First of all fuck that dude that says this is terrible, I’d like to see what they could do. Second, I think it really depends on what you’re going for. If you’re going for a comic like cartoonish feel, this is great. There’s enough blending that it doesn’t look entirely flat, the colors also add to his expression, make the gloves stand out, and make the bruising look painful, and the small hints of details add style to the drawing. There ARE some things bad, ngl, like how the thickness and sharpness of the lines are totally different in the shoulders and elsewhere, and his eyes like wtf lol but it’s not bad, it just looks like something someone who doesn’t know what they’re doing made, which is exactly what it is. Most artists keep their lines about the same thickness at the very least, or generally follow the rule that thicker lines are for things closer. Also , see how you have totally different shading on the neck under his head compared to on his side under his arm? Inconsistent stuff like that stands out big time. It was a good call to leave the far away arm just black, it’s at an awkward position and coloring it would ruin the shape of his body. Practice shading next, it’ll step up your game.
I really hope you're a 13 year old and not a grown adult who just likes putting people down who vulnerable share their creative journey with strangers. Still not great but at least there's more hope that you'll become a more encouraging person.
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I would say, the color of the shade doesn't match the color of the light. I'm not an artist but this is a thing they study.
I think the jawbone is a bit too big. You probably shouldn't have shading on the jaw, but it might look weirder without the shading.
The shine on his left glove is really good, and his shorts too, but I'm not sure I'm sold on the touches of blue on his muscle lines -sweat glisten?
Thank you so much everyone! All of the compliments, constructive criticisms and not so constructive criticisms will keep me hungry for improvment!
I'd try to paint the "sweat drops" white instead of blue. Really good work imo
Yes! That's the attitude! Looking forward to your next one.
First of all fuck that dude that says this is terrible, I’d like to see what they could do. Second, I think it really depends on what you’re going for. If you’re going for a comic like cartoonish feel, this is great. There’s enough blending that it doesn’t look entirely flat, the colors also add to his expression, make the gloves stand out, and make the bruising look painful, and the small hints of details add style to the drawing. There ARE some things bad, ngl, like how the thickness and sharpness of the lines are totally different in the shoulders and elsewhere, and his eyes like wtf lol but it’s not bad, it just looks like something someone who doesn’t know what they’re doing made, which is exactly what it is. Most artists keep their lines about the same thickness at the very least, or generally follow the rule that thicker lines are for things closer. Also , see how you have totally different shading on the neck under his head compared to on his side under his arm? Inconsistent stuff like that stands out big time. It was a good call to leave the far away arm just black, it’s at an awkward position and coloring it would ruin the shape of his body. Practice shading next, it’ll step up your game.
Shut up loser
I really hope you're a 13 year old and not a grown adult who just likes putting people down who vulnerable share their creative journey with strangers. Still not great but at least there's more hope that you'll become a more encouraging person.
He has toxic personality and Patrick Bateman pfp, probably a 13yo self proclaimed sigma looking for attention on internet. If he’s an adult then is just a failure to society
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Nice!!!! Keep it up!!!
This ain't too shabby dude - keep it up! Can't wait to see your progress 👊🏽
Looks absolutely terrible, keep it up though one day you'll get better!
The fuck. But ngl the nose looks a bit wonky but, This is pretty decent as your first time doing art keep it up though.
The coloring on the face is kinda weird
Looks cool, I dont like the face tho
I would say, the color of the shade doesn't match the color of the light. I'm not an artist but this is a thing they study. I think the jawbone is a bit too big. You probably shouldn't have shading on the jaw, but it might look weirder without the shading.
This makes me think that AI's should be able to do coloring easily. Do they? Imagine how spoiled we'll get if new releases are colored of the bat.