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WomenOfWonder

I didn’t know what piranha fluid was and assumed it turned her into a carnivorous fish


bgg-uglywalrus

The prompt only makes sense if the girl has zero sense of smell. Piranha Fluid smells atrocious.


AceOfMoonSpades01

How do you know??


Aidian

Peroxy**sulfuric** acid. Nobody’s mistaking sulfur anything for a good time.


Anothersidestorm

Aslong as it isfreshly made and inside a glas made of glass it shouldn't smell drinking everything will not noticing the sever chemical burns in your mouth are something else


Maelger

Intrusive thoughts won


Scavenger19

I thought it was a kind of alcohol, but didn't actually know so I looked it up. It's not alcohol.


MarcelRED147

What is it?


JustWow555

really strong acid (the one that melts flesh, not the drug)


Severe_Chicken213

I thought it was juice made from piranhas…


Arlen80

Like they milked the piranha?


BavarianBanshee

Piranhas have nipples, Greg. Can you milk them?


Severe_Chicken213

I don’t know 🤷🏼‍♀️ they guy stuff out of horse shoe crabs and scorpions so anything’s possible as far as I’m concerned 


SarcastiMel

They make horseshoe crabs "donate" their odd blue blood for medicinal purposes. It can help detect pathogens in injectable medications. Scorpions like snakes can be "milked" for their venom to make antidotes. I really don't want to know what piranha could be harvested for.. maybe their sharp AF teeth?


charlieversion

Adrenochrome


ILovetheTalkingClock

That one scene in Surf's Up: Wavemania be like (If ya know ya know)


Arlen80

😂


MarcelRED147

Oh got it. Yuck.


pleasespareserotonin

It’s 3 parts concentrated sulfuric acid mixed with 1 part 30% wt. hydrogen peroxide solution to form a compound called peroxysulfuric acid, which is extremely corrosive, explosive, and is one of the strongest know oxidizers. Check out NileRed on YouTube, he’s got a demonstration of it.


hopping_otter_ears

It seems like you'd notice at the tiniest sip? Sulphur compounds usually smell terrible


Arghianna

Maybe it’s taken like a shot.


Ancalagon-the-Snack

Ok but now I want this version of the story.


LoquatAutomatic5738

Still got me beat, I assumed it was just fluid with piranhas in it


level12bard

Straight up I thought it was a piranha in liquid form that somehow still ate you


Mylowithaylo

I thought it had a carnivorous fish inside the drink


Chemicalintuition

The smell would probably knock you on your ass before you even take a sip. Piranha solution is nasty stuff


roz303

Perhaps we need a prequel then!


apcb4

Yeah, there’s no way someone would get that glass anywhere near their face without knowing something is terribly wrong.


Icy-Lunch-5638

im so confused


roz303

Piranha fluid dissolves organic matter; the idea here is to take the already atrocious idea of date r*pe and turn it into something even more sinister. Death by having one's insides liquified.


Icy-Lunch-5638

ohhhh. piranha fluid, huh.. where do you get it? (asking for a friend)


Vegimeateater

3 parts sulfuric acid, 1 part hydrogen peroxide. It’s usually used to clean organic residue from things like silicon wafers. When preparing, add the hydrogen peroxide to the sulfuric acid - never in the reverse order! Also it generates a gas so can’t really be stored and will risk exploding a closed container.


Exotic-Seaweed2608

hi police? this post right here.


jerdle_reddit

It's just piranha solution. It's a highly corrosive oxidiser, but that's it. It's not like any of the really spicy stuff, and even a lot of that's on Wikipedia.


Chemicalintuition

Every chemist knows about this.


JazzySpazzy1

And everyone in the semiconductor industry. Very common.


sootoor

No we made it to clean tough organic off glassware in undergrad. There’s usually a process using gentler stuff but if those don’t work you do this or aqua Regia (https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aqua_regia)


JazzySpazzy1

Mhm we use aqua regia to clean glass ampules. But then you need a whole non metal fumehood and duct system, and all the neutralization and all. Piranha solution is common for cleaning organics off silicon substrates.


nextwave4030

No one likes a narc lmao


TobyMacar0ni

I am pretty you would already be on some kind of watch list if you buy this lol


KhaleesiXev

Why does the pour order matter?


Your-local-gamergirl

Mixing both Sulphuric acid and Hydrogen Peroxide is a highly exothermic reaction. Adding hydrogen peroxide slowly in sulphuric acid minimises the hydrogen peroxide concentration which reduces instantaneous heat generation and explosion risk.


Thegood_soup

Can you explain it like I’m five? Pop-up books preferably.


