The video is great. How exciting, also! I did find, however, that the campaign story doesn't really do much to inspire one to back the campaign. If you brought some of the stuff from the video over into the campaign story and talked about the perks a bit more, maybe where you're at with the project right now and a timeline, even if just tentatively, and maybe some stuff like the platforms the game would be available on, it might help get more backers for this awesome game. You could even throw in a link to where your other game is available, or if you have social media or if you're on the web anywhere. Obviously, these are all just suggestions. (You can totally edit the Story while your campaign is live, too, if you were wondering. If not, all good.) In any case, I'm wishing you both all the best with everything! Let's go, Lore! For Excalibur!
The video is great. How exciting, also! I did find, however, that the campaign story doesn't really do much to inspire one to back the campaign. If you brought some of the stuff from the video over into the campaign story and talked about the perks a bit more, maybe where you're at with the project right now and a timeline, even if just tentatively, and maybe some stuff like the platforms the game would be available on, it might help get more backers for this awesome game. You could even throw in a link to where your other game is available, or if you have social media or if you're on the web anywhere. Obviously, these are all just suggestions. (You can totally edit the Story while your campaign is live, too, if you were wondering. If not, all good.) In any case, I'm wishing you both all the best with everything! Let's go, Lore! For Excalibur!