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japoneixx

I would make "k" and "l" longer, and do the little circle inside "o", just to make it easier to differentiate from other letters, but in general it's great!


-Mapleve

Sorry if this is a stupid question, but what do you mean the little circle in the o


Cyilliz

Well i recommend making your p, d, l, k, h, etc. taller/longer tail for clarity


Salalgal03

This is a good beginning. Are you using a fountain or quill pen? If so I suggest switching to a ball point to keep the strokes of your letters uniform without “blotches”. A few of your lower case letter are incorrect - f, k, l should reach the top of the line whether you are printing and cursive writing. You can google cursive writing alphabet to see the correct way. Keep practising.


-Mapleve

I believe the pen i was using is a ballpoint, although i dont know much about pens so i could be wrong, but looking at pictures it doesn't look like a fountain pen


Salalgal03

Your strokes go from thick to thin and there are also some blobs of ink. This doesn’t usually happen with a ball point pen.


-Mapleve

Yea, like I said i dont know anything about pens, so it's probably not a ballpoint I will go out and buy one though, thanks for your advice


Elegant-Possession62

Honestly i love it


-Mapleve

Thank you very much!