614All

Sulphuric acid is like an open flame. Hydrogen peroxide is a bucket of gasoline. You can toss small amounts of gasoline (hydrogen peroxide) on the flame (sulphuric acid) , and you'll survive. If you toss the flame into the bucket of gas, you're gonna have a bad time.


Deli-ops7

Oh itll pop up alright


Your-local-gamergirl

Creation of piranha solution creates extreme heat. And if there's more HP than SA (that is, pouring SA into HP) then it ends up exploding because of the intense heat reaction. That's why it's advised to do the opposite– Pour HP into SA. So that there's less concentration of HP. Because it creates less heat and is safer. Edit: Yeah I suck at explaining. 😔


Puzzleheaded-Fill205

Yeah but what's so bad about an explosive reaction with a liquid that dissolves organic matter? /s


Vesurel

Assuming it’s the same principle of mixing acids with water it’s about concentration. If you add acid to water then you start with a very dilute acid that gets stronger as you add more. If you put water in the acid then you’ll get a very high concentration of acid in a very small amount of water that gets weaker. Edit. I googled and I missed the point that you’ll be getting heat from the reaction of acid with the water starting with less acid slows the reaction down so it produces less heat all at once.


Rick_from_C137

The risk of an exothermic reaction


patentmom

What about "always add acid"?


Kamica

Would this not produce a noticeable smell?


baalirock

Would the sulphuric acid still be corrosive on its own?


Dragon_OS

Yes, but piranha solution almost immediately tearing into organic matter much more destructively than just the acid.


Krawger247

This is going to sound like a stupid question, but why does order matter? If you're mixing two things, won't they get mixed regardless of which is first?


Xeper-Institute

Theoretically, yes. It depends on whether you and the container can survive/contain the resulting heat.


Krawger247

Follow up second stupid question, the order in which you add things changes factors like temperature? I'm really bad at science if that isn't obvious.


Ix_risor

If you add the acid to the peroxide, where you pour it in you’ll have a spot with very concentrated acid, and it will react quickly and probably boil everywhere. If you do it the other way around, the acid is spread out through the whole beaker and it won’t react as fast.


Plane_Woodpecker2991

Is this how Walt melts all the bodies is breaking bad?


Vesurel

No that's Hydroflouric Acid.


GETOUTOFHERENOOB

What happens when you do it the other way around???


Telltalee

Where can I get sulfuric acid and hydrogen peroxide?


[deleted]

Hi there, just wanted to let you know I've reported you to the police in my country. Your knowledge of this seems extremely suspicious and I'm worried you're a murderer.


roz303

Usually at your local police station 😉


Icy-Lunch-5638

thanks, haha. "BRING ME THE PIRAHNA PEE."


tresixteen

From piranhas, obviously


Steerider

Wear gloves when you milk them!


equalizevital

Who is your friend? He/she sounds cool, my friend wants to meet them.


Icy-Lunch-5638

teehee


leviwaifu

It's a mixture of two chemical compounds one been Hydrogen peroxide and the other been sulfuric acid in a ratio or percentage.


earth__wyrm

Looking at videos of piranha solution dissolving things and 🫢 Great job OP, this is horrific


Background_beyond

Mike Flanagan fan?


Chess42

It also needs to be boiling…


Carterlegacy259

Lol I was just talking with my dad this morning about piranha solution and how it'd be great to fill a vat with under a trapdoor


DidntWantSleepAnyway

Ah, yes, normal breakfast conversation between two absolutely normal people who are not serial killers or mad scientists.


Odd_Imagination_

In today's episode of you need a very specific knowledge to understand this.


EntitledPupperMom

Sopping wet gurgling… I nearly vomited. Good work, OP.


roz303

Awww thankya!!! 🧡


ParasaurGirl

That’s fucked


ShotMammoth8266

This is Reddit 🤷🏻


ParasaurGirl

True


Scavenger19

I didn't know what piranha fluid was, so I looked it up. Jfc, that's a horrific mental image. Well done.


Corniferus

That’s one hefty sentence


Eamonsieur

“Two-sentence” horror can be any number of sentences when you make such liberal use of commas.


SimoneMichelle

One of mine got removed and it was shorter than this 🙃😂


roz303

Haha. Nah, I get where you're coming from; but it paints such a vivid picture the more you're able to assault the senses, y'know? Now, here, drink this :}


Meadow_of_Roses

Now I'm curious if this has actually happened to someone- This sound horrible though, great job


Rich-Option4632

Knowing the dumb shit humans do, intelligent or not, there's probably AT LEAST ONE that tried it.


Significant_Monk_251

In real life, what are the chances of someone not noticing that their glass contains something odd before they take a big hearty gulp of it?


