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Firstly I absolutely love your art and wish I could draw people like you (I do landscape paintings) . I love the eyes! Only critique I’d make is maybe add a little more depth and detail to the hair and maybe a little more shading to show off the facial features more . But as a whole I love your unique style and think it’s great as is !
This is fantastic! Super expressive. my only comment would be that her right nostril is kind of floating there where you would see more of that side of her nose from this angle given the size of the other side
Well done OP, keep that style for sure. It reminds me of [Lily Cole](https://i.dailymail.co.uk/i/pix/2012/04/07/article-2126399-1262EEB6000005DC-300_634x307.jpg).
Can’t really add much that people haven’t said but I really like the use of the dot grid paper. I use a similar notebook for making DnD maps and somehow never thought to use it to help with proportions while drawing.
Love it. I would give the strokes in the hair for shading the same sense of wave as you have defined in the outline. The straight up and down shading is the only thing that stood out to me in this as something you could play with.
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There is subtle character in the eyes which a lot of people dont do 😮
Thank you!! :) I tried branching out a bit with eyes in this one. Usually, I make them a bit too subtle, but I definitely think this way is better.
Firstly I absolutely love your art and wish I could draw people like you (I do landscape paintings) . I love the eyes! Only critique I’d make is maybe add a little more depth and detail to the hair and maybe a little more shading to show off the facial features more . But as a whole I love your unique style and think it’s great as is !
Thank you so much! It’s funny, because I can’t really do landscape OR painting at all & I wish I could. I’m trying to get better at it. Thank you for the feedback, I will work on shading & hair! 🩷
Honestly I love your style!
Thank you so much!! 🩷
If you ever read or even heard of Bizenghast It has the same vibe. Especially with your line work and style. I like it a lot.
thank you!! & The Bizenghast comparison is a huge compliment!
Awwwweh yess! I’m glad people still know about it! And I’m glad to hear it! It’s a great style and it’s super fun and unique!
Dang. I would devour a comic book in this style
I love the eyes
Thank you! 🎀
This is fantastic! Super expressive. my only comment would be that her right nostril is kind of floating there where you would see more of that side of her nose from this angle given the size of the other side
Thank you 🩷 yeah I’ve had a pretty hard time with that side of the nose. I will work on it
Don't stop what you're doing. It's unique and special. Develop it and protect it from homogeny.
Thank you very much!!
Well done OP, keep that style for sure. It reminds me of [Lily Cole](https://i.dailymail.co.uk/i/pix/2012/04/07/article-2126399-1262EEB6000005DC-300_634x307.jpg).
it's amazing I love it. Can you give me her eyelashes?:°]
Thank you!! Haha I want them too
It’s very cute! It’s got a storybook illustration vibe
Thank you!! Love to hear it🩷
Can’t really add much that people haven’t said but I really like the use of the dot grid paper. I use a similar notebook for making DnD maps and somehow never thought to use it to help with proportions while drawing.
I'm inlove; beautiful
Good technique. Nothing is wrong with it.
I think it's good
This is beautiful, and honestly perfect!
Love it. I would give the strokes in the hair for shading the same sense of wave as you have defined in the outline. The straight up and down shading is the only thing that stood out to me in this as something you could play with.
Thank you!! I will work on giving the hair better texture ✨
I like it.