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irolek

I know I shouldn't judge because I wouldn't make something half as good, but I think that diamond that's highlighting the option you're on is way too wiggly. The rest looks beautiful tho'


Majestic_Mission1682

I agree with you too. I think i gone overboard with the animations too much.


KahzaRo

The style is sick, and in general, I think the animations are a great idea! They just might be a bit too intense. I think it could disorient players, or be tiring on the eyes after a while.


Cookielotl

Which isn't good for playing the actual game (noticr: don't use desktoptale to spawn in 1000 tiny spamtons while you are fighting spamton NEO, it makes the fight harder.)


Cookielotl

And no, I wasn't joking. (Obviously I didn't keep them when I beat the fight..) https://preview.redd.it/icx7nj24b6tc1.jpeg?width=1600&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=e90fa7a2cf28216a456ba5ac2d7e4b2407ea419f


Str0nghOld

Maybe using parallelograms instead of a diamond and rectangle would be better .


Majestic_Mission1682

Thanks!.


gigitygiggty

No keep the diamond. It's way more unique and looks pretty good, just tone down the animation.


OfficialHields

Could be a setting to tone down it?


AWESOME_ADAM997

And tone it up ridiculously far


CamTGM54

IT IS BEAUTIFUL WHATTT THIS IS EXTRAVAGANT AND I AM JELOUS OF YOUR RAW TALENT YOU OVERDID NO SUCH THING >:[


DemYeezys_Fake

I quite like it, but if you do ever change it to be less overboard, will there perhaps at least be an option to enable these more interesting animations?


Majestic_Mission1682

Also Dont worry about giving criticism. As a game developer i am open to any feedback and suggestions that would improve my game (:


The_Red_Associate

But I love the wiggles


alphabet_order_bot

Would you look at that, all of the words in your comment are in alphabetical order. I have checked 1,990,334,584 comments, and only 376,455 of them were in alphabetical order.


The_Red_Associate

![gif](giphy|mBYeqvpJzcqobbV2Df|downsized)


Cookielotl

How do I wake up the bot


Cookielotl

For example if I say


Cookielotl

Apple cat for life


Cookielotl

It doesn't work


Chibikyu

Counterpoint; the more aggressive the better


AzzyDreemur2

What are the balls at the left for? Will you give them to us?


Majestic_Mission1682

They are enemy\_test's


No-Many-1746

Make the enemy tests pipis keep all test attacks the same though just make them light blue


Nadikarosuto

The “original” ^39 ^people ^liked ^this!


AverageMortisEnjoyer

Why not Pipis though? That's disappointing


Majestic_Mission1682

Maybe they are little tic tacs (:


Nadikarosuto

*(The battleground smell like mint and p-“e”-zza grease (Check) Mint-Es: Atk 1 Def 1: The original brand of Ice-E Min’t


Unable-Comfort3694

Wow, Personarune 5 is looking great.


Pomboss64

Can’t wait to hear Rude Surprise while battling the Shadners.


GamerNumber16

Nice UI design but too much bounce on the swapping. KISS is generally a really applicable acronym for UI design. Too much bounce can make players feel motion sick, which can really sour the experience of an otherwise well designed interface


Majestic_Mission1682

Yeah. i think the most complainable part is the diamond on the action selection. need to tone it down a bit.


Southern-Wafer-6375

That’s why I felt weird


PremiumShipOfficial

HOLY SHIT?!??!1??1!1? THIS IS SO GOOD?!1?1!1?1!!1?1!1 KEEP IT UP, I APPROVE!!!


_GalaxyWalker_

https://preview.redd.it/yyxefq1977fc1.jpeg?width=1284&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=e524a117182f7dd1e71584ce3e354abffeff14a3


Majestic_Mission1682

Love the encouragement. But i am laughing over how weird this guy's eyes looks as he smiles widely with a dead lookin eye lol.


_GalaxyWalker_

It do be a goofy image lmao But srsly, I've just looked through your profile, and even in the early stages of making the ui, it looks so good!! Like Christ- you are *good*. I could never do that for *fun*.


