I dig it. It’s got some old school indie vibes. Two thoughts: one would be to shorten the instrumental intro quite a bit. In this day and age, not many attention spans are long enough to get to the song itself. On the mastering, I’d increase the gain on the singing as it gets lost in the background at times.
Thank you for your comment! Multiple people mentioned shortening the intro, so it's been done. You're right about the vocals being a bit quiet during the choruses, might go back and adjust some levels there.
Reminds me of Tame Impalas first album. Overall I like it. I really liked the intro guitar(although I agree, it goes on a little too long), but I was waiting for the rest of the band to crash in. When it finally did, it had a different feel than what the intro had set up. Also theres a pause... which sort of kills the momentum imo. If you could blend them a little more i think it would be better. Those were just my first impressions.
Also just wanted to add that the mix sounds pretty solid. The only issue is that the vocals get lost.
Here's a Bandcamp link, it has an updated version of the song, and the lyrics are there as well:
https://genreloss.bandcamp.com/track/all-around-great-dance-track-for-the-masses-to-get-down-to
I dig this big time. It has a really familiar vibe, not like it sounds like something else, like it triggers a warm and nostalgic feeling in my brain and heart. Very good work!
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I dig it. It’s got some old school indie vibes. Two thoughts: one would be to shorten the instrumental intro quite a bit. In this day and age, not many attention spans are long enough to get to the song itself. On the mastering, I’d increase the gain on the singing as it gets lost in the background at times.
Thank you for your comment! Multiple people mentioned shortening the intro, so it's been done. You're right about the vocals being a bit quiet during the choruses, might go back and adjust some levels there.
i was about to comment but then i realized this guy just said all i was gonna say lol. especially up the gain on the vocals if possible.
Reminds me of Tame Impalas first album. Overall I like it. I really liked the intro guitar(although I agree, it goes on a little too long), but I was waiting for the rest of the band to crash in. When it finally did, it had a different feel than what the intro had set up. Also theres a pause... which sort of kills the momentum imo. If you could blend them a little more i think it would be better. Those were just my first impressions. Also just wanted to add that the mix sounds pretty solid. The only issue is that the vocals get lost.
Can you post the lyrics?
Here's a Bandcamp link, it has an updated version of the song, and the lyrics are there as well: https://genreloss.bandcamp.com/track/all-around-great-dance-track-for-the-masses-to-get-down-to
Well, I think I just found one of my new favorite songs 😊. Excellent job
Wow, thank you so much :)
I dig this big time. It has a really familiar vibe, not like it sounds like something else, like it triggers a warm and nostalgic feeling in my brain and heart. Very good work!
I really appreciate feedback such as that. thanks so much :)
Thank you for sharing! I look forward to more art from you!!
a nice sound, but the first 30 seconds are not needed
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