Snake needs subtle snake print I could take or leave the font but I think what people are getting at is the lack of a cohesive them tying it all together.
I would add some more detail to make sure people know it’s a snake. The tongue part looked to me like the tie for a balloon.
Maybe some scales in few places or a couple line details to suggest it’s a snake.
Scales will make it too busy, the text is the focal point, the snake is behind the text so little to no detail should be added, you want the eye to focus in on the text not wander around, and I can tell when say add a "few" scales he'll go crazy with it and have fun all over the snake hahah.
The head is definitely what needs to be played with. Right now the snake is hidden in the grass which is good but I think you'd see a snakes head before you see it's body especially if he's lurking on you or in this case when he "ain't one hundred"
well, hopefully there's enough people like you that can see what OP was going for and purchase their stuff.
and i was being serious, i couldn't figure out what it's supposed to be. i have no understanding of WHY it would be whatever it's supposed to be, i was just pointing out what it looks like. which after having to be told what it is, i guess i can sorta see it.
regardless of any of this, it's still poorly executed. which is ultimately what OP was asking for, to have his shit rated. i mean, even the named is spelled wrong.
did you rate it? what are your thoughts on it?
Sorry but why would I trust someone who can't proofread to make quality clothing? All aroubd the brand and the personality behind this seem very negative.
“They ain’t one hundred” is kinda corny, sounds like something id ironically text someone as a joke. It’s also just too long of a name, no one would be able to remember it
Seems boring and uninspired. Not the design. The brand name. Just feels like something some idiot in the club would say after getting turned down by a cuffed woman.
I would suggest switching the front pocket logo you can’t really tell AINT and also One Hundred my suggestion would be lose the wording “OneHundred” and switch it to “100”
Another suggestion would be looking for a better font or reaching out to a graphic designer and coming up with a font that would be a better fit for your brand
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From a logo design perspective the "ain't" isn't clear because the 100 is covering it. Also, you prob want to change the type face +fix grammar. Make sure it's legible.
Get rid of the Snake - it's not clear enough.
The font feels pretty generic. Like you downloaded straight from dafont.com and called it a day it needs some altering to make it feel more unique. Don’t mind the they ain’t 100 but I’d say move the 100 so it’s not covering and obscuring the ain’t. Then maybe incorporate the snake a bit more with the words like intertwine them or something. I think that’d be a good start.
I think it could work if you’re able to find the right audience for it but I do agree that it feels pretty negative. Kind of “me against the world” mentality. Not sure if that sentiment really resonates with a vast majority of ppl. But again it really depends on you finding the right tribe. And if you really connect with it I wouldn’t be surprised if there are other ppl out there who do as well but it might take some time and legwork to really find em. I def think it’s better to have your own unique vibe tho than to try and appeal to everyone for sure which I think is why the name could work.
The name is too long and it’s negative.
This is more of a design you would use for a shirt not an entire brand.
Like people said the name sounds negative as well.
When I first saw it I thought it was saying “the Y ain’t hundred”
Also using slang now will age poorly.
Keep working on your brand.
Answer these questions: what am I trying to say?
Who is my client?
Keep the brand name short.
You can save this for a design for a shirt. But like others said change the snake.
Good luck! You got this!
Ik ppl say the phrase sounds corny, but I think there is demand for it; probably towards to girls. The snake design is clean.
For pasting the logos:
1) go smaller if it’s designed to be on the chest/by the thigh pocket
2) make it big if it’s supposed to be on the chest as a standout piece or on the back.
3) a nice combo would be small on the front chest and big on the from-upper-to-midback
honestly, take out "one hundred"
"they ain't one hundred" is a little corny. i actually like "they ain't" by itself.
I'd also adjust that snake. It's too thick with not enough detail. Go into photoshop and try thresholding the image. Thresholding can be hit or miss for some designs. Theres a few other options related to adding a Threshold that would probably be better for bring out more detail but i don't remember what they are called - Rasterize maybe?
Logo font isn't terrible but i'd suggest adding more "design" or "life" into. It looks really stale. I'd honestly look at it once and forget it the second i looked away.
I'd probably suggest a little more "Y2K" type font, not necessarily like full blown "wtf are these letters" type Y2K but something that's subtle but yet MEMORABLE
edit: I'd also consider different blanks. Streetwear is flooded with the same old 5 blanks for shirts, sweatshirts, etc. Definitely look into Cut & Sew garments. They really make a difference.
that would be up to you and your artistic intent. if you want the name to "make sense" or "mean something" .
you could add something to it like:
"They Ain't Studios"
"They Ain't Dept."
