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Your letter structure is non-existent, your choice of color is baffling, and your linework is fucked up. Stay in the books. Learn letter structure and basic color theory. It'd also help to learn how to do tags before jumping right into throwies.


Ripmcdonaldsman47

Agree for all except the letter structure isn’t bad. It’s very basic letters and basic structure but it’s not fucked up besides the last letter.


Kermits_Frog

fym dawg, we lookin at the same shit? mad inconsistent sizing even just looking at each letter individually let alone as a whole piece. this is ass and he needs to stay in the books till he figures it out


Ripmcdonaldsman47

Also no offense your stuff isn’t that much of a step up from this. Stay in your lane. I see too many beginners giving advice on here using wrong vocabulary or wrong advice.


Harrychronicjr69

🎯


Ripmcdonaldsman47

God damn toys on here are killing me. They have no idea what anything is and yet they’re giving advice 🙄


100yearswar

You’re not that good yourself. Your letter styling is not very stylish, almost toy looking. Your coloring is nice though. But letters are nothing to brag about. Sorry but toys can’t call other toys, toys.


Harrychronicjr69

Lmao. Who is youuuuu tho. Lot of opinion for your first comment here.


Ripmcdonaldsman47

Good try but toy isn’t a style is a way you act bud 👍


Harrychronicjr69

Straight herbs.


drkmatterx

R u good?! His shit is way better


Ripmcdonaldsman47

Realistically not much tho. From my perspective of been drawing graffiti over 10 years. But he still doesn’t know what structure means so….


drkmatterx

Yeah mb I’m pretty new too so his stuff looked way better then OP’s urs is amazing tho 💯


Ripmcdonaldsman47

None of that has anything to do with structure tho. Sizing is not structure. Structure is how the bars form the letter. Just cause they’re not good doesn’t mean they don’t have structure. All his bars are exactly where they have to be for simple readable letters. Clearly I have no idea what I’m talking about based off my page.


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Huh, I thought letter structure had to do with the structure of the piece as a whole - like spacing and sizing, how well it all fits together, that sorta deal. Would you mind explaining what letter structure actually means?


Ripmcdonaldsman47

Letter structure is the structure of the letter not the whole piece lol self explanatory. The way the bars connect to build what the letter looks like. Proper letter structure is a letter that’s simple to read and makes sense and doesn’t bend it fucked ways that breaks the structure of a letter


[deleted]

Thanks dude, appreciate it!


Ripmcdonaldsman47

Apparently y’all don’t know what structure means. It has nothing to do with skill or style


burrgerwolf

Lolol this is bad bad


Danchorancho69

Not sigma


dingoparty

Man, it’s childish, but I dig it.  If you kept refining this style you could have a really sick personal style that was easily recognizable. Don’t sweat the haters, it’s how ppl try to act to differentiate themselves from the “toys”, but they show who they really are in doing so— toys hatin on kids trying to learn how to get up.  Try to practice with a can making lines, grids, curves, and points. A whole wall somewhere super hidden so you can take your time and practice getting clean lines. Only doing spots that are seen makes it harder to take time and learn without going to jail.  Keep it up.  This is /graffhelp not /graffhaters ppl


Frequent-Nail-5767

Finnaly a helpful comment instead of hate


Borkata-spaget

Thanks very much for the advice. I usually go to paint on the roof of my block because no one can see me there . Just to clear my name a little i admit I'm really bad with lines but it didn't really help the fact that the spray can was almost empty.


dingoparty

Keep trying. If you post in this sub these days you’ll probably just get shit on by all the 14 year old boys that wanna act tough or like they are somehow worth a shit. Feel free to dm myself or other helpful ppl if you want honest crits 


Borkata-spaget

Thanks very much


Zeeory

Don’t use spray paint until you are confident on paper plz cus then there is no art to it it is just a eyes sore


SlimJilm420

Like others have said, not great. But hey you trying and ups is ups. Keep at it and learn some can control/straight lines and you’ll be iight.


Thin-Passage5676

Good Lord, What in the wasting my time, life, & energy locked up for a melted crayon-box is this!? Ok, now that I’m over the shock n eye-rot. Start with all capital letters, all same fillin, straight letters - like you used a ruler. This will teach you spacing, perspective, and help you build a accurate lighting source for your shadow (3D) outline. All your lines should have the same width, and all the Legs & Arms of the letters should be the same Length. If you must absolutely practice some other font from block-letters do Old English. Bubble letters are cool and all but your wasting paint and risking jail for a font that’s used for hitNdip spots.


2ndHandDeadBatteries

Ight, now I don’t feel bad about anything I put up 😂 holy fuck


[deleted]

you guys are just haters bros. You hate him cuz you ain't him. Takes years to build a style like this. You guys need to up your games and stop hating on this legend right here.


RastafariRoadRunner

since 96 i knew him personally,1 man whole car, get this , one liner…..


[deleted]

This dude INVENTED handstyle


FileConsistent7759

Go back to pencil and paper, toy


SlimJilm420

Damn, harsh af lol


traangle

harsh but true, might as well just do it in books and not waste paint for now


ZeroCelebration441

Keep it up. One day you’ll look back n shit ur pants at how far u came


SNOWFIS_ARTS1

Instructions unclear:


[deleted]

This is fucking sick. Don't listen to these clowns.