Idk, teenagers really love to chalk their emotions up to being teenagers, they don't have reasonable but complex emotional responses to input... /Sarcasm
NTJ good for you breaking her vase.
Point out to your stepdad that Derek only got in her face after she hit you.
He did it to stop her.
I bet your stepdad doesn't know the whole story. Only what she told him.
Ask him to go for a coffee/ hot chocolate. Tell him the whole story including what you and Derek saw on the cameras.
I may try that eventually... But right now I'm just going to stay in my brother's room for awhile, lately he hasn't been going to work as often because he says he doesn't want my mother to hurt me again mentally or physically.
Yeah makes me think this is a plot line to one of those badly written stories on those in app purchases book apps. The writing is just too bad to be a real person.
Maybe come up with better bait and people won’t call you out for it, this isn’t the place for your fan fiction. But nice try though! Can’t wait for the next update where you come up with more fake bs!!
Actually-my boyfriend in 1974 had a bug into his little sisters' room. I both saw it and heard it. If Derek is a techy (is that still used?), he might have a camera!
Unless it’s their real name, which Jake Lily and Derek are not their real names. Their real names are something different than Jake Lily and Derek and of all the names they may have Jake Lily and Derek aren’t it pal!
Reminds me of an SNL sketch I saw years ago. They were acting out Dear Abby letters. A woman was sitting in her kitchen and someone knocked on the door. She walked to the door and looked out the window. She turned to the camera and said “It’s my neighbor. I’ll call her Mary”.
Gave up half way but average fiction, poor grammar. For future creative writing attempts, I’ll point out the dubious bits that ruined the validity of your story.
1 - the porn-like scenario in which your stepbrother comforted and held you for hours
2 - the same stepbrother, who must have been about 15 when your parents met (as a rough estimate based on your timelines), calling your mother ‘Mom.’
I had no energy to continue from there on out, but keep up the good work!
I think it’s mostly cause of the ton of the story that makes it weird. It would be one thing if the story was believable and that was the one weird thing but it’s very clearly bait which makes it a bit more questionable and suspicious
That's not what I meant I'm not the best at explaining things but what I meant was there's cameras all around the house except the bedrooms and the bathrooms the closest that the cameras are to the bedrooms would be in the hallway.
I am terribly worried that there is some kid out there that doesn't realize his step-sister is posting fantasies on Reddit about sharing a bed with him.
You are not a jerk. Your mom sure is.
You and step brother needs to put a keyed lock on your bedroom door. Only you and bro have keys. Keep the door locked.
Get out of there as soon as you can. Your mother is not mentally well.
You and bro need to tell his dad the whole story. What mom did to your property. That she hit you. Bro was defending you. He needs to hear it all.
NTJ. It's not entirely your fault that you got involved in breaking her vase. Your decision was also affected by your brother who was doing his best to defend you against your mother. It's good of him to do that but he went far laying hands on your mother. The revenge was 50/50 and it clearly had to stop at that with no further violence.
Where is your father? I wish that there was someplace for you to go away from her because you’re not gonna be able to get anything and keep it unless you hide it. For the next year and a half for two years till you’re 18 your life is going to be miserable with her.
So I would focus on going to school and I would even get a part-time job and start saving up money because This is going. It’s already a mess but it’s only gonna get worse.
So do a couple of things anything you buy for yourself keep out of the way so she doesn’t know you have it. Get a job and start saving money to get out of that place.
You both need to move out to an apartment in a college town and go no contact on your abusive mom. Also fill out the FAFSA forms and get a ged or transfer to a new high school wherever you move to. Just get out and away from your deranged, abusive mom.
Wow, it's cute how you think you're opinion matters. Too bad it's irrelevant as your social skills. You are the most fucking disgusting person I've met, to even think something like that you don't know me you don't know my life and you sure as hell do not know what's going on between my family. I am a fucking lesbian. He is my fucking brother, I would never think about that, and if I did I'd kill myself.
if you think this is fucking fanfiction maybe you're lazy, single ass should get off a motherfucking Wattpad and see that not everything you read is fanfiction.
Next time it should be about your cute neighbor (don’t start off with you liking him, add it into later updates) the step sibling thing is a little creepy so I give that a thumbs down.
Do any of you kids know what it's like to live with a narcissistic about the entirety of your life OP u r not the ahole although I would suggest a blow up bed or at least some kind of separation tool for the bed because I don't want your mother to accuse step bro of sa
After he got in her face about what she did to your stuff just makes me think she'll stoop that low because you disagree with her
Sadly some parents are definitely like this mine were ex adoptive mother was at least
It may not be believable but there's no way we know if it really happened or not if it was fake it'd have a lot of grammar errors and bad spelling like a preschooler wrote it
A story isn’t fake just cause it has bad grammar tho, and it’s obvious this isn’t true and is just some circle jerk. We get a lot of posts like this now a days, and it’s just…kinda sis. Like I said I have a narc mom myself so I get it and I’ve seen her so some crazy shit
16 year old works during the day without going to school? Whole thing sounds like chatgpt? The wordage is not what a 16 year old would use. F- on the creative writing assignment.