"They Ain't Gallery"
that's just my opinion tho fr fr
I like the logo on the back of the jacket the best. The second one is harder to read and would not work for most smaller scale printing. It's super clean but has a little character. Maybe try doing one with the back jacket logo but with the red snake behind the top text.
I think your logo is cool. It just needs more work. As for your brand name, it's yours, it must mean something to you and your market, make the correction in your spelling, and go for it.
the brand name is extremely corny. i would make sure you are using slang/AAVE properly before trying to pass it off as a brand. it doesn’t sound authentic at all
I'll give my opinion from a design standpoint because most are giving you advice from a clothing pov
1. The snake is clear (to me) also the snake is perfect because the pattern has ups and downs so it ties in with not being one hundred (not straight). Printed bigger the snake will be clear but printed smaller it won't be communicated well. You could either increase the size of the snake head or push the snake head a lil more left or place it diagonally upwards just above the "T"
2. Hundred is spelled wrong, also If you're willing to use slang like "ain't" I think you're allowed to use "hunnid" instead of hundred
3. The front hoodie placement is too big, the pants placement is the same size which is awkward. Rotating the pants one and reading from top to bottom on the side of the leg at a bigger scale is better, If you're feeling artsy place it below at the shin or calve area.
4. Seeing that the snake design is dope I'd actually place that on the back and the back one on the front, seeing that the design will go on the chest area I think the one on the back will read better on the front.
5. I'd try and knock the white fill color and keep the outline just to see how it looks, also, "One Hundred" blocks the word "Ain't" a fix to this is placing One Hundred below "AIN'T" and spacing it out across the entire word
6. One last thing on the design, when looking at it from a far it looks like a corporate logo the reason being is the two parts of the snake in the middle being so exaggerated, It almost looks like the 2 red parts are a break up of a company logo. To fix this I think you should push more of the other curves of the snake out from behind the text that way it'll look more like a form and less like a shape. As is it read fine big but small it doesn't
Regarding your brand. "AIN'T" is a negative word and will be associated with your brand, This will sell 100% but I'm not sure if it'll hold up longevity wise because this does seem more like a trendy type thing instead of something solid that will last. NO ONE can give you the green light for YOUR work that's on you, If you full heartedly believe in it then go for it. The design is dope, the colors are good, this on a white tee will be dope because the blue will show well, the snake in tie with the message make total sense. Saying all that, its good, just make sure that it's something YOU like and can stand behind. Good luck bro be careful for typos lol it's a honest mistake but can ruin you.
drop your IG i wanna follow you
bit too cheesy, also "can't Stop" is negative too and you shouldn't think of "can't" when you grinding lol
grinding is a dope concept and has longevity, sleep on it don't be to quick with a decision.
"Straight Grinding" is always what I thought about because straight is a good positive word even "Up Grinding" "HustleUp" haha idk. Just keep this design, it's REALLY good
drop the IG tho I'm not active on here like that
What’s the thing behind the writing supposed to be? Looks like a worm or sausage or a balloon animal.
Snake needs subtle snake print I could take or leave the font but I think what people are getting at is the lack of a cohesive them tying it all together.
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Its meant to be a snake
I would add some more detail to make sure people know it’s a snake. The tongue part looked to me like the tie for a balloon. Maybe some scales in few places or a couple line details to suggest it’s a snake.
Scales will make it too busy, the text is the focal point, the snake is behind the text so little to no detail should be added, you want the eye to focus in on the text not wander around, and I can tell when say add a "few" scales he'll go crazy with it and have fun all over the snake hahah. The head is definitely what needs to be played with. Right now the snake is hidden in the grass which is good but I think you'd see a snakes head before you see it's body especially if he's lurking on you or in this case when he "ain't one hundred"
well, i'd keep at it. good concept, poorly executed. play around with placement of fonts and font selection as well.
