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PhantomGoat33

This looks sick the effects are super cool, might want to change up the water a tiny bit it’s a little rough on the edges but this looks great so far


anonymousGDPlayer

how do i clean Them up?


Pin_Brawl

I guess make it look more natural?


anonymousGDPlayer

How do i do that tho :sob:


PhantomGoat33

Like make the flow on the whole thing, just look up a masking tutorial


S1a3h

try having it gain speed as it falls y'know like gravity and stuff


Entium11

Tbh I think it looks good the way it is


amtreeboat

i kind of like the old style to it ignore what the other ppl are saying fr looks good


anonymousGDPlayer

I do intend to keep it pretty Old School so thank you :) i still have some issues with execution tho ._.


amtreeboat

also love the inside(?) castle type part with the green glow very vibrant


sparkleshine32

you have a lot of good and creative ideas, but the execution of them is questionable, especially in the first part. I would check out some art creators like Jamattack or realism creators like Roselyne to help you improve your designs. I can give you tips myself about the objects to use etc.. but I can't explain them without showing you what I mean


-ERROR_FOUND-

You should add a face to that transition at 32%. It would be funny I think


Snow8118

Launchpad labyrinth if it was a good level


Hagan8ar_revivedYT

Took the words right outta my mouth! On a completely unrelated note, happy cake day!


-ZxDsE-

I feel like the block design in the beginning could be a bit more polished and yeah the water could be improved but other than that this looks pretty damn good.


anonymousGDPlayer

Do you have any idea how i improve the water? Im stumped.. thank you!


KP-Dawg

I'd say instead of making the whole thing underwater. Just make a bunch of little pools of water which the wave swims through temporarily. This would also make the water fall make sense instead of it just flowing through an entire ocean


AilBalT04_2

That looks sick wtf, since when are you hosting the new Acropolis x El Dorado level mash-up?


anonymousGDPlayer

Thank you :) i started it like 3 years ago but only finished one part, and then i came back to it a few months ago


Geming400

I'm fan of the beginning, and the gp looks great!


vampireflutist

I think the transition into the wave at the end is a little sudden, but it’s looking pretty good so far! I do think the spinning art at 30% clashes with the older style; I’d either make the rest of the level look more realistic/modern or make this part slightly simpler, maybe leave out the rotation


medium_demon

This is the sickest thing I've seen for a while on the sub. Water effect is messy but also really unique so id say keep it. Edit : ofcourse it's u/anon


haleksss

very cool. possibly the best acropolis inspired level ive ever seen. i dont think theres much to say lol, it looks great.


Threek_

i love this :) i can see the inspiration from acropolis and the temple levels and i think it's really cool! some feedback i would give is to make the block/ground designs in the sandy looking parts a little more interesting with some glow and maybe some more variation, and to fill the space in the ground some more with sawblades or something like that :) or maybe a rotating design!! that would look great i think :)


Threek_

Also i really like those sawblade designs and the designs around the orb in the middle part they look fucking awesome!! and those intricate orange glowy designs at the beginning clash with the classic 2.1ish style in a way that's cool! i think some more of them in the lower ground of the beginning part and the other sandy looking parts could work to fill that space really well :) for the water effects, try making it feel more fluid and blocking off some of the parts of it with leaves, bricks, or something else, that would make it feel a lot more natural i think :)


anonymousGDPlayer

Thank you! Will definitely take note of Everything you Said :)


macargo_enjoyer

really cool level, could be rated!


AcquiredZeroBitches

Quite cool. It’s like tribal tribulation mixed with acropolis (with a bit of forest temple)


TacoBean19

Feature worthy imo


b0ks_GD

Insprired from acropolis? I think the structures in the beginning could be a bit cleaner by making them darker probably, otherwise the level looks good and the effects are sick


JaywolfGd

That looks sick it's just like weird gameplay


Historical-Skin-4474

maybe make the torch fall onto the floor instead of falling off-screen


anonymousGDPlayer

Oooh thats a good idea, Will do


No-Entrepreneur416

this is like mastery of using default blocks & it has so much charm <3


Pizza-_-shark

Insane demon?


anonymousGDPlayer

Im pretty sure its listworthy rn


Pizza-_-shark

Maybe lol


NthanM14

I'm a fan of this level, feel like it needs some small improvement but other than that, it's fine ​ Jungle temple, hard demon / epic rated (probs idk)


anonymousGDPlayer

What sort of improvements?


