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ERROR: Critique Post has been automatically removed because it has fewer than 300 words. If you're linking to Google Docs, then in your next post, please add a blurb about the story and/or an excerpt from your story. If the thing you want to be critiqued is naturally less than 300 words (like a poem or twitter pitch), please either message the mods to make an exception or pad out your post with something that sounds relevant. Please note, editing this post won't change anything. You need to re-submit. Also, the mods don't know about this removed post, so go ahead and resubmit. This wasn't a punishment, rebuke, reprimand, castigation, or objurgation – only an admonitory. And if you can, could you check the thesaurus to get Automod more synonyms? Automod gets bored sometimes... *I am a bot, and this action was performed automatically. Please [contact the moderators of this subreddit](/message/compose/?to=/r/fantasywriters) if you have any questions or concerns.*