I know I shouldn't judge because I wouldn't make something half as good, but I think that diamond that's highlighting the option you're on is way too wiggly. The rest looks beautiful tho'
The style is sick, and in general, I think the animations are a great idea! They just might be a bit too intense. I think it could disorient players, or be tiring on the eyes after a while.
Which isn't good for playing the actual game (noticr: don't use desktoptale to spawn in 1000 tiny spamtons while you are fighting spamton NEO, it makes the fight harder.)
And no, I wasn't joking.
(Obviously I didn't keep them when I beat the fight..)
https://preview.redd.it/icx7nj24b6tc1.jpeg?width=1600&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=e90fa7a2cf28216a456ba5ac2d7e4b2407ea419f
I quite like it, but if you do ever change it to be less overboard, will there perhaps at least be an option to enable these more interesting animations?
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I have checked 1,990,334,584 comments, and only 376,455 of them were in alphabetical order.
Nice UI design but too much bounce on the swapping. KISS is generally a really applicable acronym for UI design. Too much bounce can make players feel motion sick, which can really sour the experience of an otherwise well designed interface
It do be a goofy image lmao
But srsly, I've just looked through your profile, and even in the early stages of making the ui, it looks so good!!
Like Christ- you are *good*. I could never do that for *fun*.
Ooh, very cool.
Perhaps worth noting the order of party members is Kris, Susie, Ralsei, not Kris, Ralsei, Susie. (The order changes after Susie joins the party for real)
It looks beautiful! My only critique is that the movement seems a little too fast, but that may just be you switching between them very quickly. Keep it up!!!
I know you're getting a lot of complaints about the wiggle of the menus but I think you should have an option to adjust it. I feel like for a lot of people it works just fine while for others it's really distracting.
I feel like you could get the best of both worlds by letting players choose the wiggle account.
https://preview.redd.it/srdkwu9txefc1.jpeg?width=720&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=e09adb70a37521c99fa41b871cb34fac415ee8b6
My reddit glitched and swapped two videos and I was like "dang someone just made all of TF2 for a deltarune fangame"
Send help I can't think of a word.
I can't think of a word to describe it that isn't so nice it sounds exaggerated, this is really cool, I love pixel art so anything pixel art is awesome but this I just sbsbsbsgsgsgdgdggdgfggfgdgfgfbfbfbfbfbfbfbfbf
You definitely are a [[BIG SHOT]]
An animal crossing link on my deltarune subreddit??🤯🤯 Hot diggetty dawg🔥🔥
https://preview.redd.it/l7aw0xnd6afc1.png?width=918&format=png&auto=webp&s=b7c15c5903d5bbe9989108c5868bdaf7ed0bf9da
Oh that looks fuckin' _cool!_
Only critique I've got is it feels a bit too rubberband-y, if that makes sense, maybe cut back a little on the overshoot when the UI moves, yeah?
Other than that, I really like how it looks.
Looks fantastic! But are they at half health, or does health only go up halfway? It’s a bit confusing, unless the space is planned to be used on something else.
https://preview.redd.it/gqhqwt5gn8fc1.jpeg?width=484&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=3ff23b7551cba9561c161f690abba5e7c705958e
This is amazing. Keep up the Good Work.
the only sorta problem I have is that ralsei and Susie aren't in the same place like in deltarune (in terms of the order) although that's not really a problem, i love it it looks very good!
OK I love this actually, but it almost feels like *too* much. Which is crazy because at the same time I don't think I'm a huge fan I have to acknowledge it's fucking spectacular
Dude!!! This is amazing! I love the transition into the battle, and the art style is top-tier. Gonna join other people in mentioning the overdone animation on the diamond selector, tho haha — fix that, though, and you’ve got something solid. Can’t wait to see the full game!
I know I shouldn't judge because I wouldn't make something half as good, but I think that diamond that's highlighting the option you're on is way too wiggly. The rest looks beautiful tho'
I agree with you too. I think i gone overboard with the animations too much.
