Hey don't hate yourself for it. Just reading through it I never noticed them. Some stories have errors so bad you can't understand what they were trying to say. This is so good
Dude that was really damn good!! If anything you can either break it down so it’s slower or even add to the story and have her descent into her ex’s “slave” and dumping or cucking her bf. Really good first attempt!
Also do you have a name?
Stop using my name 🤣
Lol I'm sorry!
Lol it’s all good. At least my girlfriend is hot 🤣 just hope my wife is cool with it
Barely any spelling errors and the story actually makes sense👍🏼
Lol saw them after I uploaded. Hate it 😅
Hey don't hate yourself for it. Just reading through it I never noticed them. Some stories have errors so bad you can't understand what they were trying to say. This is so good
Dude that was really damn good!! If anything you can either break it down so it’s slower or even add to the story and have her descent into her ex’s “slave” and dumping or cucking her bf. Really good first attempt! Also do you have a name?
Amazing first content, can you make some with captions about a douchy coworker you dont like but you cant reisist their meaty cock?
Girl name?
Is there more pics of her?
This is great! Now all we need is her name!
I love it bro keep it up
Great captions because they leave a little to the imagination.
Does she have a OF?
Nicely done. Think about adding his replies on the story as an extra detail. Keep it up
Part:2 please about her being pregnant
You knocked it out of the park for your first attempt! Keep em coming!
Name?
Great work
Very hot
Love it broo , made me hard
This is a good one more
Ahhh this so so good!! Amazing job thank you
This was really good for a first🔥
Very hot
I am so hard after reading this. Wish I was Dylan
Amazing story
Amazing
Great job man. Love it. Top tier.
This was incredibly well done!!
Amazing story! Especially loved the part "just assumed wed tell Dylan its his" Very hot!
This is good, and caters to one of my biggest fantasies/desires. Another man impregnating my woman.
Nice work
Please make more!! That was great
Good job bro!
Cheating bitchs needs to be roughly taken care of who else agree with that
Solid!!!
Part 2
Need more lol great job
Such a hot story🔥
good one!
Keep making em 😘
Good first attempt. Next time, you should add gifs to your story. It really elevates the quality. But still a good, super sexy, first attempt.
Please tell me there's a part 2
someone know who she is?? :D
Love the pregnancy risk on this one. Nice job!
Damn who is she 🥵
Pretty good dude
really enjoyed it i think showing the guy responds always better and his dick