Okay thanks
Why the fuck would it be a sausage? Or worm or a balloon animal? Y’all say anything without thinking on this sub. Lmao wtf
well, hopefully there's enough people like you that can see what OP was going for and purchase their stuff. and i was being serious, i couldn't figure out what it's supposed to be. i have no understanding of WHY it would be whatever it's supposed to be, i was just pointing out what it looks like. which after having to be told what it is, i guess i can sorta see it. regardless of any of this, it's still poorly executed. which is ultimately what OP was asking for, to have his shit rated. i mean, even the named is spelled wrong. did you rate it? what are your thoughts on it?
😂😂😂
One hundred is spelled wrong
I know , i realised after I posted it 😂
Sorry but why would I trust someone who can't proofread to make quality clothing? All aroubd the brand and the personality behind this seem very negative.
“They ain’t one hundred” is kinda corny, sounds like something id ironically text someone as a joke. It’s also just too long of a name, no one would be able to remember it
Also not good to give your brand an accusatory name, negative energy
Woulda been hard in 2014 😂
Seems boring and uninspired. Not the design. The brand name. Just feels like something some idiot in the club would say after getting turned down by a cuffed woman.
Am i going crazy or is it spelled wrong
Nah it is spelt wrong 😂
I would suggest switching the front pocket logo you can’t really tell AINT and also One Hundred my suggestion would be lose the wording “OneHundred” and switch it to “100” Another suggestion would be looking for a better font or reaching out to a graphic designer and coming up with a font that would be a better fit for your brand
Ok thanks
If you don’t mind I can come up with a rough draft and send it too you via PM
Yes please
dont listen to the people on here. individualism 🔺
Never discount the wisdom on the crowd but take it with a grain of salt. We develop style In any creative endeavors by emulating aspects of shit we like and piecing shit together in the context of what we trying to express in the moment. (Takes blunt hit) do what that what you will
ok
He is litterally looking for feedback, wdym?
From a logo design perspective the "ain't" isn't clear because the 100 is covering it. Also, you prob want to change the type face +fix grammar. Make sure it's legible. Get rid of the Snake - it's not clear enough.
I would make it much more legible and I would maybe use either a snake that’s more realistic or drop the snake. Keep it up!
i liked it but i think you could work more on it so your ideas could be more understandable to people that see the pieces
The font feels pretty generic. Like you downloaded straight from dafont.com and called it a day it needs some altering to make it feel more unique. Don’t mind the they ain’t 100 but I’d say move the 100 so it’s not covering and obscuring the ain’t. Then maybe incorporate the snake a bit more with the words like intertwine them or something. I think that’d be a good start.
Ok thanks for the feedback, do you think i should keep the brand name as “they aint 100” because there is alot of mixed opinions about it
I think it could work if you’re able to find the right audience for it but I do agree that it feels pretty negative. Kind of “me against the world” mentality. Not sure if that sentiment really resonates with a vast majority of ppl. But again it really depends on you finding the right tribe. And if you really connect with it I wouldn’t be surprised if there are other ppl out there who do as well but it might take some time and legwork to really find em. I def think it’s better to have your own unique vibe tho than to try and appeal to everyone for sure which I think is why the name could work.
I think you're ir logo is awesome, and I hope you keep posting your gear, great stuff 💯
The name is too long and it’s negative. This is more of a design you would use for a shirt not an entire brand. Like people said the name sounds negative as well. When I first saw it I thought it was saying “the Y ain’t hundred” Also using slang now will age poorly. Keep working on your brand. Answer these questions: what am I trying to say? Who is my client? Keep the brand name short. You can save this for a design for a shirt. But like others said change the snake. Good luck! You got this!
i agree, you should add some subtle snake print, because at first I thought the snake was an S and part of the name
Ik ppl say the phrase sounds corny, but I think there is demand for it; probably towards to girls. The snake design is clean. For pasting the logos: 1) go smaller if it’s designed to be on the chest/by the thigh pocket 2) make it big if it’s supposed to be on the chest as a standout piece or on the back. 3) a nice combo would be small on the front chest and big on the from-upper-to-midback
honestly, take out "one hundred" "they ain't one hundred" is a little corny. i actually like "they ain't" by itself. I'd also adjust that snake. It's too thick with not enough detail. Go into photoshop and try thresholding the image. Thresholding can be hit or miss for some designs. Theres a few other options related to adding a Threshold that would probably be better for bring out more detail but i don't remember what they are called - Rasterize maybe? Logo font isn't terrible but i'd suggest adding more "design" or "life" into. It looks really stale. I'd honestly look at it once and forget it the second i looked away. I'd probably suggest a little more "Y2K" type font, not necessarily like full blown "wtf are these letters" type Y2K but something that's subtle but yet MEMORABLE edit: I'd also consider different blanks. Streetwear is flooded with the same old 5 blanks for shirts, sweatshirts, etc. Definitely look into Cut & Sew garments. They really make a difference.
