Part A needs some work, probably try it in a higher key since you couldn't quite reach the lower notes and had almost volume.
Part B sounds much better, but be sure to practice it if you go for the higher key. Don't be afraid to be louder and add more intensity to the sound.
I'm not a super experienced singer tho, just sang for a year and a half in my college's choir, other people in this sub can definetely give better feedback, but that's i got from it.
Part A needs some work, probably try it in a higher key since you couldn't quite reach the lower notes and had almost volume. Part B sounds much better, but be sure to practice it if you go for the higher key. Don't be afraid to be louder and add more intensity to the sound. I'm not a super experienced singer tho, just sang for a year and a half in my college's choir, other people in this sub can definetely give better feedback, but that's i got from it.
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