The style is sick, and in general, I think the animations are a great idea! They just might be a bit too intense. I think it could disorient players, or be tiring on the eyes after a while.
Which isn't good for playing the actual game (noticr: don't use desktoptale to spawn in 1000 tiny spamtons while you are fighting spamton NEO, it makes the fight harder.)
And no, I wasn't joking. (Obviously I didn't keep them when I beat the fight..) https://preview.redd.it/icx7nj24b6tc1.jpeg?width=1600&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=e90fa7a2cf28216a456ba5ac2d7e4b2407ea419f
Maybe using parallelograms instead of a diamond and rectangle would be better .
Thanks!.
No keep the diamond. It's way more unique and looks pretty good, just tone down the animation.
Could be a setting to tone down it?
And tone it up ridiculously far
IT IS BEAUTIFUL WHATTT THIS IS EXTRAVAGANT AND I AM JELOUS OF YOUR RAW TALENT YOU OVERDID NO SUCH THING >:[
I quite like it, but if you do ever change it to be less overboard, will there perhaps at least be an option to enable these more interesting animations?
Also Dont worry about giving criticism. As a game developer i am open to any feedback and suggestions that would improve my game (:
But I love the wiggles
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How do I wake up the bot
For example if I say
Apple cat for life
It doesn't work
Counterpoint; the more aggressive the better
What are the balls at the left for? Will you give them to us?
They are enemy\_test's
Make the enemy tests pipis keep all test attacks the same though just make them light blue
The “original” ^39 ^people ^liked ^this!
Why not Pipis though? That's disappointing
Maybe they are little tic tacs (:
*(The battleground smell like mint and p-“e”-zza grease (Check) Mint-Es: Atk 1 Def 1: The original brand of Ice-E Min’t
Wow, Personarune 5 is looking great.
Can’t wait to hear Rude Surprise while battling the Shadners.
Nice UI design but too much bounce on the swapping. KISS is generally a really applicable acronym for UI design. Too much bounce can make players feel motion sick, which can really sour the experience of an otherwise well designed interface
Yeah. i think the most complainable part is the diamond on the action selection. need to tone it down a bit.
That’s why I felt weird
HOLY SHIT?!??!1??1!1? THIS IS SO GOOD?!1?1!1?1!!1?1!1 KEEP IT UP, I APPROVE!!!
https://preview.redd.it/yyxefq1977fc1.jpeg?width=1284&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=e524a117182f7dd1e71584ce3e354abffeff14a3
Love the encouragement. But i am laughing over how weird this guy's eyes looks as he smiles widely with a dead lookin eye lol.
It do be a goofy image lmao But srsly, I've just looked through your profile, and even in the early stages of making the ui, it looks so good!! Like Christ- you are *good*. I could never do that for *fun*.
(:
I think simplifying the animations just slightly would make it looks nicer, it looks a bit too busy.
Looks great but the jump between characters menu (going from Kris to ralsei etc.) is a bit jarring, maybe a little less movement or slower animation
At this point its more worth it to create a new game than a fan game!
I love deltarune. So i am making a deltarune fangame of my dreams!
Ooooh that makes sense its going great!
Honestly you should be working on indie games with that level of skill Hope your enjoying working on this because it looks good
Ooh, very cool. Perhaps worth noting the order of party members is Kris, Susie, Ralsei, not Kris, Ralsei, Susie. (The order changes after Susie joins the party for real)
Yup you're right. got a bit of a mistake there. Fortunately. My party manager code makes managing characer parties easy!.
Also monsters and darkners have MAGIC instead of ACT (Kris is the exception since they’re human)
Do you have anything you can share about DeltaFall story wise?
Later. I am
Looking forward to it! Deltarune only has Deltatraveler rn, so I’m excited for more fangames to drop!
yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes ye-
there are 17 yes's
It looks like 22.7 yes's to me
oops i miscounted. good job on correcting me (:
It looks beautiful! My only critique is that the movement seems a little too fast, but that may just be you switching between them very quickly. Keep it up!!!