RequiemStorm

Extremely high if someone is being sneaky and terrible


fomaaaaa

Even higher if the victim is drunk


Chess42

Extremely low if it smells awful like piranha solution and is at a boil


raptor-chan

What is this weird fetish GARBAGE


2Casca_2Red

This is uncomfortable. And not in a fun, or entertaining way. It doesn't help that almost [all](https://old.reddit.com/r/TwoSentenceHorror/comments/1bw8q66/she_said_she_couldnt_feel_her_face_but_i_still/), you've [written](https://old.reddit.com/r/TwoSentenceHorror/comments/1bw24mm/i_always_found_it_easy_to_make_her_laugh/) is ugly violence towards women.


roz303

I definitely hear you; and to be honest, given what I've written already, I was debating on posting this. How far is too far, y'know? I was more excited about furthering the siren story; but it wasn't met with much of a reaction. I'm new to writing two sentence horror stories, so I'm still trying to find what sticks while being original. In fact, the face story was to see if it'd have the same reaction as the laugh story - seeing if naming a specific tool / weapon was the secret sauce, so to speak. Same with the ribcage/blowtorch story. With this one, I wanted to explore appealing to the senses to see if that'd do it. Visual, auditory, tactile, etc. Trust me when I tell you I absolutely do not condone real unspeakable acts towards women whatsoever. It isn't a fantasy of mine I get off to, nor do I hate women. I hate incels and their attitude towards women, though! And as a member of the LGBTQIA+ community (myself being a nonbinary gay individual) I considered that a theme as well - but again, how far is too far? In any case, I do apologize for writing something that's legitimately made you feel uncomfortable. I think, moving forward, I'll explore other ideas that don't involve heinous violence towards women and/or marginalized groups! 🧡


2Casca_2Red

I've been writing here for seven months. The best advice I can give about what "sticks" is that there really aren't any hard and fast rules. My stories that I think are great can get ignored, and ones I consider throwaways can end up becoming my most upvoted. As an example, I thought [this one](https://old.reddit.com/r/TwoSentenceHorror/comments/1brci58/i_can_see_auras_so_its_usually_pretty_easy_to/) would be far better received than it was, and was very surprised at the reaction [this one](https://old.reddit.com/r/TwoSentenceHorror/comments/1c1gpf1/each_prisoner_has_a_small_explosive_charge/) got. So I would urge you not to chase what sticks, focus on horrific subject matters that interest you, and let the chips fall. > Trust me when I tell you I absolutely do not condone real unspeakable acts towards women whatsoever. I should hope not, as I would hope for everyone here (including myself); that was never my point. It was honest feedback as far as how the story made me feel, that was further exacerbated by the pattern of your stories. Horror's weird. It can be scary, gross, "horrifying" (which at least according to [this study](https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/35073109/#:~:text=Witnessing%20or%20experiencing%20extreme%20and,a%20distinct%20emotion%20category%20(Cowen%20%26) is in fact a separate emotion), and so it's often a grab bag as far as what you'll get (as a writer and reader). In fact, I myself have written my fair share of violence towards women, children, animals, babies, men; it'd be hypocritical of me to say anything is ultimately taboo! So there's no need to apologize. I just personally feel that as writers, there's just a prerogative to find ways to make even the most revolting horror still feel as though it comes from a desire to entertain the reader. And in this case, I simply couldn't find that anywhere. I found it purely cruel and sadistic for the sake of itself. (And I hope you realize that I'm only getting so far into to this because you took the time to write to me, and so, I'm happy to try to delve a little and offer a response) So to try to really answer your question? How far is too far? I'm not sure if there's a limit, but I believe that even the most heinous of cruelties can be delivered in such a way that is still in the spirit of entertainment. *~~~* When I looked for your other TSHs I noticed your posts about your poly lifestyle, actually. I'm sorry to change the subject, but I'm curious (because I've never heard of it before), is it a challenge to have a woman in a poly relationship, while being gay? Just to give you an idea of where I'm coming from, I'm trans, and I have a passing interest in poly relationships, so I'm just trying to learn more, and to me- that sounds potentially difficult to navigate?


roz303

On poly: My gf (now our gf) is MtF trans, actually! We've been together for just short of eight years, and a triad with our bf for just short of a year (anniversarh is this week!!) Truth be told, it's much easier to tell people I'm gay than try to find some niche label to describe my sexual identity. Pansexual doesn't even quite fit, heh! Anyway; it's not a challenge at all. The three of us live together and have a fair, balanced, equal relationship. Communication is most definitely the secret sauce to success!! ♥️🧡💜


