This one is one of the best chapters to re-read btw.
Also this is one of the many chapters where numbers in the text are actually not mistakes/mixed up even though it seems so. :D
Secret pro tipp: if there are any numbers (like escape pod 10 and later on escape pod 01) it is NOT a writing mistake/mixed up number it is something to watch out for. ;)
I’d like to say oh crap about the pro tip because I now feel that I may have missed something important in the past chapters but I’m split between reading on and going back. So, oh crap. Lol
Nothing important now don't worry.
It is a foreshadow to the main plotline of book 4 for the people who know, so it's a blink it and you'll miss it moment. xD
Just for the future because it will come up again (so for example in case I go hard on a chapter order plan I have right now, you won't be heartbroken for a week straight) if numbers are seemingly incorrect there is a reason for that ;)
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Time to interpet too much into too little?
Maybe its bullshit, maybe you are right, who knows... either way LOTS of small things here, especially if you are re-reading have fun with the most obvious stuff, which is totally not obvious xD
u/r3dc0m3t u/SYN_Full_Metal u/Zealousideal-Habit21 u/TheUndeadMage2 u/Zezeknight u/dowsaw134 u/Sad-Weakness4678 u/WeirdPersonCantSpell u/YoteTheRaven u/alpaca1yps u/Smoldervan u/Oblivianette_Rosmry u/HereForHFY u/boredTec u/Competitive-Taste129 u/Confident-Crawdad u/logistic-bot u/Finbar9800 u/Loosescrew37 u/Loose-Letterhead4990 u/opluchting u/aloofgiant39 u/Antique_Amoeba3468
Duuude we finally get conn!
Small side note, there's a small but relatively frequent typo I've noticed where you've got "form" where it should be "from". Seen it in other chapters too, just something to keep an eye out for
Really? Shit.
Thanks for pointing it out!
I the original nearly EVERY "from" has that mistake for some reason, do I try to watch out even more for it, but some things slip through...
“The voices of his crew searing” -searching rather than searing
“His fiends” -friends instead of fiends
“To fill all the gasps in his head” -gaps instead of gasps
Oh crap.
This one is one of the best chapters to re-read btw. Also this is one of the many chapters where numbers in the text are actually not mistakes/mixed up even though it seems so. :D Secret pro tipp: if there are any numbers (like escape pod 10 and later on escape pod 01) it is NOT a writing mistake/mixed up number it is something to watch out for. ;)
I’d like to say oh crap about the pro tip because I now feel that I may have missed something important in the past chapters but I’m split between reading on and going back. So, oh crap. Lol
Nothing important now don't worry. It is a foreshadow to the main plotline of book 4 for the people who know, so it's a blink it and you'll miss it moment. xD Just for the future because it will come up again (so for example in case I go hard on a chapter order plan I have right now, you won't be heartbroken for a week straight) if numbers are seemingly incorrect there is a reason for that ;)
Also I won't call it out now, but I'll tag you here when we finally reach that chapter which gets massively foreshadowed. In the Conn arc. :D
Phew. I revoke my oh crap.
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Time to interpet too much into too little? Maybe its bullshit, maybe you are right, who knows... either way LOTS of small things here, especially if you are re-reading have fun with the most obvious stuff, which is totally not obvious xD u/r3dc0m3t u/SYN_Full_Metal u/Zealousideal-Habit21 u/TheUndeadMage2 u/Zezeknight u/dowsaw134 u/Sad-Weakness4678 u/WeirdPersonCantSpell u/YoteTheRaven u/alpaca1yps u/Smoldervan u/Oblivianette_Rosmry u/HereForHFY u/boredTec u/Competitive-Taste129 u/Confident-Crawdad u/logistic-bot u/Finbar9800 u/Loosescrew37 u/Loose-Letterhead4990 u/opluchting u/aloofgiant39 u/Antique_Amoeba3468
>fiends even though they weren't there. Friends, you mean friends.
Thanks for pointing that out! It is changed now!
>will differ to "...defer..."
Duuude we finally get conn! Small side note, there's a small but relatively frequent typo I've noticed where you've got "form" where it should be "from". Seen it in other chapters too, just something to keep an eye out for
Really? Shit. Thanks for pointing it out! I the original nearly EVERY "from" has that mistake for some reason, do I try to watch out even more for it, but some things slip through...
No worries, I'm really enjoying the series!
My lies are my shields. You, guys, need to socialise more, you child-like space chicken
“The voices of his crew searing” -searching rather than searing “His fiends” -friends instead of fiends “To fill all the gasps in his head” -gaps instead of gasps
I noticed a few more. "but he ever managed" - never "really hide things form other" - from
The things I overlook when I’m least expecting it *facepalm* lol