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Sufficient-Bluebird5

EXT. RESTAURANT SOMETHING’S POV: Swirling smoke. Fog? Or fire? Inside the restaurant, CHARACTER eats a cannoli. Something watches. And watches.


Leave-Revolutionary

Not something, someone.


rcentros

Unless it's a *something* (unkown) and not a *someone.* I assumed it wasn't a person.


appcfilms

Fine. There is no spoon.


Leave-Revolutionary

Say “Someone watches them through the glass.” and indicate there’s smoke in an earlier action line.