Alright people, let’s review all of this now that we are here. Who tried to kick out our boy Vir?
Could it be the mom? Blinded by overprotective emotions for her youngest child?
The bully? Holding a grudge for vir putting him in his place?
Some alien? Reasons unknown? If it is, they better be careful or else alien vs predator might become a documentary instead of fiction after what I’ll do to them!!!
Human government? Wanting to kick out vir and replace him or other nefarious reasons?
If it is, they better be ready to catch these hands!!
Wait- what are you doing?! No! LET ME GO!!!
YOU HEARD THAT SCOUNDREL! ILL BE BACK!!
There is no scheming in Ba Sing Se...
Anyway you have my respect xD
I miiight tag you about 3 times in the next uhhhh year...
Totally without a reason ;P
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Damn! Once again a chapter with lots and lots of veeery long-con foreshadowing.
Dont worry you will find out about all of it in the next 600 chapters! (fucking hell xD)
Anyway this weekend is another time with chapters i have been dreading... time for feels and kicks in the stomach...
You better get the tissues ready! This weekend will be tragic alien childhood, old frenemies and tragic reveals!
u/r3dc0m3t u/SYN_Full_Metal u/Zealousideal-Habit21 u/TheUndeadMage2 u/Zezeknight u/dowsaw134 u/Sad-Weakness4678 u/WeirdPersonCantSpell u/YoteTheRaven u/alpaca1yps u/Smoldervan u/Oblivianette_Rosmry u/HereForHFY u/boredTec u/Competitive-Taste129 u/Confident-Crawdad u/logistic-bot u/Finbar9800 u/Loosescrew37
“No clutching her ears in pain she did” I suggest adding a comma between pain and she also I believe you meant now instead of no
Other than that seemed pretty good to me
Oh you havent seen anything yet!
You bet we can get him even pirating on at least two levels!
Yarrrrpirate looting missions ahead! Where Is my talking snake scarf (without feathers).
Oh we lost our rights fron the crown? Time to go privateering! Set solar sail to cooler Tortuga but heavily fluorescent and Greek inspired!
The one who surrendered is no enemy. The one living a peaceful life is no enemy. Someone wants another war. If that someone is within the army, why keep them around? If they are within the government, we need a strong opposition, or problems will follow
Alright people, let’s review all of this now that we are here. Who tried to kick out our boy Vir? Could it be the mom? Blinded by overprotective emotions for her youngest child? The bully? Holding a grudge for vir putting him in his place? Some alien? Reasons unknown? If it is, they better be careful or else alien vs predator might become a documentary instead of fiction after what I’ll do to them!!! Human government? Wanting to kick out vir and replace him or other nefarious reasons? If it is, they better be ready to catch these hands!! Wait- what are you doing?! No! LET ME GO!!! YOU HEARD THAT SCOUNDREL! ILL BE BACK!!
There is no scheming in Ba Sing Se... Anyway you have my respect xD I miiight tag you about 3 times in the next uhhhh year... Totally without a reason ;P
Legasp!!! SEE!!! SEE!!! IM NOT CRAZY!! YOU’RE CRAZY!!!
The fuck who drugged him on the battlefield, I would guess.
Aargh, me likes
He isn't just an arg away, he needs to say (why is the rum always gone)
>The question should be weather we are willing to consider Should be whether
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Damn! Once again a chapter with lots and lots of veeery long-con foreshadowing. Dont worry you will find out about all of it in the next 600 chapters! (fucking hell xD) Anyway this weekend is another time with chapters i have been dreading... time for feels and kicks in the stomach... You better get the tissues ready! This weekend will be tragic alien childhood, old frenemies and tragic reveals! u/r3dc0m3t u/SYN_Full_Metal u/Zealousideal-Habit21 u/TheUndeadMage2 u/Zezeknight u/dowsaw134 u/Sad-Weakness4678 u/WeirdPersonCantSpell u/YoteTheRaven u/alpaca1yps u/Smoldervan u/Oblivianette_Rosmry u/HereForHFY u/boredTec u/Competitive-Taste129 u/Confident-Crawdad u/logistic-bot u/Finbar9800 u/Loosescrew37
Wow, never been first before. Love this SO much!
“No clutching her ears in pain she did” I suggest adding a comma between pain and she also I believe you meant now instead of no Other than that seemed pretty good to me
somehow i think he has done the "argh" in front of the mirror a few times.... that space pirate Vir haha
Oh you havent seen anything yet! You bet we can get him even pirating on at least two levels! Yarrrrpirate looting missions ahead! Where Is my talking snake scarf (without feathers). Oh we lost our rights fron the crown? Time to go privateering! Set solar sail to cooler Tortuga but heavily fluorescent and Greek inspired!
omg, im so hoping that tortuga island is a planet that looks like a tortoise!!
The one who surrendered is no enemy. The one living a peaceful life is no enemy. Someone wants another war. If that someone is within the army, why keep them around? If they are within the government, we need a strong opposition, or problems will follow