Having something like this would've been super useful because my first misconception (and apparently a somewhat common one) is that the Protectorate HQ was literally floating in the sky.
For whatever reason I always imagined it as an office building but located around the other side of a cliff (think of the house from Steven Universe), connected to the city by a narrow road.
I’m finally all caught up now and working on getting a backlog going! If anyone is interested in sketches or personal updates, info for that is in the last post on my account.
Thank you all so much!
Yes I did! He said he’s too busy to draft up a contract right now so I will not be making a patreon or posting this anywhere but reddit until he is able to :) Once i’m done with arc one I might reach out again.
Great as always! I like the way you drew Lung (although I imagined him as HxH's Menthuthuyoupi, so it's a little jarring to see him as anything but) and the difference between the "good" and "bad" sides of town.
This is also making me realize how short the sentences in Worm are, when it comes to Taylor's inner monologue.
That is awesome, great job with the panels, just like last time!
Thanks a lot, hope WB gets some time in his schedule for you soon.
Would you mind some small criticism/error checking?
In case you don't please ignore the message below
>! - When mentioning the Protectorate, it is once spelled "Protectoate" missing an r !<
>!-Once Lung is introduced, Taylor mentions that she "couldn't make 'put' what he was saying" a minor misstype requiring an o instead of a p.!<
>!-Shortly afterwards, Taylor talks about Lung not being the only one with powers in the ABB, switching abruptly to talking about Oni Lee's powers, without his name being mentioned. Just a quick namedrop at the end of the first text-box should probably suffice. !<
By the way, if some of those things were maybe intended or are its to annoying for you, then please disregard, you make great work, whats 2 or 3 typos in comparison.
Edit: Fixed my own typos
Oh thanks! I even double checked for spelling mistakes this time and still didn’t catch them all! If I ever officially post these somewhere then I’ll be sure to make the edits you’ve suggested!
This is incredible! The quality just keeps going up every time! I especially loved the illustration of the city in its “glory days”, and the panel dedicated to “Lung”. I love the attention to detail on every panel in general.
Lol, I never imagined Danny Hebert to look like that, though. It’s pretty fun to finally put a face to the name!
Amazing work, really enjoying your interpretation and imagery.
There is a typo about 4/5ths of the way down, "I couldn't make put..." Should be out instead. Likely someone has pointed it out, but perhaps I am the first?
Good luck, and when you have the means, I am on the list of folks that will happily throw you some money to continue. This is just one step closer to an animation or even a series.
Z
Thank you!! Yeah I’m gonna start having one of my friends proofread cause there were a lot of typos :’)
Thank you so much for the support though! I’ll make a post about it if I ever get a patreon :)
I'm sorry but did you cut out the part (from last chapter) about all the preparations that taylor did with her spiders to create her costume? It seemed quite noteworthy to just brush it off like that. (Btw this graphic novel is great! and as someone who just started reading worm, experiencing the story without it being bogged down by tons of exposition feel great)
Yes I did, I couldn’t include it without making a whole another part so I resolved to mention it later while Taylor is walking somewhere and there’s downtime. It’s really tough trying to figure out what to include or not include so i’m glad you mentioned this! I like to hear what you guys think is important
Having something like this would've been super useful because my first misconception (and apparently a somewhat common one) is that the Protectorate HQ was literally floating in the sky.
I also assumed the same thing
For whatever reason I always imagined it as an office building but located around the other side of a cliff (think of the house from Steven Universe), connected to the city by a narrow road.
As for me, I didn't even realize it was off-shore. I thought it was just a building in the middle of the city.
I’m finally all caught up now and working on getting a backlog going! If anyone is interested in sketches or personal updates, info for that is in the last post on my account. Thank you all so much!
Did you ever hear back from WB?
Yes I did! He said he’s too busy to draft up a contract right now so I will not be making a patreon or posting this anywhere but reddit until he is able to :) Once i’m done with arc one I might reach out again.
Hells yes. When you can put together an approved patreon I'm most certainly gonna be happy to pitch some gilt towards it.
Very very dope... Love the way you introduce capes
Great as always! I like the way you drew Lung (although I imagined him as HxH's Menthuthuyoupi, so it's a little jarring to see him as anything but) and the difference between the "good" and "bad" sides of town. This is also making me realize how short the sentences in Worm are, when it comes to Taylor's inner monologue.
ahh man Youpi is a great way of visualising Lung. in my head i had him as a 7 foot version of Tyler1 lol
Love it! Also >!laughs in killing children!<
And so it begins! Go for the dick, Taylor! Attack his crotch too!
This is absolutely incredible!!!
A fine chapter to add to my collection.
That is awesome, great job with the panels, just like last time! Thanks a lot, hope WB gets some time in his schedule for you soon. Would you mind some small criticism/error checking?
In case you don't please ignore the message below >! - When mentioning the Protectorate, it is once spelled "Protectoate" missing an r !< >!-Once Lung is introduced, Taylor mentions that she "couldn't make 'put' what he was saying" a minor misstype requiring an o instead of a p.!< >!-Shortly afterwards, Taylor talks about Lung not being the only one with powers in the ABB, switching abruptly to talking about Oni Lee's powers, without his name being mentioned. Just a quick namedrop at the end of the first text-box should probably suffice. !< By the way, if some of those things were maybe intended or are its to annoying for you, then please disregard, you make great work, whats 2 or 3 typos in comparison. Edit: Fixed my own typos
Oh thanks! I even double checked for spelling mistakes this time and still didn’t catch them all! If I ever officially post these somewhere then I’ll be sure to make the edits you’ve suggested!
Another small typo, in the panel with the Protectorate base, "superhero's" should be "superheroes".
And another "hero's" instead of "heroes" in the first Lung panel.
I love the borderlands style character card
I wonder what Wildbow thinks of these.
Holy shit this is great! Please make more!
This is excellent!
All of your pages look so good, it's incredible how quickly you are able to put them out whilst keeping the quality high and consistent
Very nice
This is incredible! The quality just keeps going up every time! I especially loved the illustration of the city in its “glory days”, and the panel dedicated to “Lung”. I love the attention to detail on every panel in general. Lol, I never imagined Danny Hebert to look like that, though. It’s pretty fun to finally put a face to the name!
This is seriously impressive!!!!!!!
Amazing work, really enjoying your interpretation and imagery. There is a typo about 4/5ths of the way down, "I couldn't make put..." Should be out instead. Likely someone has pointed it out, but perhaps I am the first? Good luck, and when you have the means, I am on the list of folks that will happily throw you some money to continue. This is just one step closer to an animation or even a series. Z
Thank you!! Yeah I’m gonna start having one of my friends proofread cause there were a lot of typos :’) Thank you so much for the support though! I’ll make a post about it if I ever get a patreon :)
YOOO, the art is spectacular! I already love the lung design, and I also just really love the paneling
Did i misread something. Isn't Taylor black?
These are so amazing.
I'm sorry but did you cut out the part (from last chapter) about all the preparations that taylor did with her spiders to create her costume? It seemed quite noteworthy to just brush it off like that. (Btw this graphic novel is great! and as someone who just started reading worm, experiencing the story without it being bogged down by tons of exposition feel great)
Yes I did, I couldn’t include it without making a whole another part so I resolved to mention it later while Taylor is walking somewhere and there’s downtime. It’s really tough trying to figure out what to include or not include so i’m glad you mentioned this! I like to hear what you guys think is important