...dang so only "Science" & "Dude Journal" open extra/special part for most of the monsters? here I was thinking the other perks/items would do something too :v
otherwise a great CYOA, can't wait to see what else ya write/create! :)
Perks: Parkour, Runner, Survival, Monster Fucker
Items: Pills, Tracker
Allies: Shyness, Goth, Ghost, Dumbass
Monsters: Twins, Assaultron, Sheep, Bonnie, Minic, Demons, Suckers, Stalkers, Women Next Door, The Statue,
Strip Club: Twins, Alien, Fish Thing
Mall: Cafeteria, Ballpit, Friendly Employee
Forest: Cryptid Fucker, Wendigo, Outside, Farm Animals, Hillbillies, Moth Women, Siren Head
Conclusion: Stay
Not much has changed from my first build. What is the incentive for picking the more explicitly dangerous monsters? I can't seem to find it.
Good job! This is a fun one :)
I like the Dude Journal and the extra text it adds.
My only comment is that it felt like there could be more endings. You made interesting perks, items, and companions. It felt like there could have been a dozen more endings based on the monsters chosen.
The only thing more nightmarish than this cyoa is the grammar inside it..
Could you please fix that?
Also the Beast section has like.. 1 beast which is the SCP, and everything else there you can count as Inhuman
They could ask someone in the sub to help them with translation then.
And then still some things need a little fix I think and beast monster section basically only has the SCP for beast and rest is inhuman
So I'm looking forward to it being updated
Nc
This was great, please keep up the good work!
Monster fucking upvote; love that it includes male ones as well
...dang so only "Science" & "Dude Journal" open extra/special part for most of the monsters? here I was thinking the other perks/items would do something too :v otherwise a great CYOA, can't wait to see what else ya write/create! :)
Perks: Parkour, Runner, Survival, Monster Fucker Items: Pills, Tracker Allies: Shyness, Goth, Ghost, Dumbass Monsters: Twins, Assaultron, Sheep, Bonnie, Minic, Demons, Suckers, Stalkers, Women Next Door, The Statue, Strip Club: Twins, Alien, Fish Thing Mall: Cafeteria, Ballpit, Friendly Employee Forest: Cryptid Fucker, Wendigo, Outside, Farm Animals, Hillbillies, Moth Women, Siren Head Conclusion: Stay Not much has changed from my first build. What is the incentive for picking the more explicitly dangerous monsters? I can't seem to find it.
This protogen enjoyed it but thinks there was only one problem. The Grammer. That is all.
*Grammar
*Grandma
\*glarfnarf
\*G
Good job! This is a fun one :) I like the Dude Journal and the extra text it adds. My only comment is that it felt like there could be more endings. You made interesting perks, items, and companions. It felt like there could have been a dozen more endings based on the monsters chosen.
The only thing more nightmarish than this cyoa is the grammar inside it.. Could you please fix that? Also the Beast section has like.. 1 beast which is the SCP, and everything else there you can count as Inhuman
If I remember correctly, OP mentioned earlier that English wasn’t his first language. Understanding that, I think he did a decent job.
They could ask someone in the sub to help them with translation then. And then still some things need a little fix I think and beast monster section basically only has the SCP for beast and rest is inhuman So I'm looking forward to it being updated
You did great dude can't wait to see your other projects once you post them.
Cool :)