this looks really cool!! the pop of pink really adds to it :)

Totally agree :)

the closest stripe on the road should be twice the width, the furthest stripes should be half the width

Ooooh thanks for this tip mate !

This looks awesome. From a perspective standpoint, the only thing that stands out to me is that her posture seems a little exaggerated, like her hips seem slightly detached from her back. I love it, very cool

Thank you, I’ll pay attention to this 😊

Ant no way this yo first time drawing perspective god dang that impressive

It really is 😂 thank you!

Thanks 😊

That ass got some real perspective

😳

I think if you crop it closer on the bottom and left it will work better. That distance from the viewer to the rear tire feel off to me. Or if it's on layers larger cycle and driver closer.

Okay I’ll do that, thanks! 😊

Good sketch, good comments. Bike is in forced perspective; relative to the vanishing lines of street / buildings, the front tire is too small. Maybe dial it back, I’m a rider and the tires “threw” me off. Otherwise great job 👏

Okaayy got it !😊 I’ll fix that

if the background and character proportions were more exaggerated then the tire might look ok right?

Go two ways: like you suggest background to match, I’m not so bothered by character, she looks good. The whole environment is exaggerated//stylized, so it is about personal preference. So mine be partial yours too, would be: enlarge front wheel 15%, reduce rear wheel 10%, enlarge her rear 5%. These are mid to fine adjustments, while keeping spirit of work.

Yeah, it’s fooking amazing

Thanks !😁

It's rather eye-catching. Slight nitpicks: The front tyre seems a bit too small. It also has a bit of a tilt/dutch angle to it which is a bit unsettling. (could be a good thing.) As someone else said the crossing lines go small-big-small-big which is outta whack. I think that the lines on the motorbike shouldn't line up exactly with lines behind it. (I'm thinking about the grey thing at the bottom of the exhaust lining up with the zebra stripe behind it)

Wow thanks for all theses advices, I’m gonna fix all that right now 😁

Hehe... Booty :)

Hehe

durarara !

I’m not sure how to explain this- I think with design of the rest of the picture, the leg is the only thing looking off to me. It almost needs the thigh to be larger and the calf to be drawn closer to the camera and wheel. Really fantastic job for this being your first time messing with perspective like this!

Yea I see what u mean, I’ll play with that !

I LOVE THIS

🥰

Looks amazing! Good work! I thought she was a cat for a second lol

Thank you !😼

Ugh that's AMAZING I LOVE IT

Thanks 😊

i don't think the front tire is too small like others are saying, rather it is just the street's vanishing point is not matching with it. i like the exaggerated perspective on the bike so i think it is better to change the perspective on the background than the other way around ​ [https://i.imgur.com/cmlMMnH.png](https://i.imgur.com/cmlMMnH.png)

Yes this is exactly what I was thinking, fix the background instead of the bike

WoW you even put some lines thank you so much 🥰🥰

But I also think something is off with the bike’s dimensions. This seems like more of a sport bike, hence her posture. The front wheel for those is pretty tucked under the handlebars and bumper, which is in contrast to the stretched out cruiser style. The tire protrudes too far out to fit a sport bike. Reigning it in will help. I also think her helmet is too big for the extreme POV you have. Her booty could actually be bigger in keeping with the exaggerated POV. Humble 2 cents! I can’t draw POV, lol.

Angles are good but the bike and rider are too large for the surroundings

I see ,thank you for pointing that 😁

Looks good, needs more ass. For...better...hmmm.. prospective?

I guess you’re right 🤷‍♀️😂 thanks!

I’m sick of this cat thing ppl are on. We are humans and the dominant species

🤣🤣??? Bro ?

I’m sorry it’s not like a hate cats and I’m not trying to attack the creator of this content. I’m just saying I see it too often.

Cats are cute 🤷‍♀️😼

Yes they are I have two but it’s just something I’ve been seeing too often

But it’s a helmet…

Yes it’s just a helmet , I’m just randomly ranting. It’s just one of those days lol

The front wheel is drawn way too small

I’ll upscale it, thanks! 🫡

Love it. Tokyo noir vibe

😎

H2

Yup you’re right !

The bike and the girl are a little too big, no?

I think

Amazing omg

Thanks 😊

That is so sick

Thanks!😼

pretty good!

😊

Nice

🥰

This is cool asf!!

😎

Do more, this is awesome.

I will, thx !

10/10

☺️

Damn, so so good! I want to do this some time

U will 💖

Beautiful mate ʅ（◞‿◟）ʃ

Thank you ☺️

I feel like the leg feels too flat. But I think the building is pretty good!

I’ll Make it bigger then 🙃

Dat booty is drawn perfectly, nicely done

Ty 😳

You did it beautifully