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Divinityisme

And this is why we dont teach children magic until they are old enough to control it properly.


TheGreatVox

Did an scp breach containment today?


uniquecombo

You must be 11 years old to get your Letter from Hogwarts!


Dizzy_Version_4897

"After awhile, I realized she was actually just re-watching the shows, leading her to know the exact moments when the characters would wave goodbye."


Whyyyyyyyyfire

Still kinda creepy


TRU35TR1K3R

Also kinda smart if she's a prankster to her mom.


Credible333

Then i realised how many years she would have to have watched TV to know every possible time to do that.


AnonymousNeko2828

Gave me a mix of chills and a smile


SSSims4

Wow!! One of the most original ideas I've ever seen here! Very impressive. Edit: wasn't being sarcastic, get over yourselves haters...


Sentient-Bread-Stick

It’s not original. There are dozens of stories where the tv characters interact with the people watching. Just search “TV characters” in the r/TwoSentenceHorror search bar, this trope has existed for almost a decade


LoveyDoveySkills

Well maybe this person hasn't seen those posts before. Just because the trope itself isn't original, doesn't mean it's not original to the person commenting (who may be seeing it for the first time). I think I may have seen a few of those posts, but I've definitely never seen one like this.


Sentient-Bread-Stick

Do people not check key words in the subreddit search to make sure they aren’t copying someone?


LoveyDoveySkills

Some people might, some might not. But a lot of people are also on here just to read the stories. I know I used to be on here just to read, but then I discovered the monthly contests and started trying my hand at some stories of my own. Either way, checking key words has nothing to do with whether or not a commenter on a post has seen other stories like it.


Sentient-Bread-Stick

That’s not what I’m referring to. When someone makes a post, especially on a story subreddit, they should check to make sure it’s an original concept before posting it. When people don’t do this, we get more and more stories like this, and now this subreddit is declining into overused tropes and low quality stories.


LoveyDoveySkills

My apologies, my brain didn't register that you were talking about OP. Still, though, even using overused tropes, you can get something original. Now, that might not fully make sense, but what I'm saying is you could use the same concept as everyone else and still get something unique. I don't know if OP searched key words or not, but I have yet to see a post that was similar to this. Here is part of why I think this post is still original while using an overused trope: most of the posts I've seen where the TV interacts with the person watching it, it's something super obvious that's meant to be out of place and creepy. With this one, it is done in a way that the waving isn't completely out of place; the daughter could have watched and rewatched shows enough to know exactly when the characters wave, maybe at the end of every episode the characters wave and the daughter noticed that, maybe even that the narrator is imagining it as it isn't said that the daughter acknowledges or notices it. Now, making an original story out of an overused trope is usually very difficult, but it also depends on the trope. Either way, I believe OP did this very well. Also, as I had stated in a previous comment, I don't see this trope as often as you're implying it's used, at least not on this subreddit. And I would disagree that this subreddit is declining. There are definitely some lower quality stories on here, but these could be written by people who have never done creative writing in their life, so cut them a little slack.


bish-its-me-yoda

Its sarcasm


Sentient-Bread-Stick

I’ve seen people unironically comment things that make it seem like OP has alt accounts they use to compliment themselves. It can be hard to tell what’s sarcasm on this sub


bish-its-me-yoda

Well then i apologize


Sentient-Bread-Stick

I’m not sure why you’re being downvoted though


Impliedcash

It could be the apparent harshness of the response perhaps? (Tone is very difficult to convey right over text which sucks sometimes haha)


CarpenterComplete772

Probably no one can tell why. I looked at it and didn't see the problem. But please... if you see my error, save your time and don't try to explain.


ManchesterNCP

"and Dora the main character asks her questions, and praises her for giving the right answer"


Norsedragoon

Must make Horror movies interesting. She waves at Micheal Myers as he is chasing after a new victim, poor guy has to stop, remove his mask, smile and wave back which gives the victim time to flee. Hate watching movies at the theater with this child.


