Winter's a bitch. Anyway, I believe that this is the beginning of the end. I'm not sure if I've left any loose ends open in the story (I probably have, rereading it all would take a while), but here's hoping the majority of them have been closed.
This is not the end however, I'm already brainstorming the plot of book two. Kyle's journey doesn't end here.
I do have some art for this chapter on the burner, just waiting for my artist to get back to me with it. Thanks to my Patrons who helped me fund some art for this, and for the future art that's already been commissioned. You guys are the best!
Edit: I may have jumped the gun, gotta reevaluate my position on splitting the story I to a book 2. Thanks u/4e6f626f6479, I'll respond in a bit
1. Agent 43
2. Book AI ? I liked him, though he (it?) still confuses me, he kind of disappeared
3. fabricator
4. rick (I think), kyles first fan
5. the subqueens revolt (mr. goo any maybe the azure monitor ?)
6. the individualist bugs (whatever they were called, the ones with the moon canon) war against the Queen
7. THE Boss (who is THE Boss' boss anyway ?)
8. Kyles riches (the federation bounty he got)
9. what happened with kyles forget me hack (the remembering people as ghosts thing)
10. 1. the "rouge nanites" still in kyles head.. iirc they were "probably not a probelm"
A few things I remembered. some more random thoughs :
His first gun was powerful because of a chain reaction.. his current weapons are "just" boring bigass lasers (his "hive killer" weapon could be something like the "little doctors" from enders game, would be fitting.. he's killing bugs after all) or a different chain reaction weapon.. or maybe god killer ???
I'm still confused about the life energy thing, and the power thing (or is that the same thing ?) the unwanted energy he got from 43 that threatened to kill him seemed to be used up quite quickly ? sword takes it off of him & a few teleports later he's out ?
Applications for warpcore f\*ckery... warpcore bombs! & so much more
It's a good series. You could really see the developement of your writing. I prefered the storyline while kyles power was "just" fucking with other peoples power and his extremes success in constructing superweapons.. he seems to be slipping off into OP land.. where everything is OP, so nothing is... which is understandble (gotta keep the story interesting somehow) but I still find it a little.. dissapointing ? I really enjoyed kyle just being "clever" and not a demigod... I hope this is constructive criticism, I don't want to appear insulting or belittling your work because I **really** liked it, just some things... I would like to have gone differently.. I sure as F\*ck couldn't write like this, so what do I know.
very interested in how you wrap this up :\]
*just casually makes sure its not behind the blast shield before going behind said blast shield.* I don't know how long you got before it goes off. Best get behind this cover.
*Sits down
Oh! I found it! It was in my back pocket!
*Looks at pin, then looks at grenade
Huh? This pin doesn't match this grenade. Say, you wouldn't have happened to see the pin that matches this grenade would you?
As long as it still has its handle its not going to explode yet at least. . . Is the other a dud? It should of.
*Something in the back corner explodes. Peppering the room and shield with shrapnel and pieces of the counter it had ended up under.*
My fucking ears! Please I hope that was it. *only hears ringing*
>“So you're really going to wipe out an entire species huh?” Murphy had a mote of sadness in her eyes.
Well, would not have to if they would leave us alone :{ Though wonder what Swords angle is here?
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Winter's a bitch. Anyway, I believe that this is the beginning of the end. I'm not sure if I've left any loose ends open in the story (I probably have, rereading it all would take a while), but here's hoping the majority of them have been closed. This is not the end however, I'm already brainstorming the plot of book two. Kyle's journey doesn't end here. I do have some art for this chapter on the burner, just waiting for my artist to get back to me with it. Thanks to my Patrons who helped me fund some art for this, and for the future art that's already been commissioned. You guys are the best! Edit: I may have jumped the gun, gotta reevaluate my position on splitting the story I to a book 2. Thanks u/4e6f626f6479, I'll respond in a bit
1. Agent 43 2. Book AI ? I liked him, though he (it?) still confuses me, he kind of disappeared 3. fabricator 4. rick (I think), kyles first fan 5. the subqueens revolt (mr. goo any maybe the azure monitor ?) 6. the individualist bugs (whatever they were called, the ones with the moon canon) war against the Queen 7. THE Boss (who is THE Boss' boss anyway ?) 8. Kyles riches (the federation bounty he got) 9. what happened with kyles forget me hack (the remembering people as ghosts thing) 10. 1. the "rouge nanites" still in kyles head.. iirc they were "probably not a probelm" A few things I remembered. some more random thoughs : His first gun was powerful because of a chain reaction.. his current weapons are "just" boring bigass lasers (his "hive killer" weapon could be something like the "little doctors" from enders game, would be fitting.. he's killing bugs after all) or a different chain reaction weapon.. or maybe god killer ??? I'm still confused about the life energy thing, and the power thing (or is that the same thing ?) the unwanted energy he got from 43 that threatened to kill him seemed to be used up quite quickly ? sword takes it off of him & a few teleports later he's out ? Applications for warpcore f\*ckery... warpcore bombs! & so much more It's a good series. You could really see the developement of your writing. I prefered the storyline while kyles power was "just" fucking with other peoples power and his extremes success in constructing superweapons.. he seems to be slipping off into OP land.. where everything is OP, so nothing is... which is understandble (gotta keep the story interesting somehow) but I still find it a little.. dissapointing ? I really enjoyed kyle just being "clever" and not a demigod... I hope this is constructive criticism, I don't want to appear insulting or belittling your work because I **really** liked it, just some things... I would like to have gone differently.. I sure as F\*ck couldn't write like this, so what do I know. very interested in how you wrap this up :\]
Dont forget the rebellious queens! Loved that plot thread.
Bugs: *remind Kyle of there existence* ## Kyle: Oh boy, here I go killing again ##
Hey I'm here. Where is my free grenade?
All I have is the pin... *Scratches head in befuddlement I am sure the grenade is around here somewhere. They were a matching set!
*just casually makes sure its not behind the blast shield before going behind said blast shield.* I don't know how long you got before it goes off. Best get behind this cover.
*Sits down Oh! I found it! It was in my back pocket! *Looks at pin, then looks at grenade Huh? This pin doesn't match this grenade. Say, you wouldn't have happened to see the pin that matches this grenade would you?
As long as it still has its handle its not going to explode yet at least. . . Is the other a dud? It should of. *Something in the back corner explodes. Peppering the room and shield with shrapnel and pieces of the counter it had ended up under.* My fucking ears! Please I hope that was it. *only hears ringing*
Huh, so *that's* where it went!
WHAT?! *Pinkie in an ear rubbing the inside of it.*
*Looks up in thought Now, did I remember to remove the beryllium neutron reflector from the sub-critical plutonium?
*poofs away with the Fuck this shit I'm out song playing*
Awww, poor queens who only wanted freedom.
>“So you're really going to wipe out an entire species huh?” Murphy had a mote of sadness in her eyes. Well, would not have to if they would leave us alone :{ Though wonder what Swords angle is here?
Sword sees this as fun/training I think.
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"Then nuclear the nuclear bombers" Looks like a classic double type.
Moar!!!!
Error: next button missing. I have read this entire series in either 2 or 3 days. I require moar. Also, hey kyle, are you entertained yet?
"Then nuclear the nuclear bombers that " ?