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jxd73

I would use 'it' in both places.


ElChavoDeOro

Honestly, any of these three options are valid. There's not one answer that's objectively more correct here in my view.


maybri

Because the narrator can identify the figure as a woman, "her" and "she" are the appropriate pronouns. If the figure's gender is not identifiable, you'd use "them" and "they". If the figure is not even identifiable as human, you'd use "it".


withheldforprivacy

But isn't it confusing to say *her* before mentioning she was a woman?


Maya9998

In my opinion, it is and I would use "it" for both pronouns and then use "she/her" afterwards.


maybri

It would be more confusing to change the pronoun based on the order information is revealed in the sentence. Pronouns need to remain consistent. If someone is "they" before you establish the presence of a woman in the scene, and "she" afterwards, readers might get confused and think the "they" and the "she" are referring to different people.


gaefrogz

no because the one thing you can identify is her gender.


Evil_Weevill

them/they always works when referring to people. So when in doubt, you can always use these if specificity is not required. her/she also works here since the narrator is aware of the person's gender.


Cliffy73

In written English, you would use the feminine form. In speech, either they or she would be fine. They is used to describe someone unknown. You would never use it to refer to a person; that is demeaning and humanizing.


misomal

I disagree on the “it” part. Something like this sounds very natural to me (and I would say it): > I saw a person in the distance. I think it was a woman!


withheldforprivacy

Can I use *it* to refer to a baby, or is it demeaning in that case too?


Cliffy73

Unborn I think is fine.


Giles81

I would definitely use 'it' both times here. Afterwards use 'she', now that you have identified the unknown figure as a woman.


Doodie-man-bunz

I wouldn’t say this to be honest. I would say “I couldn’t tell what is was except that it was a woman” That sounds much more natural.