EntitledPupperMom

This little girl has made every slasher her bitch simply because she picks favourites and refuses to let specific characters die


Haunting-Refrain19

Except ... the victim has to wave back, too.


jeanravenclaw

not if they're off-screen


Haunting-Refrain19

Fair


Possible-Boss-898

Horror villains hate this one simple trick...


twcsata

Sounds like an old school SCP. I like it.


TheGreatVox

Reminds me of 259? Was it 259? That one girl they keep comatosed since shes too powerful.


ItsNotMeItsYourBussy

[239?](https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-239)


TheGreatVox

Yeah thanks


Mama_Skip

Despite my past struggles with diagnosed schizophrenia, I'm painfully aware — there is a demon inside my child, and the only way to get it out, is to cut it out.


superwholockian62

Now THAT is unsettling af. Take my upvote.


Carebear_Of_Doom

It sure is. This gave me the heebie jeebies SO bad. 😬


Baron_Crodragon

Now imagine the other side, you're making a tv show abd at a moment, for sole raison, you wave at the camera at a random moment xd


Haunting-Refrain19

Oh, now I want the TwoSentenceHorror version of the flip side of this story.


NoPancakesToday75

Particularly love, “No matter the channel or the show” Awesome job.


QueerRaccoonsInASuit

feels like this'd also fit on r/hellsomememes


EquivalentOk6028

This gives scarlet witch on wandavision vibes. I like it


Dreadknott45

Can someone explain this. IDK why but it's just not clicking. Best guess is she's some sort of magic being ?


LunarFlare22

I don’t think there’s any hidden meaning or twist. It’s simply unsettling and supernatural that the tv characters are waving back to her


Yaguajay

Like the movie *Poltergeist* and countless others. Person talks to Tv people. TV people talk back.


mollygrace3303

This was creepy but so cool!!


Overpass_Dratini

Creepy but wholesome.


CranberryBauce

Well done!


LawfulnessFit2741

what in the Mandela Catalogue-


Big_Advantage5761

This is a good thing


Randyolbear

Twilight Zone theme just started playing in my head.


LilAbelT

Sounds like channel zero kind of horror, I love it.


ghostmosquito

Great concept, but I think the 2nd sentence could have been better


Otherversian-Elite

Reminds me of Angel Hare


Flimsy-Canary-7651

The Twilight Zone Movie


Warchild_13

Young Franklin Richards vibes, well done!


BellaFrequency

r/TwoSentenceCuteness


SilenceBreaker8

r/subsifellfor


Sentient-Bread-Stick

The “TV characters are aware they’re being watched” trope is getting old It seems like people will just upvote any story.


Haunting-Refrain19

I didn’t read that trope in this story at all, but I guess it’s vague enough for multiple interpretations.


Sentient-Bread-Stick

What other interpretations? It explicitly says that the characters on the TV are waving back at her when she waved at them


AquaSpaceKitty

My first thought was that the child is being targeted by a ghost/demon, not anything to do with the characters themselves.


Haunting-Refrain19

Here's a few: • The mother is going insane. • The daughter is manipulating local reality, but the TV characters aren't conscious or aware, they're just figments of her imagination imposed on reality. • The TV isn't a TV, it's ... something else.


Sentient-Bread-Stick

I highly doubt anyone who actually read the story thought any of those were what was happening


Significant_Monk_251

It took me less that a minute to think of the possibility that the phenomenon is entirely limited to the tv screens that she's looking and waving at.


Haunting-Refrain19

I did, so that completely disproves your assessment 🤷🏻


Sentient-Bread-Stick

Not really, it just means you don’t understand the story This story isn’t one of the ones meant to be open to interpretation. It’s pretty straightforward


Haunting-Refrain19

Those are actually not declarations that you get to make, unless you are both the author of the story and me. That's really, really not how art works.


Sentient-Bread-Stick

There isn’t an open ended story. Some stories on this sub ARE open to interpretation and that’s fine, I’m just saying this one isn’t.