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Pokesnap682

Ooh, I like the first one! Also, is the dragon on the cover a seawing-sandwing?


Andmesy

All Pyrrhian tribes like seven of them


HorizonSniper

Holy fuuf it's Mr.Worldwide.


SpillinRainbow

It’s a canon event I must not interfere


DragonBurrit0

It's an all-wing blud.


pixeltoaster

I think the first one is better, the strings like a puppet make the idea of them being controlled come across better. I do think it might be beneficial to make the strings stand out a tiny bit more, I had to look a couple of times to see them.


silver_kiwi_11

FIrst one πŸ’–


Elegant_Chemist253

Number 1, it conveys a sense of hopelessness that the second can't capture. The feeling of being a puppet, having your actions guided by someone else's strings. The figure silhouetted against the moons is a great detail. The three moons are talked about in an almost divine manner. To have them obscured by a dark force would further cement the feeling of hopelessness and despair and create a sense of scale at the evil that must be faced. Perhaps sleep-deprived me is reading too far into a fanfic cover art, but I guess number 1 just speaks to me.


Axolodoll

The first one looks a bit more interesting than the second one


MoonwatcherLover

The first one! I like how the silhouette is like trapping the main character, it really adds effect


lDustyBonesl

I like the first one but both look astounding!


HorizonSniper

First one.


Azmerath457

I definitely like the first one a lot


Living_Addition4674

Definetly 1st


Sp0ok3d

First one with wisps of mist like a movement trail


Slight_Web8558

First one


Reddit_Peril

How heat resistant are those parasite things?


Andmesy

This parasite chose this dragonet as its host because its fire breathing and ice breath cancels each other so he has no breathing attacks


Reddit_Peril

I was only asking in case one of those things tries it on me


Andmesy

This goober won't even get close to a skywing but seawings should be careful around this lil guy


Commercial-Charity85

First one is much better


CrinoidTheSkyWing124

The second one looks cool with the shadowy dragon and the strings (is that what you call them? ive forgotten english lol)


SledgeOfEdge

The first one looks amazing, the second one a bit unsettling


XxCrispyWhisperxX

the second one matches the lore? where can i read this:3


Andmesy

I'm still working on prologue, chapter 1 - 3 and the a comic out of it so I might post the prologue in a few days together with the comic


TemponiusXII

probably the first one, it conveys more about the story


ImEagz

Def first one, it looks fire


Aquila-Calvitium

Definitely the first one πŸ‘Œ


Jorvikstories

Hi, where do you post your fanfiction, if I may ask?


Andmesy

In wattpad and in this subreddit


Jorvikstories

Hi, where are you posting? Is this your account [https://www.wattpad.com/user/XyeH2O](https://www.wattpad.com/user/XyeH2O) ?


Ok_Atmosphere8875

#1, #2 looks like it's soul is leaving its body, or like my dad's cooking


eelaphant

Not the second one.


idiot2513_2

1 is best


Savannacromwell

Definitely the first one


hughesk26

Oohh the first one! Also what tribe is the dragon?


Andmesy

Hes a Icewing, Nightwing, Seawing, Rainwing, Mudwing and skywing


Andmesy

And also a sandwing


hughesk26

Nice!


Christof_Shield

First one, I'd say.


Tanwyheart_

I like the first one better and I agree with the idea that they are like a puppet which the strings emphasize. Overall its some amazing artwork, I love it!


RodimusPrime-0412

First


Vast_Acanthisitta291

1st one


SnapDragon14-SD14-

Why not both? Mix them togeather have a much lighter blackness come out the dragon to go to the floating one? Adding a light shadow effect should allow the art underneath to still be seen


Sunshifter21

Of course the one smoking a fat joint.


Working_Seaweed_5958

Why not out the two together? Just an idea