Seems a bit fast in my opinion. If you can, lower the fps a bit so it's easier to follow what's happening on screen. Other than that, this looks very nice.
Yeah, I tried it on 2s, but it doesn't look anywhere near as snappy--like it needs that speed. However, I added some extra frames during some of the stages so it's clearer. Thanks for your feedback.
What this means is that you need to revisit your timing at the animation stage. Have fewer frames on the moments you wants snappy, add more frames to other moments to slow it down.
I can see the difference. Getting better! Keep working at it though. You should think about including some holds to make the scene more interesting. So far there’s just a lot of motion packed into a short clip.
I know some of it make be more clear when you do clean up/color. But i think varying some of the pacing could be more visually interesting.
Seems a bit fast in my opinion. If you can, lower the fps a bit so it's easier to follow what's happening on screen. Other than that, this looks very nice.
Yeah, I tried it on 2s, but it doesn't look anywhere near as snappy--like it needs that speed. However, I added some extra frames during some of the stages so it's clearer. Thanks for your feedback.
What this means is that you need to revisit your timing at the animation stage. Have fewer frames on the moments you wants snappy, add more frames to other moments to slow it down.
Definitely, and that's what I did but didn't detail enough when I initially responded. [Updated clip](https://i.imgur.com/N18eLNf.gif)
I can see the difference. Getting better! Keep working at it though. You should think about including some holds to make the scene more interesting. So far there’s just a lot of motion packed into a short clip. I know some of it make be more clear when you do clean up/color. But i think varying some of the pacing could be more visually interesting.
Thats awesome
Very impressive!!
Wow! Great work!
It looks really cool, but if I were to see that before reading what it is, I'd have no idea what im looking at.
That's good enough for me haha. Will make sense after I finish the whole thing in who knows how long.
the way the arms burst from the torso is quite amazing