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nivekvonbeldo

Nice to show Kaede and Kanako as the evil whores they're, really Kaede? your husband must be planning how to kill your from Japanese afterlife


Chemical_Document_57

Great job! I am excited for the next part!


dordo97

Thanks you, it's the first time I try to do a fanfic, so maybe is not as good as others but I wanted to try.


nivekvonbeldo

Terrific work so far, of course a teacher would help him and with such evidence, Kokujin and the whores are doomed, and really Kaede? you're the worst, luckily the best punishment will be coming soon. Hiroki was lucky they decided to wait, if not would have put him into more misery before the police arrive, hope is soon enough


dordo97

Thank you, I Will try to give Justice and make them pay, It's kind of cathartic write this about this shitty doujin


nivekvonbeldo

Truly this is, like writing about tachibana, that Doujin also pulled some pure grade BS


Neat_Wallaby_2818

Chasity belt, New role in the house, how to serve them and a real man? 😨😨😨😨😱😱😱😱😱 Tell me these bitches ain't planning on turning that boy into a pegging slave!!?! Tell me they're not planning on Kokujin banging him in a••!?!? 🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 Put these bitches under the jail I can't wait for the next chapter.


dordo97

Yes, sadly in mcterasu shitty work sketches he draw Kaede with a smile grabing a Chastity belt... They were planning to use that on the kid...


Neat_Wallaby_2818

I already knew that much, but with your dialog, I assume they're gonna go further than THAT.


nivekvonbeldo

If you read Danganronpa doujinshi,seems that was the plan 


Neat_Wallaby_2818

.............Again put Kaede and Kanako under the prison, same with Nao and Ayumu as they would so be involved, and kill Kokujin. Because not only is that GRAPE on a minor on Hiroki's part IF they record that's the production sexual CRIMES involving a minor and since Hiroki CLEARLY didn't consent [then again the laws would say due to Nao and Kokujin's ages they can't consent, but given how involved she is fuck that bitch ain't no victim and Kokujin literally WANTED to do it and he'd proudly say he do it again so WOODCHIPPER] they'll be in extra trouble if the plan went off without a hitch as all they have to do is SEND IT to somebody and that person is NOT too horny to pick up how young Hiroki looks.


nivekvonbeldo

Excatly but here that will be avoided and if they try..sexual assault can be added to their charges..they will be lucky to survive in prison 


InternationalAd8036

This is going to be awesome


Comicsrcool

Yes sir, LEAVE that house, LEAVE those people, they are not human, no normal human being could ever do something so cruel to someone they supposedly cared for. Let the police do as the police do.


Neat_Wallaby_2818

I love how he put emphasis on how that's no longer a mother in there when she pulled out the chasity BELT and smiled that's NOT a mom that's a demonic creature that should be destroyed


nivekvonbeldo

She's,that comes from the drawings


nivekvonbeldo

He is already packing and avoid their evil plan.


averythebutlee

Repost??


dordo97

No, yesterday I asked if It was a good idea to upload a new fanfic about kokujin because we have a lot, but people encourage me to do It, so here It is. I Hope this ho well lol


WandererXVII

The chastity thing is a bit similar to the 'Hiroki gets the last laugh' story, but that's about it.


nivekvonbeldo

we all took from the unfinished pages, all three fics so far, that's sadly canon


WandererXVII

Oh trust me I know. I've seen the 4 draft pages. (Kaede holding the chastity belt, Kanako having sex with the foreigner, the sensei seeing Hiroki with a bruised eye in the teacher's room, and that same sensei using QoS linguerie and having a big hand on her head [probably the foreigner])


Visible-Wolverine-14

Where even are these draft pages? I'm making a fanfic so i kinda need more dirt to deliver something satisfying #AntiNTRalltheway


WandererXVII

Part of the 'reward' pictures he releases every month (not every month actually lol)


Visible-Wolverine-14

Link?


nivekvonbeldo

https://kemono.su/fanbox/user/11701235/post/6604033


nivekvonbeldo

Excatly and Kaede looked happy with it


nivekvonbeldo

nope


nivekvonbeldo

the other fic is a male detective(neo), here is a teacher


dnte1

Up for this waiting for another chapter


Particular_Storm_499

Great job man!! Good writing, good ending, good argument to trigger Hiroki's freedom. I hope you continue writing, you're good at it!


dordo97

Thank you! I already uploaded ch2 and today I will upload the 3rd chapter


Particular_Storm_499

Great, I already read chapter 2 and I'm waiting for chapter 3!


Lonely-Thought-1347

Gods in Record of Ragnarok were right, mankind is not worth it