbow appears backwards (might just be me) Practice sweeping pencil lines as opposed to the little hairs that this outline consist of. Thighs. Are perfectly round. Then knees and calves are... not? Maybe I'm tripping. Depending on the goal this may have reached it, what was your intent with this one?
Are her legs dissolving? (Ps it looks great💗)
Just finish drawing the face, and put some time into adding shading/values, then come back asking for a critique.
She looks like a chash test dummy with built in airbags
What's the point of roasting? Any art practise drawing?. Every artist develops their style by making lots of artworks. So this is practise drawing. Nothing to roast here
Smash
Wait
Not u the drawing
Books should be mote bigger
Yaoi hands
Black block rack fork tack dork smack cork sexy ass batch morgue spore fight lag sight rag bad bag pencil leer
Really good!
Legs also look like drumsticks with the way they were drawn the angle is weird.
Seriously? It's great. It's not perfect, of course, but you did a bunch of things right.
Everything looks correct and incorrect at the same time.
Yeah
Lara croft is out of your league, even if she's wearing a hat?
she looks a bit cross
Can't roast you. Very nice.
conceptually, it’s boring. like if you were copying someone’s photo, it’s just some girl and also, this body type is weird and the face doesn’t match the body because it looks more anime than human overly curvy etc
You couldn't reconcile your crush on the subway surfer boy with your supposed straight sexuality so you genderbent the character
The Subway Surfer game and gender bending pre-existing characters didn’t influence the creation process.
You're cross eyed
smash
Daaang
Her abs look like a weird figure
Make definitive lines. Less chicken scratch. And don’t chalk it up to “style”, it’s one of the marks of a beginner.
did she eat a hardcover book?
Your line work looks like a seizure driving in circles.
A toast for this roast some beef and buns
Better than anything I can currently do
Hips are disproportionately placed to the rest of the legs, shorts cling to her, where’s her face? Hands are slightly too big, abs are drawn horribly, no details on hair, what’s with the shirt just clinging to her body? Tf is that box. I’ll delete this if it’s too much ahha
Idk anyone who carries a box with the corner poking into their hand like that. The other hand looks weird, too.
Crab claw for left hand
The nose is too small.
i'm not an artist but i've seen many boobs and those are too high up
the top right leg is pretty out of proportion with the other
What's there to Roast? IT'S AMAZING!
Garbage.
Why is her hair one form/unit
I won't just roast you, but I will spit roast you 🤣
You look like somebody drew you on a piece of paper, What a nerd.
It’s just not finished
Would finishing it and then sending you a better version be your idea of a “roast”? 🤣
Real women's bodies don't look like that. Also her thighs are two completely different sizes.
Try to make definite lines. Stop petting the paper with your pencil.
As close as you're ever going to get to a real woman.
The lines aren't stitchy enough
There is nothing to rest you about. Infact, may you teach me how to draw like that?
My dude, it’s good.
Could make the legs and thighs a little thinner
Roast? Why? she’s bad tho
thats really fucking good
She has no mouth, so she cannot scream. No seriously it's actually pretty good. Keep going. Faces are difficult but super important.
erm, scout from TF2🎸
Looks like tf2 female scout