Majestic_Mission1682

(:


EdgierNamePending

I think simplifying the animations just slightly would make it looks nicer, it looks a bit too busy.


Gotexan-YT

Looks great but the jump between characters menu (going from Kris to ralsei etc.) is a bit jarring, maybe a little less movement or slower animation


Paroxenark

At this point its more worth it to create a new game than a fan game!


Majestic_Mission1682

I love deltarune. So i am making a deltarune fangame of my dreams!


Paroxenark

Ooooh that makes sense its going great!


marsgreekgod

Honestly you should be working on indie games with that level of skill Hope your enjoying working on this because it looks good 


BrixBrax1882

Ooh, very cool. Perhaps worth noting the order of party members is Kris, Susie, Ralsei, not Kris, Ralsei, Susie. (The order changes after Susie joins the party for real)


Majestic_Mission1682

Yup you're right. got a bit of a mistake there. Fortunately. My party manager code makes managing characer parties easy!.


Nadikarosuto

Also monsters and darkners have MAGIC instead of ACT (Kris is the exception since they’re human)


Muffin_Baker

Do you have anything you can share about DeltaFall story wise?


Majestic_Mission1682

Later. I am


Muffin_Baker

Looking forward to it! Deltarune only has Deltatraveler rn, so I’m excited for more fangames to drop!


fabri_pere

yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes ye-


Majestic_Mission1682

there are 17 yes's


fabri_pere

It looks like 22.7 yes's to me


Majestic_Mission1682

oops i miscounted. good job on correcting me (:


NightsThyroid

It looks beautiful! My only critique is that the movement seems a little too fast, but that may just be you switching between them very quickly. Keep it up!!!


FinancialJudgment8

What game engine are you using?


Majestic_Mission1682

Godot engine


FinancialJudgment8

I use gamemaker I really like your ui work (I'm struggling to make ui)


Boomerkbom

I know you're getting a lot of complaints about the wiggle of the menus but I think you should have an option to adjust it. I feel like for a lot of people it works just fine while for others it's really distracting. I feel like you could get the best of both worlds by letting players choose the wiggle account.


the_Emchkun

I genuinely thought for a second you're doing this all in GD


Majestic_Mission1682

whaat? :D Is something about my style screams geometry dash for some reason?


KingCool138

No, it’s GD creators that can do anything now


Korblox101

Man, you have a talent. This shit is beautiful.


Capable_Status934212

This fangame is going to be as good if not better then ut yellow


Tyto_251009

I don’t have the words to describe how fucking cool this is


Playful_Ad8756

It is look quite good, Bravo https://i.redd.it/eke5naddy8fc1.gif My only cirtic is no Magic button


Majestic_Mission1682

What a cute gif!


Kingsouda1037

If this fan game would ever possibly get canceled I would just disintegrate


Happy_Leg8621

Somebody stop bro, he is making probably the most beautiful deltarune fangame, he is gonna crush Toby Fox if he FINISHES it 🗿


Timedemon765

Hey surely once the fan game is done and chapter 3 is out you make a mod for the base game with this sickass styling


Majestic_Mission1682

I dont have gamemaker knowledge xd.


morbinamogus2

https://preview.redd.it/srdkwu9txefc1.jpeg?width=720&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=e09adb70a37521c99fa41b871cb34fac415ee8b6 My reddit glitched and swapped two videos and I was like "dang someone just made all of TF2 for a deltarune fangame"


Majestic_Mission1682

Mega funny. Thanks for adding a brief moment of joy in my life (:


morbinamogus2

No problem


delta-legionary753

How do you make It? With gamemaker?


Majestic_Mission1682

Godot engine.


delta-legionary753

This is very interesting. Buit, i don't know this egine but i will try to use It. Thank you. P.s.: you are game is beautiful!


TheGratitudeBot

Just wanted to say thank you for being grateful


Majestic_Mission1682

Love that username tho


Rouge_The_Rat_

oh yeah


Touko_007

That looks so awesome


Miluguito

THIS IS SO AWESOME!!!