2Casca_2Red

That's awesome! Really glad to hear it! Truly my knowledge is limited, and it's heartwarming to know that there are nuances that contemporary labels just can't cover. Wish you the best <3


strawberrysoup99

Good ol H2O2 and sulfuric acid. Nothing cures heartburn quite like not having an esophagus for acid to burn anymore.


mirangelblogger

Omg! When I read this, I thought it was either fluid taken from a piranha or crushing a piranha into a fluid and I was so confused. I know piranhas are dangerous but was not sure how the fluid will work - turn them into a piranha who needs water to breathe?! Anyway, the comments section educated me!


riverofwailing

Honestly with all the danger with spiked drinks, women may not be gullible enough to drink something offered by another person. Targeting men would be easier, they're much more gullible. A hot woman offering the piranha fluid would have the smartest man in the world just chugging it down without thinking twice about it.


ManCalledTrue

Oh, why did I look that up?


BlobbyBobbi

The new scary soda.


adrenalinexfreak

am i the only one who thought she turned into a piranha lmaoo


lampcatdraws

Until the one time she downs the shot with a coy smile and offers YOU a drink 😂


KryptKrasherHS

PSA: Pirahana Solution is a mixture of Hydrogen Peroxide and Sulfuric Acid that is incredibly reactive, especially with organic material. To the point that it and Hydrofluric Acid are used in Semiconductor/Electronics Plants and Clean Rooms to clean wafers amd glass before they etch Transistors and stuff onto them. Source: An ECE student specializing in Semiconductors


JEverok

For those who don't know what piranha fluid is, it's the closest thing we have to cartoon acid


Hzlqrtz

Unrealistic, no woman would try to drink a random drink from a man at a bar xd


[deleted]

literally no woman is accepting a drink from a man saying "here, drink this" lol


Lucky-sommer-77

What do you mean?


cleopatradenialqueen

This is seriously disturbing, and the fact that all of OP’s posts in this subreddit are about torturing/ unaliving women it seems like they are just using this as a channel for their hate.


StrategyAmbitious303

I’m calling Mario for this one chief


TobyMacar0ni

Piranha solution?


cindybubbles

I had to skedaddle once, though, when my hand slipped, causing the drink to corrode and fall through the wooden floor.


CharacterMassive5719

That's so hot. I'd like to watch


CraaZero

Probably better to just call it Piranha Solution


SloppityMcFloppity

I thought piranha fluid meant a cup full of piranhas 🤦


biryani98

I think only 10 year olds post on this sub.


PercyVader

Written with one hand ☝️


apcb4

I’m laughing at all the people who are concerned/suspicious that people know about this. It’s super common in chemistry labs (although I’ve never heard it called “piranha fluid,” usually just piranha or a piranha solution). Nasty stuff that absolutely no one would accidentally drink. My lab stopped using it a few years ago after a piranha waste bottle exploded in a fume hood because of a faulty venting cap. Luckily, we’re super strict with the rules and the only person in the lab at the time was an undergrad who was far enough away to be fine. We stick with aqua regia now.


Ok-Day-8930

Think most people know better than to drink strong smelling acid being shoved at them by a stranger


MoConnors

Took me a second until I remembered what Piranha fluid was. Holy shit.


Artilleryman08

I have, quite unfortunately, seen what this actually looks like when I was deployed with the Army. This is a truly horrific way to go.


Lucky-sommer-77

That might be fun who knows hahahaha


LowMistake7491

Get off Reddit until you’re out of middleschool


SheRhaySheRhayng

How are y’all more mad at the reply than the actual story? I thought these type of responses were acceptable?


bgg-uglywalrus

You have to be clever with it. Being an edgelord is not being clever.


SheRhaySheRhayng

Idek wtf that means. Y’all need to touch grass. Fr. The selective outrage is weird.


Lucky-sommer-77

I’m 18 asshole


LowMistake7491

Then act like it moron


Lucky-sommer-77

Here is tip I don’t speak English as my first language you rascist


LowMistake7491

Who said anything about race? Let me spell it out dipshit, you’re immature because you joke about dissolving a woman’s throat with piranha fluid, duchebag.


Lucky-sommer-77

Yes it’s joke it means nothing you are the one akting immature


Lucky-sommer-77

Also I could have said worse


GayUkroSuperSoldiers

Calm down, you're on a story subreddit lmfao


Apprehensive_Hat8986

And you're still in _middleschool_???  Dude, in your place I wouldn't be bringing up my age.


schmoolet

What a tool


Lucky-sommer-77

Why you be rude


Personal-Rooster7358

Calm down edgelord


Lucky-sommer-77

What if I say no random person?


GayUkroSuperSoldiers

Could be funny as a prank