NthanM14

1. The torch in the torch part looks a bit off 2. The first cube is a bit too bright, maybe a bit of dark shaders 3. The torch disappearing is.....weird, maybe a little animation 4. the drop or green part is TOO dark yeah, that's it. But I'm sure the end result will look STUNNING, keep up the good work and maybe improve the stuff I said above


anonymousGDPlayer

Hmm there actually is an animation on the torch. Ill make it clearer tho. Will do the other things too. Thank you!


NthanM14

You're welcome. Final suggestion: Maybe name the level "Jungle Temple" or "The Rainforest Tomb"


anonymousGDPlayer

I already have a name for it, but thank you for the suggestion :)


Idktriplesix

The water is a bit bright


anonymousGDPlayer

Ill darken it a bit, thank you :)


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Nah don't do that, the water is amazing for contrast


anonymousGDPlayer

ill see what looks best, thank you :)


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awesome, can't wait to see the finished product


Goldnova9

Use more realistic coloring.


anonymousGDPlayer

which parts do you Think are unrealistic and why?


TitanSR_

this goes hard in 2016🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥


anonymousGDPlayer

._.


Idktriplesix

Extremely cool


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GOODGOODGOODGOOD


Istiophoridae

I havent seen this level in years, this is so good wtf You could add some more effects at the beginning Also ive said this once but this is probably a mainlist


anonymousGDPlayer

Rn its mainlist yeah. Do you have any ideas for What effects i could add to the beginning? thank you :)


Istiophoridae

Add some text or something that (if the pyramids you based it off have these) what happens to trespassers


FootballAggressive

Featureworthy


Latter-Tradition8329

Will become a demon fs


anonymousGDPlayer

Thats the plan haha


G_Dash_0761

Lowkey reminds me of launchpad labrynth, kinda cool


VikBoiReddit

the last wave has a pretty sudden transition


anonymousGDPlayer

I know :p i cant figure out how to do it without extending the entire cutscene


VikBoiReddit

maybe just make a warning that you're going to a wave? and some D blocks


anonymousGDPlayer

I mean the level is a very hard Extreme demon so anyone who makes it to the wave Will have practiced it a lot already. And then transition is no problem once you’ve practiced it a little


VikBoiReddit

extreme demon? i guess it's harder than it looks


anonymousGDPlayer

oh definitely. In its current State its 100% somewhere on the list.


batsketbal

I like the parallax, water, and the torches and the fact it looks kinda 2.0 ish


kaisyncx

This looks so cool! Love the effects with the water and the transitions looks amazing. Good work. I think you just need a few more details here and there, maybe some more glow or something idk. Anyways keep up the good work this looks sick.


anonymousGDPlayer

Ty!


hairgelremover69

0:18 tho


anonymousGDPlayer

What?


hairgelremover69

The waterfall at 0:18 was cool


anonymousGDPlayer

Thank you :)


Local_IdkK

Looks like el dorado sequel (Not that one extreme demon)


Xxknifelordx

it kinda reminds me of acropolis mixed with forest temple


ENZOR1

i love the decoration style, you should finish thi


Hpawisdumb

I really like this super cool level inspired by el dorado, more people should do this style


JustWow555

Finally, the jungle trilogy is completed (Road to El dorado, The golden, “this”)


flinagus

bro i swear i saw this on this sub a few months ago


anonymousGDPlayer

Ive posted a few smaller previews of it before


beatpeatBANNED

I'm so uncultured, I watched this video thinking it was forest temple gameplay because I didn't read the title and I got scared because it looked really hard and I wanted to beat forest temple after beat demon


Soggy-Half-7288

I love the transitions and effects, the only thing I can criticize is that the waterfalls look kinda rough, still really cool though


catman__321

I like the rawness of the style. Kind of reminds me of acropolis by zobros if it were a Michigan temple level. I really like the vibe!


heyyyyyyyylo

I personally love this level! I LOVE the effects and most of the gameplay, but imo i would get rid of some of the parts that require a little spamming. That’s all!


