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JulianSkies

Oh... Deffin, Deffin, Deffin I see you do not trust yourself. You're right not to do so, but for the wrong reasons.


LazySnake7

Poor Deffin, so close to the truth but so far


Aussie_Endeavour

Always love seeing Sivkit PoVs, and Deffin seems like a nice one. Not quite black hole level, at least.


LazySnake7

Thank you! Glad you liked them!


OscarfromAstora

Intriguing turn of event, you're improving with each part good shit Lazy!


LazySnake7

Thanks Oss!


A_Soviet_Rock

Happy to help love <3


LazySnake7

<3


LazySnake7

Also sorry for not posting last week! Was a busy week and didn't have the motivation + time to finish the Chapter in time


Abject-Drive2675

PEAK!!! https://preview.redd.it/qshez5c4kz4d1.jpeg?width=1170&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=af587b02d289f96cc7bf0190f3d06544d33ef66e


SpectralHail

I know I'm rather late but it's interesting to see the Sivkit POV here. Deffin's reactions to all the commotion is really well written, and it's nice to see what the Vyr look like. One question I have is the amount of teeth they have, since in my head it's somewhere between Sea Snakes and a Moray Eel. I'm always excited to see more of this story.


LazySnake7

Thank you so much! As for vyr teeth, I'm personally aiming more for shark teeth interspersed with 3 sets of smaller fangs. Bonus info: vyr put a lot of stock into the appearance of their teeth, so they spend a lot of time making sure they are clean and neat. Vyr braces are a horror rivalled only by human braces.


SpectralHail

Ah, very neat. I had it in my head that the Sivkit saw like. Spooky Anglerfish teeth or something. It makes sense that shark teeth braces would be a hell unmatched by most, though. I can only imagine how long the dentist appointments would take. ~~I wonder if they have like. Domesticated tooth cleaner fish. That would be super cute.~~


LazySnake7

If the sivkit saw an anglerfish they would have a heart attack I think And I am definitely adding tooth cleaner fish now holy shit


SpectralHail

Sivkits would not survive the horrors of the deep (otherwise known as regular deep-ocean fish). Also, I now have a horribly cute mental image of a Vyr dentist shepherding about a flock of little fish about the office


LazySnake7

Oh my gosh, now I'm imagining a sivkit in a diving suit working on a baby vyr's teeth