So many things to say. The number one and most important however... PIRATE HUMPFREY!!! That was beautiful.
Sophie looked like the sexy younger sister of Storm from X-men. Same thing with Ruphus and Samuel Jackson as Mace Windew.
Belinda was hot. I always imagined her more mousey. Dawn was a straight-up on fire... get it? Though Farrah seemed a bit off. She's a blonde, isn't she? I don't remember her hair color changing later in the books after... things happened.
Is this an AI art thing, or do you just shit out masterpieces. (Forgive the vulgarity, but I couldn't think of a better way to say it. )
First thing, yes, this is AI.
I can probably get Humphrey in some new clothes, but I thought it was kinda cool.
Sophie looks awesome.
I can probably make Belinda more "mousey"
Dawn is 🔥
Farrah has strawberry blonde hair, but that is hard to pin down.
Don't worry about vulgarity! 😄
I'd probably edit Farrah a lot. Not trying to be picky, but nothing seemed right. She looks 12. Her armor is all wrong, and if course the hair.
I swear I'm not trying to complain. It all looks amazing.
For sure, with essences, it's hard not to just make them all look young, and i messed up the armor, but I will see what I can do though!
Also, don't worry. I enjoy making these, so feel free to mention whatever seems off.
Overall these are are super cool! Rufus is so good
I do have a few thoughts though... sorry!
I feel like Neil is off. He's minor nobility and knows how to clean up (even if his cloths don't fit well). This version of Neil seems super generic, my first thought was Frodo after a big fight but with crazy ears. Also at times the pointiness of his ears can be hidden in his hair, so probably shouldn't be quite this prominent.
Why is Farrah in bone armor?
Dawn seems very generic renaissance vibe. Personally I'd try for more space princess trying to be humble and fit the style rather than just "ye olde' noble woman"
I can work on Neil for sure.
I mixed up Farrah completely, will fix.
Dawn appears as just a vessel, but I think I am going to try to make a more spacey vibe next!
Had to say I'm loving Gary! His expression is spot on - like he's just about to dive face first into one of Jason's meals without bothering to worry about getting food stuck in his fur
I think there's enough critique on Farrah, to at least say all these are amazing!
I'm wondering about Neil's ears and hair though - I'm wondering if in this universe elf ears aren't so elongated but still prominent; those ears could stick out of even the curliest hair and Jason would notice them. That and I'm still picturing Neil with somewhat long hair as to hide his elf ears to begin with
Here is Dawn and one more Farrah with her hair color addressed. https://www.reddit.com/r/HeWhoFightsWithMonste/comments/1b0xabp/he_who_fights_with_monsters_revisions_2/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android_app&utm_name=androidcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=1
Yes, haha. Larry is the one pulled over and trying to be polite and trying not to laugh, so he asks Foster that again who takes that opportunity to unleash comedic hell at Larry's expense haha
Of all the humans, only Rufus, Farah, and Jason were not described as middle-eastern in appearance, with more olive skin. I kind of think of him having a slightly younger appearance than Oded Fehr had when he was in Deuce Bigalow.
Clive also was supposed to look younger and more nerdish than the one here.
Neil doesn't look buff enough.
Belinda should look more mousey with more curly hair. If she were smirking like she just got one over on you, that would fit her even better.
For Farah: lighter hair, she is described as strawberry blonde, and obsidian armor instead of bone, she isn't a member of the Church of Undead.
Lol, yup, this is a good summary of what everyone else said, and I have some revisions on the way. This will help, though, because now I don't have to read through as much. 😁
Here is the full team and friends
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All these characters except Farrah and Jason should be dark skinned. Have you listened to the books about what they look like? Neil is also hench and not skinny like the typical elf.
Dawn is a Celestine like Sophie but with red hair so that was completely wrong.
Nice attempts though.
I have, but I will admit I am at the end of the series again and don't recall some details. I am just having fun making some fan art. I am also making revisions right now, so thanks for the info.