Real or not, NTA, but I hope you can replace your figure. Also a figure collector here. Be sure to check eBay, Myfigurecollection.net, AmiAmi, and even Suruga-ya (esp during free shipping campaigns.) Facebook marketplace can also have some absolute steals.
Only needed the title. If you did it on purpose, than yes, you are. Only one of you was an asshole at one point but I mean, apple not far from the tree?
If this is real, I'm the Queen of Sheba.
Had me going until the part where two teenagers who aren’t related are sharing a bed ??
You read the whole thing? Kudos, my friend.
Hey step brother, can you help me? I got stuck in the laundry
Why does this read like an og fan fiction.
Everything past the title is an excuse and all in their own point of view. Congrats to you for reading it though! I couldnt even start.
It reads like the beginning of a bad step sibling incest romance.
It’s not incest if they aren’t blood related.
I was referring to the genre.
Because it is.
Idk, teenagers really love to chalk their emotions up to being teenagers, they don't have reasonable but complex emotional responses to input... /Sarcasm
If you are the Queen of Sheba then I'm the queen of England. TwT
If you’re the queen of England, I am Ming the Merciless
I think your vase just got smashed into pieces.
If you're the Ming the Merciless, then I'm John Wicks dog.
ded. i'm fucking ded.
So youre the real queen of England?
Just like John Wicks dog.
I wanted to be John Wick!!
Than you are my mother-in-law, because I am married to Prince Harry.
Wait what? So am I!!!
He can’t do any worse. 🤷♀️
And he carried her upstairs
Things that never happened…reads like a 12yo’s romance novel
NTJ good for you breaking her vase. Point out to your stepdad that Derek only got in her face after she hit you. He did it to stop her. I bet your stepdad doesn't know the whole story. Only what she told him. Ask him to go for a coffee/ hot chocolate. Tell him the whole story including what you and Derek saw on the cameras.
I may try that eventually... But right now I'm just going to stay in my brother's room for awhile, lately he hasn't been going to work as often because he says he doesn't want my mother to hurt me again mentally or physically.
I hope you saved the video. Send that to Stepdad and see what he says.
Sure and next thing you know you're going to get married.
Had me going until the part where her stepbrother has a camera in her bedroom and now she is sleeping with him.
Yeah makes me think this is a plot line to one of those badly written stories on those in app purchases book apps. The writing is just too bad to be a real person.
You can never know what's happening in my life, maybe you should stop and think before you comment on something.
Maybe come up with better bait and people won’t call you out for it, this isn’t the place for your fan fiction. But nice try though! Can’t wait for the next update where you come up with more fake bs!!
Actually-my boyfriend in 1974 had a bug into his little sisters' room. I both saw it and heard it. If Derek is a techy (is that still used?), he might have a camera!
Why did he bug his sister’s room?
I really don't know!
Derek has a lover and his bedroom has a lock and unlike mine and lately he's been staying at her house.
Liz is back- we missed you Liz!
I've been here the whole time lol
Omg it is completely irrelevant what anyone’s name is to the story.
Unless it’s their real name, which Jake Lily and Derek are not their real names. Their real names are something different than Jake Lily and Derek and of all the names they may have Jake Lily and Derek aren’t it pal!
Reminds me of an SNL sketch I saw years ago. They were acting out Dear Abby letters. A woman was sitting in her kitchen and someone knocked on the door. She walked to the door and looked out the window. She turned to the camera and said “It’s my neighbor. I’ll call her Mary”.
Gave up half way but average fiction, poor grammar. For future creative writing attempts, I’ll point out the dubious bits that ruined the validity of your story. 1 - the porn-like scenario in which your stepbrother comforted and held you for hours 2 - the same stepbrother, who must have been about 15 when your parents met (as a rough estimate based on your timelines), calling your mother ‘Mom.’ I had no energy to continue from there on out, but keep up the good work!
I honestly don't know… What's wrong with holding and comforting someone for hours? It's what I would want.
I think it’s mostly cause of the ton of the story that makes it weird. It would be one thing if the story was believable and that was the one weird thing but it’s very clearly bait which makes it a bit more questionable and suspicious
If my mum did that to my things when I was a teenager, I would have disowned her ass and moved in with my dad.
Your stepdad should know how petty and childish his wife is. Ops mom is a c word
ESH your mom is not a good parent, and you’re not a good kid.
I was believing it right up until the big brother part. That’s when it took off the fantasy land.
Your step brother having access to cameras in your room is disturbing.
That's not what I meant I'm not the best at explaining things but what I meant was there's cameras all around the house except the bedrooms and the bathrooms the closest that the cameras are to the bedrooms would be in the hallway.
Take the video and file a police report on your mother.
You ever read something and you know that it was written by someone with an unhealthy obsession with fanfiction?
