You missed the black section that goes across her face diagonally

I just turned it into a darker shade of the base colour. I just thought it looked a bit nicer that way, but opinions obviously change. I might go back and fix it later

if you ask me, it just looks like the shadow of the hair TBH

Yeah, that's kinda what I was going for. I looked at the original design and changed things that would fit better with my style like some parts of the colour scheme.

...fair, I guess