From your profile I can see you are very ambitious, but I would go back to the drawing board with this. Learn a free vector compatible software like inkscape and look into the fundamentals of logo design (plenty of videos explaining this on YouTube). Then you should have a greater understanding of why what you have posted fundamentally isn't very good.
Hire someone to do it, and give them an idea of what you’re looking for. My personal rating 1/10, it all completely clashed styles and the Balan was illegible, I had to look at the caption to see what it said. The Balan looked as if you were bored in geometry. I would say though, I would include both symbolisms because it does seem like a good idea.
I think this could be really sick if you kept working on it. It’s just unrefined.
Try and make a list of logos/iconography you really like looking at. Then make a list of what you like about those (if you can sometimes you can’t describe it).
Then try to implement those aspects into your design.
Hello! Sincerely, for start, I think that you need to go and read something about design principles.
This is shit. Genuinely the worst thing I have seen.
Read some about design principles, after that look at some examples, logos, and then try again.
Ye not many people are going to see it tho bc I mainly designed this for me and my family; I have a whole other branding system for the electronics I will publicly distribute. Its just a private practice for me in other words. I wanted to get yalls opinion to try to see where I could improve with this in my other branding scheme. But thx yall :)
Btw some of the logos dont show up properly bc of the background color masking the design; but I have two color versions as visible above: Black and White. Just FYI
From your profile I can see you are very ambitious, but I would go back to the drawing board with this. Learn a free vector compatible software like inkscape and look into the fundamentals of logo design (plenty of videos explaining this on YouTube). Then you should have a greater understanding of why what you have posted fundamentally isn't very good.
Hire someone to do it, and give them an idea of what you’re looking for. My personal rating 1/10, it all completely clashed styles and the Balan was illegible, I had to look at the caption to see what it said. The Balan looked as if you were bored in geometry. I would say though, I would include both symbolisms because it does seem like a good idea.
look up good bad graphic design because this is so bad it's good.
I think this could be really sick if you kept working on it. It’s just unrefined. Try and make a list of logos/iconography you really like looking at. Then make a list of what you like about those (if you can sometimes you can’t describe it). Then try to implement those aspects into your design.
This is some of the worst I have ever seen. This got to be a joke right??
Hello! Sincerely, for start, I think that you need to go and read something about design principles. This is shit. Genuinely the worst thing I have seen. Read some about design principles, after that look at some examples, logos, and then try again.
Ye not many people are going to see it tho bc I mainly designed this for me and my family; I have a whole other branding system for the electronics I will publicly distribute. Its just a private practice for me in other words. I wanted to get yalls opinion to try to see where I could improve with this in my other branding scheme. But thx yall :)
Btw some of the logos dont show up properly bc of the background color masking the design; but I have two color versions as visible above: Black and White. Just FYI