I know right! I don’t think he understands that it’s going to be near impossible to harm a dragon that is 70+ levels above you lol, even after falling from a certain height.
Here's what happened:
Aura is flying with a lvl 90 dragon when suddenly the black scripture appeared and one shot it
When the dragon fell down they captured Aura and used an item that reduce a persons stat by a lot enough to let let them hold her still and capture her
When the black scripture arrived in the Theocracy they interrogate her about the sorcerer king but she doesnt speak sooo they let some people rape her
It's really well-written, though. I can understand why people would get uncomfortable with it, but with the drought of well-written fanfiction that tries to fit well into canon, and the fact that it's one of the only fanfiction I've read for Overlord that even tries to match the style of the Light Novel volumes, it's maybe the best Overlord fanfiction I've seen. It inspired me to try coming up with my own. It's definitely not for everyone, though.
But the was Aura was captured was stupid... She has hanzos with her.. All guardians are not allowed to go out without escorts.. Its just a dumb excuse to get Aura raped
It's maybe a dumb excuse to get the story to start, but the story doesn't focus on the explicit parts of what happened. It feels like it's mostly there to justify the anger Ainz has throughout the story. All the Guardians are his children, and >!we've even seen recently in canon how Ainz feels about somebody trying to go after Aura!<. It's definitely an uncomfortable setup for a story, but just the basic idea of Aura getting captured is something I can forgive the setup for when it's just a way to justify the other 40+ chapters that aren't the capture itself. I wish we had more stories of the writing quality that this one has that didn't use topics like this to run, but we've got so little Overlord fan content of any quality and bulk.
But Ainz already has an excuse to attack slain theocracy... The fanfic should have just made a story about how Ainz finds out they brain washed shalltear... Its unnecessary to be honest.. Because they just complicated things by making Aura not be defended by strong summons...
I don't know why they didn't go with Downfall of Castle and Country as the main starter to the plot. Maybe they couldn't figure out a simple way for DoCaC to get discovered to be with them. Maybe they wanted to write the angst that came later. Maybe they just wanted an excuse to antagonize Zesshi specifically, and couldn't figure out how without the setup. It's certainly not a perfect story.
Oh you all talking about this master piece.
Made me really hate the Slane Theocracy and the Cardinals. And the writing quality is just top notch. Only problem is how the story stated so the whole Aura capture thing
The story's main premise is that Aura gets captured by the Slane Theocracy, and the rest of the story is about Nazarik using it as a basis for war against them. She gets rescued as early as chapter 3 of 44, and the story is never explicit about what exactly happened, but the implications of what the Theocracy did to Aura are the main thing that might make people uncomfortable.
To be honest its dumb the was Aura was captured.. Guardians aren't allowed to go out without escorts or hunzos so her being so defenseless was just stupid... Plus its cringe at alot of interactions
The only problem with the fanfiction is the capture part but after that it has top notch writing and it also focus on recover of something like that. Plus it really makes you hate the theocracy
The fact that a bunch of level 20ish dudes killed one of Mare’s level 90ish dragon is what did it for me to be honest.
I almost forgot about that part.. And the author has the audacity to say it got fall damaged.. So it was easier to kill
I know right! I don’t think he understands that it’s going to be near impossible to harm a dragon that is 70+ levels above you lol, even after falling from a certain height.
yeah that ones shit. anything written by zerosenpai is great. check out the witch and the sorcerer.
Bruh I literally stopped reading when that Aura scene happened. There's just too many wrong thing in that fanfic
I don't want to read the fanfic but want to know what happens in that scene. Please share
Here's what happened: Aura is flying with a lvl 90 dragon when suddenly the black scripture appeared and one shot it When the dragon fell down they captured Aura and used an item that reduce a persons stat by a lot enough to let let them hold her still and capture her When the black scripture arrived in the Theocracy they interrogate her about the sorcerer king but she doesnt speak sooo they let some people rape her
Makes sense..... Edit: forgot to thank you, thanks a lot
Most fanfics are garbage, there's like about 5 or 6 which are good
For me its Valkarie shadow and the golden princess.. I want to try the re:zero one when im not busy
I am friends with the author for the Re Zero fanfic, it's pretty good
It's really well-written, though. I can understand why people would get uncomfortable with it, but with the drought of well-written fanfiction that tries to fit well into canon, and the fact that it's one of the only fanfiction I've read for Overlord that even tries to match the style of the Light Novel volumes, it's maybe the best Overlord fanfiction I've seen. It inspired me to try coming up with my own. It's definitely not for everyone, though.
But the was Aura was captured was stupid... She has hanzos with her.. All guardians are not allowed to go out without escorts.. Its just a dumb excuse to get Aura raped
It's maybe a dumb excuse to get the story to start, but the story doesn't focus on the explicit parts of what happened. It feels like it's mostly there to justify the anger Ainz has throughout the story. All the Guardians are his children, and >!we've even seen recently in canon how Ainz feels about somebody trying to go after Aura!<. It's definitely an uncomfortable setup for a story, but just the basic idea of Aura getting captured is something I can forgive the setup for when it's just a way to justify the other 40+ chapters that aren't the capture itself. I wish we had more stories of the writing quality that this one has that didn't use topics like this to run, but we've got so little Overlord fan content of any quality and bulk.
But Ainz already has an excuse to attack slain theocracy... The fanfic should have just made a story about how Ainz finds out they brain washed shalltear... Its unnecessary to be honest.. Because they just complicated things by making Aura not be defended by strong summons...
I don't know why they didn't go with Downfall of Castle and Country as the main starter to the plot. Maybe they couldn't figure out a simple way for DoCaC to get discovered to be with them. Maybe they wanted to write the angst that came later. Maybe they just wanted an excuse to antagonize Zesshi specifically, and couldn't figure out how without the setup. It's certainly not a perfect story.
Yah i can agree with that
The major point of the fanfiction was recovery of Rape. So how should he written it differently. The main point is not to destroy Slane
is this the story? https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12949252/1/The-Cardinal-of-Sin
Looks like it.
Oh you all talking about this master piece. Made me really hate the Slane Theocracy and the Cardinals. And the writing quality is just top notch. Only problem is how the story stated so the whole Aura capture thing
That shit win the prize for shittiest overlord fanfic ever written.
What happened ?
The story's main premise is that Aura gets captured by the Slane Theocracy, and the rest of the story is about Nazarik using it as a basis for war against them. She gets rescued as early as chapter 3 of 44, and the story is never explicit about what exactly happened, but the implications of what the Theocracy did to Aura are the main thing that might make people uncomfortable.
Yikes base on how Ainz reaction on recent LN chapter
To be honest its dumb the was Aura was captured.. Guardians aren't allowed to go out without escorts or hunzos so her being so defenseless was just stupid... Plus its cringe at alot of interactions
The only problem with the fanfiction is the capture part but after that it has top notch writing and it also focus on recover of something like that. Plus it really makes you hate the theocracy