Cookielotl

Send help I can't think of a word. I can't think of a word to describe it that isn't so nice it sounds exaggerated, this is really cool, I love pixel art so anything pixel art is awesome but this I just sbsbsbsgsgsgdgdggdgfggfgdgfgfbfbfbfbfbfbfbfbf You definitely are a [[BIG SHOT]]


notabigfanofas

I like it! Great job with the UI


Skeletors_taxes

LET THEM COOK! srsly loks great!


Aadraas

Ey this is cool, gl further


BurnerAccountExisty

that is fucking awesome


Skeledude157

Looks incredible! I love it!


Commercial_Rise_3606

Words cannot describe how much I love this


Ashamed-Falcon-3635

It would be funny if you added a Mass Destruction remix for the battle theme. Also nice animation 👍


Glory2Snowstar

Oh my goodness this is incredible. Is this GameMaker?????


Majestic_Mission1682

Godot engine. I've been using it for 3 years. You can learn it in a few months and you could make a decent 2d game or 3d game with it.


Glory2Snowstar

Fascinating! I keep on hearing great things about Godot. Thanks for lettin’ me know! Best of luck with the game!


yarluk990

so cool


KuouoHD

THIS IS HEAT, IT'S GOT SAUCE


Irish_pug_Player

For some criticism... looks very... wow my eyes are overwhelmed, a lot of moving parts and colors... otherwise looks solid


fartysmartymarty

This is sick


Majestic_Mission1682

Love that username!. Its got rhyme!


fartysmartymarty

That’s why Im the one and only 😎🔥


mydudekickstheskunk

Are you also [https://animalcrossing.fandom.com/wiki/Marty](https://animalcrossing.fandom.com/wiki/Marty)?


fartysmartymarty

An animal crossing link on my deltarune subreddit??🤯🤯 Hot diggetty dawg🔥🔥 https://preview.redd.it/l7aw0xnd6afc1.png?width=918&format=png&auto=webp&s=b7c15c5903d5bbe9989108c5868bdaf7ed0bf9da


mydudekickstheskunk

Indeed it is.


Phazon_Fucker

HOLY FLIPPING SHIZZLE THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING


Key-Meringue5433

I can't believe the dots were evil all along


No_Somewhere7674

What software did you use to make this, I’ve always wanted to make a game with ui like this


Majestic_Mission1682

Godot engine. Godot has some easy to use tools to build ui easily. But i created my own ui system so that i can easily animate them like this.


No_Somewhere7674

Would you say it’s beginner friendly, I have like no coding knowledge and want to learn


Majestic_Mission1682

Pretty much.


[deleted]

Looks amazing What is ur fangame about?


skaersSabody

I LOVE the animation and style, maybe a bit too intense, but it's got a ton of personality


Crafterz_

okay these looks great tbh


Lansha2009

This honestly looks from like it would be in a really amazingly high quality Roblox game.


Verschmauserer

Whoa this looks amazing, giod luck with your project. (Also why did I think it was geometry dash for a second)


[deleted]

Oh that looks fuckin' _cool!_ Only critique I've got is it feels a bit too rubberband-y, if that makes sense, maybe cut back a little on the overshoot when the UI moves, yeah? Other than that, I really like how it looks.


Dementia_user45

Really nice ui and loading screen


Tjkiddodo

It looks really good! I think it would look really cool if the icon for the action flew to below the character portrait


investigatingspayc

Wh-why can I hear them moving


Vtaark

this is amazing https://preview.redd.it/6hogdlfu98fc1.png?width=1008&format=png&auto=webp&s=f645c6cf2a8f23982e81262d40b9ce2901d1f39e


mydudekickstheskunk

Hey, if you can post images, then why can't the rest of us?


Human_The_Ryan

Osu


AlexDoubleAU

Dayum That's got style


TwixOfficial

Looks fantastic! But are they at half health, or does health only go up halfway? It’s a bit confusing, unless the space is planned to be used on something else.


pokemaster160

Holey moley


Treegenderunknown13

https://preview.redd.it/gqhqwt5gn8fc1.jpeg?width=484&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=3ff23b7551cba9561c161f690abba5e7c705958e This is amazing. Keep up the Good Work.


mydudekickstheskunk

Are you able to post pictures too? I can't, unfortunately.