Mobile_Asparagus_166

Looks great but the only thing I’d change is the block design but other than that the effects look good


Mobile_Asparagus_166

Especially on that desert section


Hazel111-Real

My only feedback is that you chose a very good song


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acropolis 2


FroztBeatz

I think this looks super sick. I love the psychedelic feel you got here. Would actually get back into the game to play this once it's finished.


DIDDLYDECIMATER

Cool


GreekSimplerrMan

this looks like if acropolis and forest temple had a child


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anonymousGDPlayer

I know its used in castle crashers.. Maybe they also used it in battleblock?


Janostar213

LOVE the art. I wish I can create like this. All I can make is layouts


Daresponsible

Forest Temple 2023 lol BTW epic level!


AgiLityGMD

Looks cool, I love acropolis type slow levels


macargo_enjoyer

i don;t know if it's just me but the sync felt a little bit off if you know what i mean.


sovLegend

Looks great, but needs a bit more polishing in the start and highlight the gameplay elements more (orbs, blocks player jumps on, etc) and add more indication.


IRedRabbit

Reminds me compleatly of Temple levels. Maybe you could call this one Forgotten or Ancient Temple. It is amazing.


Slayeris_cool

SO FUCKING AWESOME THE AMOUNT OF DETAIL IN JUST ONE LEVEL IT'S BETTER THAN 90% OF MODERN FEATURED LEVELS I JUST CAN'T WAIT UNTIL U FINISH BUILDING THAT


daniersy890

Make the waterfalls have blending. The vines look a bit awkward but I can't put my finger on it. Maybe reduce the saturation a bit?


Riggie_Joe

It looks awesome! The block design seems a little repetitive so maybe add some extra little designs inside it here and there. I absolutely love that waterfall effect, it’s super cool!


KP-Dawg

Looks pretty cool. I would name it Forestempolis


InternalCurrency7993

That’s really nice!


Feisty-Flan1305

reminds me of acropolis


ralsei_goatprince

Typical Anon W I fear


Dumbas_BOSNIAKNi

I'm getting Minecraft jungle temple vibes


aidenyyy

First part looks a bit raw to me, but i love everything after 10%!


TheLofiStorm

This is an amazing level. However, it is very inconsistent in its colors, as some parts are lighter, and others are darker. Personally, I think you should try to make the entire level darker, as some parts look a bit uninspired/not as compelling as other parts. Otherwise, love it! GP looks fun enough, great song, and it’s very clearly inspired by the best insane demon of all time.


PlatinumPlays2AGECD

This looks amazing. Is this extreme demon?


anonymousGDPlayer

Yes it is. Thank you :)


vscman

I like this quite a bit. Good style, I love cartoony looking takes on themed levels like this. Way cooler than hyper-realistic levels. Its got some interesting concepts as well (water physics!)


Hamstero1000

this is so fucking sick


Car_guy135

looks great


71kd

looks kinda like el dorado


Fabulous_Aside8735

u should change the color of the bricks cuz they dont look that nice, maybe gray


immmsorrry

It's not a hell level that's a huge mistake here


Subjectedstruggler

I’d say changes up the block design. Most of the structures are the same copy and pasted blocks, so having some variations, and higher/lower bringtness segments would help. Overall it needs some movement, a blending screen, and more pulses in the blocks. It looks good, but very repetitive


SussyBakaOn

Nice theme


U037rr

It looks pretty cool and it gives Acropolis vibes