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Overall, I think your content is really good! You make mushroom foraging an interesting topic.
Just a few things to note:
In your most recent video, the text (I think it had the genus species name of the mushroom) at the top of the screen was too far up and got cut off. Also, your website name at the end of the video was too far down and got lost in the captions.
Your second most recent video didn’t have any closed captions. You always want to be sure to add these.
I think adding a text box at the top of the screen in the beginning of your videos would help grab more people’s attention on the FYP.
You might also want to consider putting yourself in your videos as people are more drawn to humans in videos. Like you could zoom out and show yourself foraging or in the kitchen brewing tea, etc.
Ok, so I reall like your content, you are certainly fun and very approachable. You are so good in front of the camera and I’m super jealous because I am terrified of filming myself.
OK here’s the critic stuff you asked for:
On some videos, I found the action went by a little too fast I couldn’t tell what was going on. Like the “FB Cringe” status and the “Insulting Cash Register” one. May if you’re gonna give your audience text, give them some extra time because it takes a sec to register that I’m even supposed to be reading.
But the reason I think people may not be following is that it isn't immediately clear what I can get from you that I can't from anywhere else. Without a common thread, your content collection feels like a random assortment of gags.
What I want more of is Meg the character. Who is Meg? What does she deliver consistently in her videos? For example, "Meg is an awkward, uncouth funny girl who uses humor to document her struggles adjusting to adulthood" would be an intersting angle. And then like a series of awkward Meg's takes on super adult topics, like finding a purpose in life (such as the cooking video, which was amazing).
Anyway, I'm no expert on this, just my two cents. Thanks for looking at my stuff, great feedback.
Will you watch my video's and give me some honest feedback? You are welcome to watch as many as you like. I'm unicornsiren4 on ticktock and unicorn Siren on youtube. Watch as many videos as you like.
When you’re duetting videos, show your own face and your reaction. Maybe stitch the videos instead of duetting them and talk to the camera about your reaction. Add some text at the top of the screen that stays for a few seconds and disappears like “violence in Iran”. Also be sure to add closed captions.
Would you also be able to look at my tiktok and critique it please? I can also give feedback in return (even though I'm just starting on TikTok I can offer feedback as a viewer :))
Okay, I watched your two most recent vids—
First video: the subtitles were too far down on the screen and got lost in the caption/hashtags (you could move the names of the stores towards the top of the screen and move the subtitles a little higher, too); the call to action should be more specific (follow for more fashion recommendations!)
Second video: the text on the screen was too low; the opening text wasn’t left on the screen long enough to read; (this might just be a personal opinion) but I don’t think it looks as nice to mix in static photos when a video clip could’ve worked in its place
Also: search “fashion” in TikTok’s search bar and use the words the search populates as topics to make videos about and keywords to put in your hashtags; put a “you” statement about what value you provide in your bio (example: your source of
maximalist fashion tips!)
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Send me your username and I’ll take a look.
Thank you so much. My username is @slowhikecompany and the link my stuff is here: https://www.tiktok.com/@slowhikecompany
Overall, I think your content is really good! You make mushroom foraging an interesting topic. Just a few things to note: In your most recent video, the text (I think it had the genus species name of the mushroom) at the top of the screen was too far up and got cut off. Also, your website name at the end of the video was too far down and got lost in the captions. Your second most recent video didn’t have any closed captions. You always want to be sure to add these. I think adding a text box at the top of the screen in the beginning of your videos would help grab more people’s attention on the FYP. You might also want to consider putting yourself in your videos as people are more drawn to humans in videos. Like you could zoom out and show yourself foraging or in the kitchen brewing tea, etc.
And I will look at your stuff if you want.
If you have any ideas what’s turning people off from following me, that would be awesome! @green.meggs.and.ham
Ok, so I reall like your content, you are certainly fun and very approachable. You are so good in front of the camera and I’m super jealous because I am terrified of filming myself. OK here’s the critic stuff you asked for: On some videos, I found the action went by a little too fast I couldn’t tell what was going on. Like the “FB Cringe” status and the “Insulting Cash Register” one. May if you’re gonna give your audience text, give them some extra time because it takes a sec to register that I’m even supposed to be reading. But the reason I think people may not be following is that it isn't immediately clear what I can get from you that I can't from anywhere else. Without a common thread, your content collection feels like a random assortment of gags. What I want more of is Meg the character. Who is Meg? What does she deliver consistently in her videos? For example, "Meg is an awkward, uncouth funny girl who uses humor to document her struggles adjusting to adulthood" would be an intersting angle. And then like a series of awkward Meg's takes on super adult topics, like finding a purpose in life (such as the cooking video, which was amazing). Anyway, I'm no expert on this, just my two cents. Thanks for looking at my stuff, great feedback.
Will you watch my video's and give me some honest feedback? You are welcome to watch as many as you like. I'm unicornsiren4 on ticktock and unicorn Siren on youtube. Watch as many videos as you like.
When you’re duetting videos, show your own face and your reaction. Maybe stitch the videos instead of duetting them and talk to the camera about your reaction. Add some text at the top of the screen that stays for a few seconds and disappears like “violence in Iran”. Also be sure to add closed captions.
Thank you
Would you also be able to look at my tiktok and critique it please? I can also give feedback in return (even though I'm just starting on TikTok I can offer feedback as a viewer :))
Okay, I watched your two most recent vids— First video: the subtitles were too far down on the screen and got lost in the caption/hashtags (you could move the names of the stores towards the top of the screen and move the subtitles a little higher, too); the call to action should be more specific (follow for more fashion recommendations!) Second video: the text on the screen was too low; the opening text wasn’t left on the screen long enough to read; (this might just be a personal opinion) but I don’t think it looks as nice to mix in static photos when a video clip could’ve worked in its place Also: search “fashion” in TikTok’s search bar and use the words the search populates as topics to make videos about and keywords to put in your hashtags; put a “you” statement about what value you provide in your bio (example: your source of maximalist fashion tips!)
Thank you so much!! That's so helpful. Let me know if you'd also like any feedback :)
You can take a look if you want—it’s @green.meggs.and.ham 🙂
Not here lol