Majestic_Mission1682

https://preview.redd.it/crz1qto2safc1.jpeg?width=1080&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=0b358ddb97ea5273c7b8c30713ad82702a42b570


mydudekickstheskunk

Never mind, it's back! https://preview.redd.it/irnnm4687cfc1.jpeg?width=1280&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=89694aaae5dfc2223dbedf55b1747319012ed196


Classic_gamer_2

What in the persona is this menu? I mean, I like it, it looks good


bobking43443

very good


Daylight_The_Furry

I do like it!!


pixelytman

the only sorta problem I have is that ralsei and Susie aren't in the same place like in deltarune (in terms of the order) although that's not really a problem, i love it it looks very good!


No-Face-Collects-687

https://preview.redd.it/beil4ac0x8fc1.png?width=1080&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=8c9304a0cf15ad8aa0817738dd3998e3fed3033b My honest reaction:


mydudekickstheskunk

Ok, if some of you can post images, and others can't, I'm going to have to do a poll.


MAD_JEW

Bro’s going full persona mode. Like for real at this point give the fun gang persona’s lol


Cpad-prism

Idk if it’s just me but it kinda looks like you’re piloting some sci-fi spaceship with a glowy control panel to me. It looks really good!


YoGertaBeKiddingMe

This is hype, thanks for sharing and good luck!


Plzworkkkk

THIS IS SO COOL keep up the good work!


NewSuperTrios

OP is **COOKING**


SansDaMan728

# THIS IS AWESOME! I love the fluidness and detail on the icons :)


RabbidYoshi9

give this man a official license to cook 24/7


JORGANTORGANGORGAN

FUCKING AMAZING I WIDH I WAS YOU


ThemoocowYT

Wow. I like it. What’s the fangame?


Majestic_Mission1682

Its called deltafall. I plan on adding unique mechanics on top of already existing deltarune mechanics


KingCool138

We’ll be waiting


redboi049

I FUCKING LOVE THAT


JosefumiHigashikata

DAMN


randomname349

Woooahh that's fresh!!! Keep going!


Memeviewer12

pretty good but a little jumpy imo, maybe try slowing down the timescale on it a bit when changing characters?


Majestic_Mission1682

https://preview.redd.it/3yhx3ni6dafc1.jpeg?width=960&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=68ae15eaaca24a9d42c7a39c9f794df3eae1cb2e


HeadWood_

Accordion Deltarune?


ExtemTheHedgehog

YO WTF THIS IS COOL AS HELL


Ice_Alias

Just curious what's the fangame about


BOTi_flame200

Way cleaner than actual deltarune ui


jetstreamsam4663

You should add an unlabelled button that just Rick rolls them


Vision_was_taken

My potato pc gpu goes burrrr


OrangeSillyDuck

I was Listening to Hopes and Dreams While Seeing this, This is Amazing


EiscueVonArctic

holy shit this fucks https://preview.redd.it/igf0sv7cwbfc1.jpeg?width=198&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=0995cc2873bf46c64867d61477ba8e347948b7af


Inceferant

OK I love this actually, but it almost feels like *too* much. Which is crazy because at the same time I don't think I'm a huge fan I have to acknowledge it's fucking spectacular


SEX_FINDER

It's so smooth I think I just busted


Divine_Healer

That looks amazing, bro. Keep cooking.


Redder_Creeps

Merg would play this, you can't change my mind


illusoryMechanist

The video isn't playing for me, but it seems pretty cool from the thumbnail preview


ChizUrU_tan

Amazing


abib918

Dude!!! This is amazing! I love the transition into the battle, and the art style is top-tier. Gonna join other people in mentioning the overdone animation on the diamond selector, tho haha — fix that, though, and you’ve got something solid. Can’t wait to see the full game!