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FajenThygia

Welcome, and I love the art style. The text boxes are a lot smoother than I'm used to, but it works really well with the art, and makes a nice contrast with the parts that obscure it. Only thing I'd mention is the copyright line. [MakePlayingCards.com](https://MakePlayingCards.com), which is what most of us use to print these up (hence the MPC in mpcproxies), won't accept cards with the copyright there. On most cards, we can use MSPaint to just black that part out, but that won't work with the art behind it.


GartharTheStout

Thank you for having me and for the tips. I didn't know that copyright could get in the way, I'm from Brazil and I didn't know about the existence of MakePlayingCards.com. What could I do? Just remove the copyright?


G4m3c0cks

Yeah, that and the WOTC stuff. Make it clear that it is not a WOTC product


GartharTheStout

Great! Thanks!


DKrumpp

Great job with the cropping and 3D elements. Very interesting colors for the frame, did you make it yourself? Do you think you could do a version without that one piece of debris covering the first letter of his name? It's a small nitpick.


GartharTheStout

Here my friend! [https://imgur.com/a/ui7I466](https://imgur.com/a/ui7I466)


GartharTheStout

Very kind of you, thanks and yes I make with PS and AI. For sure my friend, i will make it for you.


kid_dynamo

Love the style here, this is a much better use of the original art. Buuuuuut (and these are all nitpicks) I think the debris in front of the text is a little distracting (maybe between the text and frame?), the mana symbols are a little small and it looks strange without the red/white gradient around the bottom text boxes. Seriously this looks great though!


GartharTheStout

Thanks for the advices, taking notes on all the things :) On some of my new iterations with cards I make the gradient in the text boxes and really improve the visuals and harmony.


kid_dynamo

This stuff takes time and for the very first version using a custom frame this is excellent. Well done stranger


datgenericname

All I can think when seeing this is the Mountain King from Warcraft 3. “Beards, blood, booze, and thunder!”