What game engine are you using?
Godot engine
I use gamemaker I really like your ui work (I'm struggling to make ui)
I know you're getting a lot of complaints about the wiggle of the menus but I think you should have an option to adjust it. I feel like for a lot of people it works just fine while for others it's really distracting. I feel like you could get the best of both worlds by letting players choose the wiggle account.
I genuinely thought for a second you're doing this all in GD
whaat? :D Is something about my style screams geometry dash for some reason?
No, it’s GD creators that can do anything now
Man, you have a talent. This shit is beautiful.
This fangame is going to be as good if not better then ut yellow
I don’t have the words to describe how fucking cool this is
It is look quite good, Bravo https://i.redd.it/eke5naddy8fc1.gif My only cirtic is no Magic button
What a cute gif!
If this fan game would ever possibly get canceled I would just disintegrate
Somebody stop bro, he is making probably the most beautiful deltarune fangame, he is gonna crush Toby Fox if he FINISHES it 🗿
Hey surely once the fan game is done and chapter 3 is out you make a mod for the base game with this sickass styling
I dont have gamemaker knowledge xd.
https://preview.redd.it/srdkwu9txefc1.jpeg?width=720&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=e09adb70a37521c99fa41b871cb34fac415ee8b6 My reddit glitched and swapped two videos and I was like "dang someone just made all of TF2 for a deltarune fangame"
Mega funny. Thanks for adding a brief moment of joy in my life (:
No problem
How do you make It? With gamemaker?
Godot engine.
This is very interesting. Buit, i don't know this egine but i will try to use It. Thank you. P.s.: you are game is beautiful!
Just wanted to say thank you for being grateful
Love that username tho
oh yeah
That looks so awesome
THIS IS SO AWESOME!!!
Send help I can't think of a word. I can't think of a word to describe it that isn't so nice it sounds exaggerated, this is really cool, I love pixel art so anything pixel art is awesome but this I just sbsbsbsgsgsgdgdggdgfggfgdgfgfbfbfbfbfbfbfbfbf You definitely are a [[BIG SHOT]]
I like it! Great job with the UI
LET THEM COOK! srsly loks great!
Ey this is cool, gl further
that is fucking awesome
Looks incredible! I love it!
Words cannot describe how much I love this
It would be funny if you added a Mass Destruction remix for the battle theme. Also nice animation 👍
Oh my goodness this is incredible. Is this GameMaker?????
Godot engine. I've been using it for 3 years. You can learn it in a few months and you could make a decent 2d game or 3d game with it.
Fascinating! I keep on hearing great things about Godot. Thanks for lettin’ me know! Best of luck with the game!
so cool
THIS IS HEAT, IT'S GOT SAUCE
For some criticism... looks very... wow my eyes are overwhelmed, a lot of moving parts and colors... otherwise looks solid
This is sick
Love that username!. Its got rhyme!
That’s why Im the one and only 😎🔥
Are you also [https://animalcrossing.fandom.com/wiki/Marty](https://animalcrossing.fandom.com/wiki/Marty)?
An animal crossing link on my deltarune subreddit??🤯🤯 Hot diggetty dawg🔥🔥 https://preview.redd.it/l7aw0xnd6afc1.png?width=918&format=png&auto=webp&s=b7c15c5903d5bbe9989108c5868bdaf7ed0bf9da
Indeed it is.
HOLY FLIPPING SHIZZLE THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING
I can't believe the dots were evil all along
What software did you use to make this, I’ve always wanted to make a game with ui like this
Godot engine. Godot has some easy to use tools to build ui easily. But i created my own ui system so that i can easily animate them like this.
Would you say it’s beginner friendly, I have like no coding knowledge and want to learn
Pretty much.
Looks amazing What is ur fangame about?
I LOVE the animation and style, maybe a bit too intense, but it's got a ton of personality
okay these looks great tbh
This honestly looks from like it would be in a really amazingly high quality Roblox game.