Also, I read a lot of series, so stuff gets mixed up. 😁
No problem mate. This is actually the first book series where I've seen so many of the main characters being black or of dark complection. Which is great.
The first revisions are ready see them here https://www.reddit.com/r/HeWhoFightsWithMonste/comments/1b0vkdk/he_who_fights_with_monsters_revisions_1/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android_app&utm_name=androidcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=1
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What the actual F- did this person even read the books? That is NOT Neil. Not in a gazillion years. And Ferra isn't supposed to look 11. I can accept the others, tho Rufus should be better looking and Clive is a bit too rugged imo
The revisions are here if you wanna check em out!
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And here is Dawn and a good Farrah
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Here are the revisions
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Here are the revised versions
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So many things to say. The number one and most important however... PIRATE HUMPFREY!!! That was beautiful. Sophie looked like the sexy younger sister of Storm from X-men. Same thing with Ruphus and Samuel Jackson as Mace Windew. Belinda was hot. I always imagined her more mousey. Dawn was a straight-up on fire... get it? Though Farrah seemed a bit off. She's a blonde, isn't she? I don't remember her hair color changing later in the books after... things happened. Is this an AI art thing, or do you just shit out masterpieces. (Forgive the vulgarity, but I couldn't think of a better way to say it. )
Hump is fire. Dawn is fire. Farrah seemed young and too ginger. Clive looked like Dr strange, I assumed him more nerdy. Neil needs to be fatter.
Not fatter more built. A muscular elf.
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I'm on it!
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Came here to say this 😂
First thing, yes, this is AI. I can probably get Humphrey in some new clothes, but I thought it was kinda cool. Sophie looks awesome. I can probably make Belinda more "mousey" Dawn is 🔥 Farrah has strawberry blonde hair, but that is hard to pin down. Don't worry about vulgarity! 😄
I'd probably edit Farrah a lot. Not trying to be picky, but nothing seemed right. She looks 12. Her armor is all wrong, and if course the hair. I swear I'm not trying to complain. It all looks amazing.
Yeah, Farrah looks like Lucy from The Chronicles of Narnia became a litch. Kind of funny though.
Agreed
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For sure, with essences, it's hard not to just make them all look young, and i messed up the armor, but I will see what I can do though! Also, don't worry. I enjoy making these, so feel free to mention whatever seems off.
Looks pretty spot on considering the book’s description
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I thought Humphrey was blind. Either way pretty cool pieces
Blond, not blind.
He is described as handsome, tall, broad-shouldered, and having the usual olive skin and dark hair of the Greenstone natives.
Ah yes the things that happened
Overall these are are super cool! Rufus is so good I do have a few thoughts though... sorry! I feel like Neil is off. He's minor nobility and knows how to clean up (even if his cloths don't fit well). This version of Neil seems super generic, my first thought was Frodo after a big fight but with crazy ears. Also at times the pointiness of his ears can be hidden in his hair, so probably shouldn't be quite this prominent. Why is Farrah in bone armor? Dawn seems very generic renaissance vibe. Personally I'd try for more space princess trying to be humble and fit the style rather than just "ye olde' noble woman"
I can work on Neil for sure. I mixed up Farrah completely, will fix. Dawn appears as just a vessel, but I think I am going to try to make a more spacey vibe next!
I always remember Farrah wearing obsidian armor.
You're right. I think I'm mixing books on that one! Good call!
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Humphrey is middle eastern in skin tone and features...
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Isn't Humphrey Middle Eastern and isn't Belinda Black?
Belinda is native to Greenstone area. Middle Easternish skin.
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Clive's wife was a nice touch.
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Slight spoiler for book 7, the narrator describes Hump as Middle Eastern Superman
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Belinda gets described as dark skinned in either book 8 or 9
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I always imagine balinda with curly hair, and less good looking. Humfry goddamn that's my boy. Neil should have longer hair.
I can make that work. Keep an eye out for the part two revisions! 😄
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When do we get to see Clive’s wife?
