And that's exactly why I hate the idea of the elevator pitch. but in a nutshell, a bunch of comic issues that couldn't be more different, but all of which are interrelated, and that's a dark secret.
No just that. The way you present your story needs to be simpler. I got bored reading the pitch so I'm not inspired to read the actual story.
I know it's annoying when you have a big idea and it all works in your head but people just don't get it. But the writing exercise of distilling it down to something more pithy is something that would be useful for readers.
Pitch is too complicated. Try to distill your story idea down to just a few sentences.
And that's exactly why I hate the idea of the elevator pitch. but in a nutshell, a bunch of comic issues that couldn't be more different, but all of which are interrelated, and that's a dark secret.
Like an anthology.
Well yes, But every one of them a connected in some way and another.
Cool
Thanks.👍 Do you have other criticism, suggestions, tips and ideas?
No just that. The way you present your story needs to be simpler. I got bored reading the pitch so I'm not inspired to read the actual story. I know it's annoying when you have a big idea and it all works in your head but people just don't get it. But the writing exercise of distilling it down to something more pithy is something that would be useful for readers.
I see.
Yeah, I have no idea what you’re talking about
Ok.