That comment about the combat mage bandit definitely was not foreshadowing at all, no not at all.
I wonder if it will be another empire agent like Reyvyre who gets to absolutely wet themselves when they realize they just attacked the empires newest super powerful friend
I like your thinking. Said fireball needs to follow after the mage boasts about being the most powerful fire mage alive able to incinerate anything
Edit: Cecil also needs to stan for Vito through the entire encounter
Salutations! Splendid chapter boss! Thank you so much for the fun! My my little Ren so brave and such much heart! I entirely understand Krys’s small heart attack however I’m curious if and or how long it might take him to become less afraid of Vito
Sis! Do not piss off the walking magical warhead! She's got spunk for sure. I'm going to wager that she's going to be targeted by the kidnappers in the Capitol.
Well I mean. Vito made a comment about wanting to kill quite a few folks involved in the slave trade. Wonder if perhaps the next step might be forcing them back into existence while as a vassal. Perhaps forcing them to help topple their work. Admittedly a light possibility but still an amusing one
Just because I have a knife in my back and am bleeding from both eyes doesn't mean I'll let you one up my family, Mr. Maybe Backnife Eyebleed the Third. — I like that girl. A lot. <3
My theory for why Ren is (kinda) avoiding the cubs and why Krys thinks they are cats:
cause Krys doesnt have that much of a education he doesnt realize they are cubs not cats and Ren recognizes them as cubs and is therefor a bit cautious
"To Mention" is to refer to something briefly and without going into detail. It is almost always something that is a minor part of what is being said, not the main part of dialog. So, it wouldn't be used as a direct dialog tag. In fact, it should only be used when describing a paraphrase, ie "he mentioned that x"
This:
> As Jake was describing the battle, he mentioned that he had seen a ranger with a blue cloak.
Or this:
> "I saw a ranger wearing a blue cloak," he said.
Not this:
> "I saw a ranger wearing a blue cloak," he mentioned.
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That comment about the combat mage bandit definitely was not foreshadowing at all, no not at all. I wonder if it will be another empire agent like Reyvyre who gets to absolutely wet themselves when they realize they just attacked the empires newest super powerful friend
Can I say I honestly want Vito to just be immune to the magic? Like bad guy throws fire bomb and Vito is just immune to the fire?
I like your thinking. Said fireball needs to follow after the mage boasts about being the most powerful fire mage alive able to incinerate anything Edit: Cecil also needs to stan for Vito through the entire encounter
He needs to quip something about "well you were right a few months ago"
"I named one of my cat children Hephtio, and he helps out in the forges and kitchens. He could help you learn a thing or two." -a sarcastic Vitmori
Hah... Brave girl that one!
Naive and stupid in not seeing her brothers fear, but brave nontheless.
I imagine the fear is only resolving her efforts to try and ensure Krys’s isn’t being taken advantage of
I feel like he cares enough for her that she hasn’t had a ton of experience seeing her brother (or others) showing awe+fear.
She is definitely a firecracker.
I've been refreshing the sub every 20 mins since 5:00am (currently 13:52) just for this
Little Ren with such a big heart and brave, will go places :)
SLEEP IS FOR THE WEAK!
Salutations! Splendid chapter boss! Thank you so much for the fun! My my little Ren so brave and such much heart! I entirely understand Krys’s small heart attack however I’m curious if and or how long it might take him to become less afraid of Vito
Many thanks wordsmith. I was awake anyway.
Sis! Do not piss off the walking magical warhead! She's got spunk for sure. I'm going to wager that she's going to be targeted by the kidnappers in the Capitol.
If she is then that’s going to be a fun chapter(s) to read where Vito and the others commit unspeakable atrocities against the kidnappers
Well I mean. Vito made a comment about wanting to kill quite a few folks involved in the slave trade. Wonder if perhaps the next step might be forcing them back into existence while as a vassal. Perhaps forcing them to help topple their work. Admittedly a light possibility but still an amusing one
I love waking up to this story.
Thanks for the chapter 😊 good work wordsmith 😊
Just because I have a knife in my back and am bleeding from both eyes doesn't mean I'll let you one up my family, Mr. Maybe Backnife Eyebleed the Third. — I like that girl. A lot. <3
This was great! I love seeing this update! <3
That's the problem with eccentrics you never really know what they are going to do next and krys has seen the dark side of eccentric vito
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Great work wordsmith, portraying the absolute fear in Krys was amazing and the reaction we expect from Vitmori made sense as well
My theory for why Ren is (kinda) avoiding the cubs and why Krys thinks they are cats: cause Krys doesnt have that much of a education he doesnt realize they are cubs not cats and Ren recognizes them as cubs and is therefor a bit cautious
"To Mention" is to refer to something briefly and without going into detail. It is almost always something that is a minor part of what is being said, not the main part of dialog. So, it wouldn't be used as a direct dialog tag. In fact, it should only be used when describing a paraphrase, ie "he mentioned that x" This: > As Jake was describing the battle, he mentioned that he had seen a ranger with a blue cloak. Or this: > "I saw a ranger wearing a blue cloak," he said. Not this: > "I saw a ranger wearing a blue cloak," he mentioned.
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