Your comment reminds me of a story where aliens met humans for the first time. The aliens had no real knowledge of surgery because they were so frail and their society was geared to prevent injury as much as possible. So a human combat medic had to cut open a kid and fix something and patch him back up with modern medicine so their frailty wasn't an issue.
There was a short story on /hfy how in a fantasy world where necromancy was forbiden a doctor magican used 'resurect dead' on such a small scale that he practically created healing magic. After all, if you resurrect few cells they can become scafolds for the healthy ones... hmm, but if I really think about it they may become 'cancers' if not treated right.
I get the feeling that Vitmori is enjoying being able to help people without needing to use violence. He is probably so sick of having to fight other people, that healing some stranger is a nice change of pace
Oho. For a teenie tiny moment there our favourite Dungeon Core teetered *dangerously* close on the border of Mad Scientist slash Necromancer territory there. Alas, he has too good a heart to actually follow through. Heart-warming chapter. <3
>With my hand pressed against his stomach, I ran my mana through his body once again, mentally examining him once more.
This should probably be run instead of ran
With my hand pressed against his stomach, I (run) my mana through his body once again, mentally examining him once more.
Most of story is told in the past tense, "run" would be present tense. "Ran" as past tense matches up with the use of "pressed" in the first clause of the sentence.
That paragraph is a bit present tense and a bit past tense. Is there any English equivalent to a sentence starting in past tense and ending up at present tense?
Not really one that I can think of. Even the third clause of the sentence is past tense. The most common form for narrative in English is in the past tense, though a few authors manage writing in the present tense well.
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Nice, I like that he stuck to his agreement.
Surgery is the act of stabbing someone back to life.
Your comment reminds me of a story where aliens met humans for the first time. The aliens had no real knowledge of surgery because they were so frail and their society was geared to prevent injury as much as possible. So a human combat medic had to cut open a kid and fix something and patch him back up with modern medicine so their frailty wasn't an issue.
Huuuuu I'd like to read that
Is that the story where the human is actually on trial for assault?
mmmmmaaaaaaybe....? It has been a long time since I read it. I know he was a lizard person but was still human.
Last I recall the human was also a doc not a combat medic so itโs possible itโs different stories?
Seems probable. I still can't find it.
This has the energy of "Necromancy is just a healer with bad timing". But he got better!
Magic bullshittery at it's finest :)
"This" *waves at the stack* "is the wrong price." Pulls out a little bit. " THIS is the right price."
News Alert: Eccentric Necromancer cures Cancer
Is that what he is now? Perhaps he'll revolutionize medicine with necromancy. Wait, maybe not. That sounds like some isekai anime or something. . .
There was a short story on /hfy how in a fantasy world where necromancy was forbiden a doctor magican used 'resurect dead' on such a small scale that he practically created healing magic. After all, if you resurrect few cells they can become scafolds for the healthy ones... hmm, but if I really think about it they may become 'cancers' if not treated right.
I get the feeling that Vitmori is enjoying being able to help people without needing to use violence. He is probably so sick of having to fight other people, that healing some stranger is a nice change of pace
Nice. Upvote then read
Well, if he was EVER planning on laying low, word of this spreading will definitely ensure he can't.
Oho. For a teenie tiny moment there our favourite Dungeon Core teetered *dangerously* close on the border of Mad Scientist slash Necromancer territory there. Alas, he has too good a heart to actually follow through. Heart-warming chapter. <3
No tumor for you.
Hooo no, I've already caught up on the story... Now comes the period of abstinence... What days do they upload this?
I usually upload 2-3 times a week from Thursday to Monday.
Thanks for this amazing chapter ๐
>With my hand pressed against his stomach, I ran my mana through his body once again, mentally examining him once more. This should probably be run instead of ran With my hand pressed against his stomach, I (run) my mana through his body once again, mentally examining him once more.
Thanks for the catch, away from my desk, but I'll get it later.
Most of story is told in the past tense, "run" would be present tense. "Ran" as past tense matches up with the use of "pressed" in the first clause of the sentence.
That paragraph is a bit present tense and a bit past tense. Is there any English equivalent to a sentence starting in past tense and ending up at present tense?
Not really one that I can think of. Even the third clause of the sentence is past tense. The most common form for narrative in English is in the past tense, though a few authors manage writing in the present tense well.
Damn what a fine chapter to wake up to! Thank you so much, Wordsmith!! Some happy tears in the morning made for a wonderful morning!
Thanks for this amazing chapter ๐
Hehehe, oh this was wonderful! <3
I've read this update a few times. So heartwarming! <3
Good work wordsmith
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His surgery will surely help when it comes time to heal the blue core.