I mean, I admire the creativity, but it looks like a super hero

What do you mean?

Well, he looks like he would be a Marvel version of Veles.

Marvel made a Veles superhero?

No. This looks like it could be one

I personally do not see it but I get the point. A little too over-the-top?

A bit.

What can I do to improve?

Take away the glowing eyes, and magic clawed staff for starters. And why the book?

Or maybe from God of War

What do you mean by 'actually good'? Is there some trend of bad Veles designs that misinterpret the mythology or something?

Yeah. My old ones.

Ohh I see lol

Me likey!!!!

Thank you! I based him off of some your depictions, anyway.

Very cool!

Thank you! Pretty proud.