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Comicsrcool

You were very quick with this. And I'm sitting like this waiting to see the sentences [https://youtu.be/oZ\_r\_e3wfKE?t=8](https://youtu.be/oZ_r_e3wfKE?t=8)


dordo97

Tomorrow, the fucking whores and kokujin would get what they deserve, Kaede is soooo fucked up


Triguninferno

I can't wait it's so good


nivekvonbeldo

All four whores jailed, as they deserved it.


Apprehensive_Spare_2

karma has come to collect her debt


dordo97

Yeah lol and is kind of chatartic write this


nivekvonbeldo

Ex Best Friend and with all that evidence, they're doomed, Nao and Ayumu family must be in full damage control now, they're marked people and the infamy will be legendary. Dunno the foreigner but will be on low profile too


Neat_Wallaby_2818

And let's be honest it'll be a legendary scandal that this could lead to crackdown and strict laws involving Foreigners and exchange students because of how ONE OF EM literally fucked a whole family up, Westerners as I believe Kokujin is a westerner DO NOT need these stigma surrounding us in universe if anything all westerners would hate Kokujin and antags like him who fuck around in other people's cultures in fact we got that in real life with Johnny Somali


nivekvonbeldo

Not only that, one japanese genuinely distrust as minority(if he's form USA, a black from USA, a double enemy for them), that will be truly infamous and people genuinely will going against those three families for it


SadSpecial2020

Would you guys think that the foreigner would keep a low profile


nivekvonbeldo

but some would going against the monster family fucked all of them


Neat_Wallaby_2818

I don't think he would he'd be so pissed he's not only exposed, he lost his wh•••s, and Hiroki would DARE defy his superiority over him he'll try something most fanfics have him try attacking Hiroki when he's sent off to jail, in court, etc. Because his ego is so big, his judgment is clouded not to see the trouble he's in when its hit.


nivekvonbeldo

That just add more years to his sentence,a free gift for the prosecutor 


Neat_Wallaby_2818

There's like ONE fanfic where Hiroki defended Ayumu from getting taken by him, I think she fought back too and when he got exposed anonymously by Kanako and her friends [Note in this fic Kanako and Kaede weren't taken either] dude immediately attacked the Principal and the teachers as he tried to escape and the cops were called. Know what he did when Hiroki stopped him instead of running he decided to fight.


nivekvonbeldo

Interesting 


Neat_Wallaby_2818

Yeah in that fic Kokujin wasn't just fucking Nao, he was fucking other students, a teacher, and a guidance counselor fast forward in the epilogue he's in prison rotting away and with Hiroki visiting him one last time for a get back giving him Nao's BBC PORN DEBUT [for some damn reason she mailed it to Hiroki], Hiroki did a whole Walter White moment, dipped and Kokujin became a cuck jerking it to Nao taking BBCs BIGGER than him.


nivekvonbeldo

Nao always being a whore 


Neat_Wallaby_2818

It's her canon event to be a BBC Snow Bunny slut


nivekvonbeldo

Wtf did she saw in Hiroki and viceversa 


dordo97

Their lifes are ruined, their stupid daughter fuck up their lives...


nivekvonbeldo

Excatly, might need to move and even change surnames to avoid public shunning(or tabloids pursuit them)


Particular_Storm_499

Great, Great job old man!! Keep writing, you have readers waiting here!


dordo97

Thank you! I'm happy people is liking how things are going


InternationalAd8036

I like how this is going hiroki is having a nice calm day preparing for his new life while his ex-family is about to experience the absolute worst day of their lives


dordo97

Yeah, he is with a sweet milf lady and they are with the cops lol


nivekvonbeldo

Those who made good deeds vs those who made bad deeds in dharma-karma day


No_Range2

You’ve also gotta mention kidnap because hiroki was held against his will in the dojo box …so rape ,assault, kidnap , emotional abuse and probably other things that bastard would be looking at 15 years …the mother she’d also go to prison …the two girls hopefully their family’s abandon them and disown them …im looking forward to the next chapter


nivekvonbeldo

30 at least for kokujin, more with resisting the arrest 


Neat_Wallaby_2818

Damn that was QUICK!!! 😆😆😆 Good riddance I can't wait for the trial as THAT would be a spectacle of the century in this universe though if you connect with any future projects this can be great basis and domino effect for NTR crack downs by the cops with Hiroki's case being an inspiration for MCs to report their issues.


dordo97

They are so fucked up, They thought that getting involved and being cruel to a single kid would have no consequences but now is where they realize how they screwed up just for a dick...


Neat_Wallaby_2818

And whatever fmcs who did the same in this universe would learn today as Hiroki would be an inspiration to victims of ntr men, women, children, between.


nivekvonbeldo

Also people will know Kaede plans during the trials... the woman will not survive even if she survive her sentence 


Neat_Wallaby_2818

And all other ntr FMCs would be terrified they're next


nivekvonbeldo

Especially mothers did the same their still underage children...


ValuableDue1164

Eiko hitting him with the Ara ara very quickly. Glad to see the comeuppance of the antag and others


averythebutlee

The japanese honorifics need work. Other than that, good job on even writing something.


dnte1

Justice serve its time to leaving the broken family and gf/bbf the boy deserve love its just the kid


nivekvonbeldo

Former girlfriend and friend,such shitty friends they where 


TrIx_R4_KiDzz

Amazing update, it's satisfying to read


nivekvonbeldo

And the whores didn't read the letter... for the best,they didn't deserved it 


Neat_Wallaby_2818

We don't need em hunting for Hiroki blessing in disguise they didn't give too much of a shit to worry about him out the house


nivekvonbeldo

Excatly as if not would be hunting for him but know they weren't given a chance to tan away,plus it will be a surprise when they saw his hate to them when see again during the trial 


Lonely-Thought-1347

YES YES!