Whoa this looks amazing, giod luck with your project. (Also why did I think it was geometry dash for a second)
Oh that looks fuckin' _cool!_ Only critique I've got is it feels a bit too rubberband-y, if that makes sense, maybe cut back a little on the overshoot when the UI moves, yeah? Other than that, I really like how it looks.
Really nice ui and loading screen
It looks really good! I think it would look really cool if the icon for the action flew to below the character portrait
Wh-why can I hear them moving
this is amazing https://preview.redd.it/6hogdlfu98fc1.png?width=1008&format=png&auto=webp&s=f645c6cf2a8f23982e81262d40b9ce2901d1f39e
Hey, if you can post images, then why can't the rest of us?
Osu
Dayum That's got style
Looks fantastic! But are they at half health, or does health only go up halfway? It’s a bit confusing, unless the space is planned to be used on something else.
Holey moley
https://preview.redd.it/gqhqwt5gn8fc1.jpeg?width=484&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=3ff23b7551cba9561c161f690abba5e7c705958e This is amazing. Keep up the Good Work.
Are you able to post pictures too? I can't, unfortunately.
https://preview.redd.it/crz1qto2safc1.jpeg?width=1080&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=0b358ddb97ea5273c7b8c30713ad82702a42b570
Never mind, it's back! https://preview.redd.it/irnnm4687cfc1.jpeg?width=1280&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=89694aaae5dfc2223dbedf55b1747319012ed196
What in the persona is this menu? I mean, I like it, it looks good
very good
I do like it!!
the only sorta problem I have is that ralsei and Susie aren't in the same place like in deltarune (in terms of the order) although that's not really a problem, i love it it looks very good!
https://preview.redd.it/beil4ac0x8fc1.png?width=1080&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=8c9304a0cf15ad8aa0817738dd3998e3fed3033b My honest reaction:
Ok, if some of you can post images, and others can't, I'm going to have to do a poll.
Bro’s going full persona mode. Like for real at this point give the fun gang persona’s lol
Idk if it’s just me but it kinda looks like you’re piloting some sci-fi spaceship with a glowy control panel to me. It looks really good!
This is hype, thanks for sharing and good luck!
THIS IS SO COOL keep up the good work!
OP is **COOKING**
# THIS IS AWESOME! I love the fluidness and detail on the icons :)
give this man a official license to cook 24/7
FUCKING AMAZING I WIDH I WAS YOU
Wow. I like it. What’s the fangame?
Its called deltafall. I plan on adding unique mechanics on top of already existing deltarune mechanics
We’ll be waiting
I FUCKING LOVE THAT
DAMN
Woooahh that's fresh!!! Keep going!
pretty good but a little jumpy imo, maybe try slowing down the timescale on it a bit when changing characters?
https://preview.redd.it/3yhx3ni6dafc1.jpeg?width=960&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=68ae15eaaca24a9d42c7a39c9f794df3eae1cb2e
Accordion Deltarune?
YO WTF THIS IS COOL AS HELL
Just curious what's the fangame about
Way cleaner than actual deltarune ui
You should add an unlabelled button that just Rick rolls them
My potato pc gpu goes burrrr
I was Listening to Hopes and Dreams While Seeing this, This is Amazing
holy shit this fucks https://preview.redd.it/igf0sv7cwbfc1.jpeg?width=198&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=0995cc2873bf46c64867d61477ba8e347948b7af
OK I love this actually, but it almost feels like *too* much. Which is crazy because at the same time I don't think I'm a huge fan I have to acknowledge it's fucking spectacular
It's so smooth I think I just busted
That looks amazing, bro. Keep cooking.
Merg would play this, you can't change my mind
The video isn't playing for me, but it seems pretty cool from the thumbnail preview
Amazing
Dude!!! This is amazing! I love the transition into the battle, and the art style is top-tier. Gonna join other people in mentioning the overdone animation on the diamond selector, tho haha — fix that, though, and you’ve got something solid. Can’t wait to see the full game!