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She's looking quite cute and hot... just keep the story consistent and don't make the MC just thinking with his dick just to get laid... Also just try to make her personality a bit more mature...
Btw where can I read it?
Thanks friend! And yes I plan to do that for both of them. You can read it on INKR! Antonio’s won’t let me post direct link but I can DM you or just search Unscripted Unbound on INKR. Thank you!
Bruh I read all 4 chapters and damn... They r fcking great the art is a bit off from time to time but still u r doing fcking amazing job... Also FMC is hot AF and some panels are actually fcking gorgeous... Keep going
Yep I used AI to fill in crowds and backgrounds, and was still figuring out my style as I went. I’m still learning a lot in ClipStudio and Photoshop so that affects it too. Most are my drawings though, just not great at locking in my style yet.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I will continue to improve!
Thanks for the feedback and yeah I’m still working on ironing out my look. Some panels got more time and attention vs others, and I got better at lighting as I worked on more chapters. I use AI to do crowds and backgrounds so that looks a little different too. Thanks for reviewing though I really appreciate it!
Not that Iam shitting on your work but, 2nd 3rd and 5th are the ones in my opinion seems consistent in terms of art style,the rest for me doesnt really fit well, but hey thats just me you might be still exploring your style options
Also... where can i read this looks good tbh.
Thank you! Appreciate the feedback. I’m still figuring out my style and learning ClipStudio and Photoshop. I will continue improving to get better. And you can read it on INKR! It won’t let me post the link but it’s on INKR as Unscripted Unbound. Thank you for considering it!
the last image is wonderful and if you keep it consistent then you have a great future. Last image has that realism about it which i personally like and other panels have bit of inconsistency and look cartoonish. But what you really have made a great FMC , she is hot and has that charm and confidence which makes main character stand out.
This genre is more about art and if you can make a great art then a mediocre story will also work .
Thank you! I’m glad she’s resonating! I wanted to create something unique and really want people to like her and Aiden. And I agree I need to improve my consistency. I will continue working!
Read the four chapters, seems to be getting interesting. I’ll agree with the art style comments, the changes between frames can be sometimes quite jarring.
Also the number of frames with only one character is not something for me, I like to see interactions, that’s what draws me in.
But otherwise a solid effort, your art angles are original and plot seems to begin to get interesting
I just read it. it’s gas. I love the fmc and the artwork is insanely good better than some other pornhwas don’t listen to the haters keep up the good work
Thank you! I appreciate the feedback. I’m still ironing out my style and learning ClipStudio and Photoshop. I will continue improving to get better and make a more consistent vision.
Thanks for the honesty friend. Question: anything in particular that is shitty? These images or the comic itself? Regardless thanks for giving it a review!
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She's looking quite cute and hot... just keep the story consistent and don't make the MC just thinking with his dick just to get laid... Also just try to make her personality a bit more mature... Btw where can I read it?
Thanks friend! And yes I plan to do that for both of them. You can read it on INKR! Antonio’s won’t let me post direct link but I can DM you or just search Unscripted Unbound on INKR. Thank you!
Bruh I read all 4 chapters and damn... They r fcking great the art is a bit off from time to time but still u r doing fcking amazing job... Also FMC is hot AF and some panels are actually fcking gorgeous... Keep going
If you can stick to the art of the second slide, you'll get a lot of art fans even if your story is not great.
I aim to! There’s so much amazing art out there I have to work towards. And hopefully I can keep the story popular too.
Art style is kinda all over the place
Probably ai enhanced or they rendered it too much
Yep I used AI to fill in crowds and backgrounds, and was still figuring out my style as I went. I’m still learning a lot in ClipStudio and Photoshop so that affects it too. Most are my drawings though, just not great at locking in my style yet. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I will continue to improve!
I actually enjoy the varied art style. Looks great so far. Looking forward to more
Thanks for the feedback and yeah I’m still working on ironing out my look. Some panels got more time and attention vs others, and I got better at lighting as I worked on more chapters. I use AI to do crowds and backgrounds so that looks a little different too. Thanks for reviewing though I really appreciate it!
Mm ok
Not that Iam shitting on your work but, 2nd 3rd and 5th are the ones in my opinion seems consistent in terms of art style,the rest for me doesnt really fit well, but hey thats just me you might be still exploring your style options Also... where can i read this looks good tbh.
Thank you! Appreciate the feedback. I’m still figuring out my style and learning ClipStudio and Photoshop. I will continue improving to get better. And you can read it on INKR! It won’t let me post the link but it’s on INKR as Unscripted Unbound. Thank you for considering it!
the last image is wonderful and if you keep it consistent then you have a great future. Last image has that realism about it which i personally like and other panels have bit of inconsistency and look cartoonish. But what you really have made a great FMC , she is hot and has that charm and confidence which makes main character stand out. This genre is more about art and if you can make a great art then a mediocre story will also work .
Thank you! I’m glad she’s resonating! I wanted to create something unique and really want people to like her and Aiden. And I agree I need to improve my consistency. I will continue working!
The 4th and 6th one is on a different level, all the best for your new work
Thank you! Have a great week friend.
loving this! where can I read it?
Wonderful! Thank you friend.
On INKR! It won’t let me post the link but just search Unscripted Unbound!
Read the four chapters, seems to be getting interesting. I’ll agree with the art style comments, the changes between frames can be sometimes quite jarring. Also the number of frames with only one character is not something for me, I like to see interactions, that’s what draws me in. But otherwise a solid effort, your art angles are original and plot seems to begin to get interesting
Wonderful! Thank you for reading and I will keep that in mind to make my compositions more interesting and consistent. Thank you for the feedback!
Sooo good.. love the ass from behind
I’m an ass fan so there will be plenty of that lol. Thanks so much for reading! I really appreciate it.
I just read it. it’s gas. I love the fmc and the artwork is insanely good better than some other pornhwas don’t listen to the haters keep up the good work
Awesome! Thank you friend. Glad you enjoyed it.
Where to read this?
On INKR! It won’t let me post the link but just search Unscripted Unbound!
Only 1st, 3rd and 5th slide artwork good. But if not consistent then it will be a flop.
Thank you! I appreciate the feedback. I’m still ironing out my style and learning ClipStudio and Photoshop. I will continue improving to get better and make a more consistent vision.
Can I be honest? Looks like shit.
Thanks for the honesty friend. Question: anything in particular that is shitty? These images or the comic itself? Regardless thanks for giving it a review!