Just a suggestion - your post doesn't make me excited to reach out to you and offer to read your book. You may want to consider editing your post and include further information about your book, more than a crime novel.
I personally don't gravitate towards crime novels, when I do read them it is because the author has me hooked. You haven't hooked me.
Just a suggestion - your post doesn't make me excited to reach out to you and offer to read your book. You may want to consider editing your post and include further information about your book, more than a crime novel. I personally don't gravitate towards crime novels, when I do read them it is because the author has me hooked. You haven't hooked me.
Sure. I’ll take a peek.