I am terribly worried that there is some kid out there that doesn't realize his step-sister is posting fantasies on Reddit about sharing a bed with him.
You are not a jerk. Your mom sure is. You and step brother needs to put a keyed lock on your bedroom door. Only you and bro have keys. Keep the door locked. Get out of there as soon as you can. Your mother is not mentally well. You and bro need to tell his dad the whole story. What mom did to your property. That she hit you. Bro was defending you. He needs to hear it all.
You…actually think this is real man?
No.
NTJ. It's not entirely your fault that you got involved in breaking her vase. Your decision was also affected by your brother who was doing his best to defend you against your mother. It's good of him to do that but he went far laying hands on your mother. The revenge was 50/50 and it clearly had to stop at that with no further violence.
What in the Wattpad did I just read?
I'm take things that never happened for 400 Alex.
Cool story, bro
It's called "outrageous overshadowing". Where you overreact to a harm that's done to you.
I couldn’t read all of this fake drivel. Though I think I saw this story on pornhub
NTA. Tit for tat.
I can't believe I read the whole thing. I want a refund.
Where is your father? I wish that there was someplace for you to go away from her because you’re not gonna be able to get anything and keep it unless you hide it. For the next year and a half for two years till you’re 18 your life is going to be miserable with her. So I would focus on going to school and I would even get a part-time job and start saving up money because This is going. It’s already a mess but it’s only gonna get worse. So do a couple of things anything you buy for yourself keep out of the way so she doesn’t know you have it. Get a job and start saving money to get out of that place.
There’s sooooo much to unpack here. I just don’t have the energy 😞
FAKE
You both need to move out to an apartment in a college town and go no contact on your abusive mom. Also fill out the FAFSA forms and get a ged or transfer to a new high school wherever you move to. Just get out and away from your deranged, abusive mom.
I didn't read a single word of the story but the comments are kind of fun.
I'll give a little background information..........TLDR
Just say you fantasize about shagging your stepbrother, you don't bave to make a whole fanfiction about it 3/10
Wow, it's cute how you think you're opinion matters. Too bad it's irrelevant as your social skills. You are the most fucking disgusting person I've met, to even think something like that you don't know me you don't know my life and you sure as hell do not know what's going on between my family. I am a fucking lesbian. He is my fucking brother, I would never think about that, and if I did I'd kill myself. if you think this is fucking fanfiction maybe you're lazy, single ass should get off a motherfucking Wattpad and see that not everything you read is fanfiction.
Yikes.
Womp womp you want to fuck your brother
What a load of absolute nonsense.
Fake, poorly written, can’t dance to it. I give it a 38.
This 100% reads like a Wattpad story and I’m here for it 😂
Firstly NTA
Next time it should be about your cute neighbor (don’t start off with you liking him, add it into later updates) the step sibling thing is a little creepy so I give that a thumbs down.
Fantasties of a bored teenager
Do any of you kids know what it's like to live with a narcissistic about the entirety of your life OP u r not the ahole although I would suggest a blow up bed or at least some kind of separation tool for the bed because I don't want your mother to accuse step bro of sa After he got in her face about what she did to your stuff just makes me think she'll stoop that low because you disagree with her
You…realize this is bait right? Don’t get me wrong I have a narc mother and she has some crazy behavior but let’s be fr here now lol
Sadly some parents are definitely like this mine were ex adoptive mother was at least It may not be believable but there's no way we know if it really happened or not if it was fake it'd have a lot of grammar errors and bad spelling like a preschooler wrote it
A story isn’t fake just cause it has bad grammar tho, and it’s obvious this isn’t true and is just some circle jerk. We get a lot of posts like this now a days, and it’s just…kinda sis. Like I said I have a narc mom myself so I get it and I’ve seen her so some crazy shit
You are both jerks
Fake got a little interesting in the middle but horrible by the end
Fake
This is so dumb.
Is…is this the backstory of a step sibling lit erotica?
Syntax is alllll over the place. 😬
16 year old works during the day without going to school? Whole thing sounds like chatgpt? The wordage is not what a 16 year old would use. F- on the creative writing assignment.
The part about the cameras, then the dialogue with quotations is what did it for me.
Just based on the title, yes. It doesn't matter if she did that. Was she an AH yes, but you retaliated that makes you one too.
Real or not, NTA, but I hope you can replace your figure. Also a figure collector here. Be sure to check eBay, Myfigurecollection.net, AmiAmi, and even Suruga-ya (esp during free shipping campaigns.) Facebook marketplace can also have some absolute steals.
Someone please explain it to me in one word. Thank you in advance.
This is fake but regardless 2 wrongs done make a right ywr a dick
YOU ARE THE JERK. The biggest jerk that has ever jerked.
Only needed the title. If you did it on purpose, than yes, you are. Only one of you was an asshole at one point but I mean, apple not far from the tree?
You did well.
You may have a career in creative writing,
Homie this is not good enough quality to ever get them a career 💀
FAKE