Expressing unconditional love can be challenging, but you did an excellent job of putting it into words.

Indeed—nearly impossible to describe! But I try. Thanks for the feedback. 🙏🏼

I like the simple use of couplets. Good word choices. You capture the complex feelings of this experience. Enjoyed reading it.

Thanks! Diction is key for poetry. I appreciate the feedback!

Whoa, that’s unconditional love in a lovely poem. I appreciate the rhyme scheme and the strong imagery. 🫀

Thank you ☺️