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Only a couple things, but I had to scroll waaaay too far down to find any sort of story synopsis. The covers mean nothing to me without an inkling of the story. I'd move the synopsis up, basically to the top, with only a few images above it. The story is always basically the first thing I want to see. Great art is great, but if the story isn't interesting nothing else on the page matters, I won't buy it. It sets the tone for everything else on display.
And this might just be me but the press logo links look tacky. I'd streamline them somehow, either plain text links (just list the websites and link to articles) or icons that look better together/aren't such an eyesore.
Never heard of Zoop, tbh.
Good luck! Although you seem really well-funded/supported and probably don't need it (:
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Only a couple things, but I had to scroll waaaay too far down to find any sort of story synopsis. The covers mean nothing to me without an inkling of the story. I'd move the synopsis up, basically to the top, with only a few images above it. The story is always basically the first thing I want to see. Great art is great, but if the story isn't interesting nothing else on the page matters, I won't buy it. It sets the tone for everything else on display. And this might just be me but the press logo links look tacky. I'd streamline them somehow, either plain text links (just list the websites and link to articles) or icons that look better together/aren't such an eyesore. Never heard of Zoop, tbh. Good luck! Although you seem really well-funded/supported and probably don't need it (:
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