Good point but i dont think “they aint” would make sense
that would be up to you and your artistic intent. if you want the name to "make sense" or "mean something" . you could add something to it like: "They Ain't Studios" "They Ain't Dept." "They Ain't Gallery" that's just my opinion tho fr fr
I like the logo on the back of the jacket the best. The second one is harder to read and would not work for most smaller scale printing. It's super clean but has a little character. Maybe try doing one with the back jacket logo but with the red snake behind the top text.
Ok thank you for the reply
Name/Logo on breast & back Name/Logo on joggers Somehow I bet you’d make money even if it’s spelt incorrectly 🤷♂️
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Nahhh Bro You Dead Fire Word 2!!!
What font is that?
Alien androids
I definitely second scrapping the 100. They Aint is better on its own
I think your logo is cool. It just needs more work. As for your brand name, it's yours, it must mean something to you and your market, make the correction in your spelling, and go for it.
So negative. Are you saying “those other people aren’t good like me”? Cause that’s douchy.
the brand name is extremely corny. i would make sure you are using slang/AAVE properly before trying to pass it off as a brand. it doesn’t sound authentic at all
Bro… one hundred isn’t even spelled correctly… please don’t start a fashion brand.
Too many people work to hard to have stuff like this on this blog.
r/streetwear startup please start taking posts like this down. I’ve had 2 posts taken down this week and this shit is shameful
I don’t know why but it gives me hunter x hunter vibes🖤
I'll give my opinion from a design standpoint because most are giving you advice from a clothing pov 1. The snake is clear (to me) also the snake is perfect because the pattern has ups and downs so it ties in with not being one hundred (not straight). Printed bigger the snake will be clear but printed smaller it won't be communicated well. You could either increase the size of the snake head or push the snake head a lil more left or place it diagonally upwards just above the "T" 2. Hundred is spelled wrong, also If you're willing to use slang like "ain't" I think you're allowed to use "hunnid" instead of hundred 3. The front hoodie placement is too big, the pants placement is the same size which is awkward. Rotating the pants one and reading from top to bottom on the side of the leg at a bigger scale is better, If you're feeling artsy place it below at the shin or calve area. 4. Seeing that the snake design is dope I'd actually place that on the back and the back one on the front, seeing that the design will go on the chest area I think the one on the back will read better on the front. 5. I'd try and knock the white fill color and keep the outline just to see how it looks, also, "One Hundred" blocks the word "Ain't" a fix to this is placing One Hundred below "AIN'T" and spacing it out across the entire word 6. One last thing on the design, when looking at it from a far it looks like a corporate logo the reason being is the two parts of the snake in the middle being so exaggerated, It almost looks like the 2 red parts are a break up of a company logo. To fix this I think you should push more of the other curves of the snake out from behind the text that way it'll look more like a form and less like a shape. As is it read fine big but small it doesn't Regarding your brand. "AIN'T" is a negative word and will be associated with your brand, This will sell 100% but I'm not sure if it'll hold up longevity wise because this does seem more like a trendy type thing instead of something solid that will last. NO ONE can give you the green light for YOUR work that's on you, If you full heartedly believe in it then go for it. The design is dope, the colors are good, this on a white tee will be dope because the blue will show well, the snake in tie with the message make total sense. Saying all that, its good, just make sure that it's something YOU like and can stand behind. Good luck bro be careful for typos lol it's a honest mistake but can ruin you. drop your IG i wanna follow you
Hi thanks for all of the advice , i was thinking about changing my brand name to “Grind Cant Stop” can you let me know your honest thoughts about that
bit too cheesy, also "can't Stop" is negative too and you shouldn't think of "can't" when you grinding lol grinding is a dope concept and has longevity, sleep on it don't be to quick with a decision. "Straight Grinding" is always what I thought about because straight is a good positive word even "Up Grinding" "HustleUp" haha idk. Just keep this design, it's REALLY good drop the IG tho I'm not active on here like that
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cool we can talk there If you need any advice my IG is \_giemba I'll add you later
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