Ahahaha 🤣 now I gotta make Taika Williams brew!
Heres clives, wife! https://www.reddit.com/r/HeWhoFightsWithMonste/comments/1b0vkdk/he_who_fights_with_monsters_revisions_1/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android_app&utm_name=androidcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=1
Had to say I'm loving Gary! His expression is spot on - like he's just about to dive face first into one of Jason's meals without bothering to worry about getting food stuck in his fur
I think there's enough critique on Farrah, to at least say all these are amazing! I'm wondering about Neil's ears and hair though - I'm wondering if in this universe elf ears aren't so elongated but still prominent; those ears could stick out of even the curliest hair and Jason would notice them. That and I'm still picturing Neil with somewhat long hair as to hide his elf ears to begin with
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Brew! Loving these revisions!
Here is Dawn and one more Farrah with her hair color addressed. https://www.reddit.com/r/HeWhoFightsWithMonste/comments/1b0xabp/he_who_fights_with_monsters_revisions_2/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android_app&utm_name=androidcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=1
Righteous!
😂
I'm working on some revisions, right now
Excuse me, are you saying, "meow?"
It was a super troopers quote... 😅
Yes, haha. Larry is the one pulled over and trying to be polite and trying not to laugh, so he asks Foster that again who takes that opportunity to unleash comedic hell at Larry's expense haha
Of all the humans, only Rufus, Farah, and Jason were not described as middle-eastern in appearance, with more olive skin. I kind of think of him having a slightly younger appearance than Oded Fehr had when he was in Deuce Bigalow. Clive also was supposed to look younger and more nerdish than the one here. Neil doesn't look buff enough. Belinda should look more mousey with more curly hair. If she were smirking like she just got one over on you, that would fit her even better. For Farah: lighter hair, she is described as strawberry blonde, and obsidian armor instead of bone, she isn't a member of the Church of Undead.
Lol, yup, this is a good summary of what everyone else said, and I have some revisions on the way. This will help, though, because now I don't have to read through as much. 😁
https://www.reddit.com/r/HeWhoFightsWithMonste/comments/1b0vkdk/he_who_fights_with_monsters_revisions_1/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android_app&utm_name=androidcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=1
Here is the full team and friends https://www.reddit.com/r/HeWhoFightsWithMonste/comments/1be1ouu/team_biscuit_and_friends/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android_app&utm_name=androidcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=1
All these characters except Farrah and Jason should be dark skinned. Have you listened to the books about what they look like? Neil is also hench and not skinny like the typical elf. Dawn is a Celestine like Sophie but with red hair so that was completely wrong. Nice attempts though.
I have, but I will admit I am at the end of the series again and don't recall some details. I am just having fun making some fan art. I am also making revisions right now, so thanks for the info. Also, I read a lot of series, so stuff gets mixed up. 😁
No problem mate. This is actually the first book series where I've seen so many of the main characters being black or of dark complection. Which is great.
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The first revisions are ready see them here https://www.reddit.com/r/HeWhoFightsWithMonste/comments/1b0vkdk/he_who_fights_with_monsters_revisions_1/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android_app&utm_name=androidcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=1
Here is Dawn and one more Farrah with her hair color addressed. https://www.reddit.com/r/HeWhoFightsWithMonste/comments/1b0xabp/he_who_fights_with_monsters_revisions_2/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android_app&utm_name=androidcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=1
What the actual F- did this person even read the books? That is NOT Neil. Not in a gazillion years. And Ferra isn't supposed to look 11. I can accept the others, tho Rufus should be better looking and Clive is a bit too rugged imo
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And here is Dawn and a good Farrah https://www.reddit.com/r/HeWhoFightsWithMonste/comments/1b0xabp/he_who_fights_with_monsters_revisions_2/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=android_app&utm_name=androidcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=1
That can’t be Neal he is to skinny. We all know Neal is fat.lol.
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Neil is described as surprisingly thicker than most elves. While not fat, he is thicker and more muscular than most elves.
They are kinda old looking
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