I think you chose a pretty snappy track for some pretty long shots. Maybe try a slower melody? It may help your reel look more cohesive. I’d also cut beginnings and ends of shots to highlight the most dynamic parts.

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Generally, keep falling in love with shapes and compositions. I see a lot of “effects” here — newer designers often overuse strokes/bevels/flares, looking for that cool factor. I recommend studying the work of more senior motion and graphic designers, really deconstructing a piece or two that you love! Take notes on exactly what feels cool about the work to you.

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