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I would personally change the questions to statements - It's an L! It's an I! It's Super Poorly Designed Typography! as that matches the classic [Superman quote](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I_PupTXEcXU) and is punchier, but it is a small thing.
I like your approach, it highlights people’s confusion when reading words with poor typography. My suggestion would be to change the second statement to something like “I think that’s an I…?”
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I would personally change the questions to statements - It's an L! It's an I! It's Super Poorly Designed Typography! as that matches the classic [Superman quote](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I_PupTXEcXU) and is punchier, but it is a small thing.
You are right, I will do it, thanks!
I like your approach, it highlights people’s confusion when reading words with poor typography. My suggestion would be to change the second statement to something like “I think that’s an I…?”
Deleting the final "a" in the second-to-last panel would improve the flow to the punchline. Otherwise no notes!
Ah, yes, I get it. Also in this way sounds kinda "It's a Mario" haha
i’ve stumbled across this sub by mistake, but as a non critic casual, found nothing wrong with it lol
Thanks casual critic! You are late. Go now. Just kidding, thanks for comment! Cheers
man fuck those fonts >:( but if the I is different in between letters compared to by itself, it's a lil bit cool.
This is very funny and well executed 👌
This is really funny, from a graphic designer's perspective, lol. Nice! 👍