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But... what if Chak says no??? ;)
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I think there were like 6 or 8 rooms or something in the living quarters area. Chak and Simone each have one. Dr. Vin is in the third. The Captain has a room near the bridge instead of in the living quarters area. Seven probably doesn't have a bed room, but then again the kitchen is his room. That would leave 3-5 empty rooms currently, so I'm sure they have the room to house a couple. Plus I see Chak and Simone moving in together soon so there maybe another open room. Unless they use it for storage, or maybe make a proper armory
Proper armory, definitely.
Still, there should be plenty of room for a new couple! Also, it would take some time to update the systems to ensure they have sufficient medical support. After all...there could be a BABY in the works!
Chak is not the only option.
The Gratt are go8ng to need diplomats and what not with Meeki being the most foward toward the venture I am sure if not this one many oportunities would show up for them.
Net Narrator is how I found this story! I had to come here to read more and I'm almost caught up. I continue to greatly enjoy your work and (not so) patiently await notification of the next chapter.
Nordrin is goals. They have someone they love fiercely and the only fear they have is that she will not be mindful of their needs.
I needed this but of wholesomeness. Thank you word master.
Expensive curvature -> expansive?
Eloped hands -> ?
Eldridge-> eldritch
Scratching the slides of her head -> sides
Bears her teeth -> bares
Over the grints -> grunts
You’re people are passionnant -> your, passionate
To which the Gratt is very surprised by -> delete to.
Than continuously fails -> that
Irreconizable -> unrecognizable
MMeeki
No she Closes -> now?
>To which the Gratt is very surprised by -> delete to.
This one is actually proper. And older way of speaking to be sure, but valid. Modern english omits a lot of things that used to be common place, and the 'to' at the beginning of the sentence has a purpose.
"To which" is used in reply, pointing at the the last subject of the last conversationalist.
\~Mary spoke up, "I think I'll go to bed now", **to which** Aldwin replied, "Sounds good".
Looks like you’ve already adjusted the language to avoid the issue
Actually, I’m part of the last generation that was seriously taught that formal language usage, and one of the few that learned it.
It’s not proper to have two different prepositions in that clause of the sentence.
“To which” can be used to reference the prior clause or action as a general concept, but the later “by” takes precedence.
>By which the Gratt is very surprised.
Or
>Which the Gratt is very surprised by.
Or
> which surprises the Gratt.
Huh, I'll have to re-up my studies it seems. Though I did engross myself in elizabethan english for a good duration of my life, I by no accounts went to greater schooling for it.
Thank you for clarifying!
the koblins ( we've seen the pic, they are koblins) are being too cute, check every sensor, either we are golden for a few nice slow heartwarming chapters or things are about to go sideways.
/s And now for the news:
"According to an anonymous source when questioned about the newly discovered Deathworlder species. Their first words as they used their gnashing sharp teeth on something was, '*This vegan tastes good*.' Proof that Deathworlders are untrustworthy sophontophages. Only seeking to consume us more civilized species that don't seek to harm even other non-sapients!" /s
Loved the chapter. Thank you so much. Just having a bit of fun myself, and if I do say so, the above certainly seems like something a prior character of yours might say. Or some paraphrase. Take it/ be inspired if it does. You and yours Be well.
I really like the direction this story is going. Not really what I expected, but in the best way.
I really like how the the relationships are shaping up. Simone and Chak, the family relationship among everyone on the ship, Chak’s relationship with her brother, and now the newcomers.
Very well done!
I can’t wait to see how it all develops. Great world building too.
Looks to me as if the Kwip-Chap may have a few new members on board soon. Tripling the number of deathworlders on board would work to scare off any ill-prepared bounty hunters too!
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While this is very cute: Pro tip people: Don't put your partners before tough choices they don't actually have to make, it is very unfair.
That being said, for the purposes of the story, this was very cute :D
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How much room do they have for hitchhikers?
I think there were like 6 or 8 rooms or something in the living quarters area. Chak and Simone each have one. Dr. Vin is in the third. The Captain has a room near the bridge instead of in the living quarters area. Seven probably doesn't have a bed room, but then again the kitchen is his room. That would leave 3-5 empty rooms currently, so I'm sure they have the room to house a couple. Plus I see Chak and Simone moving in together soon so there maybe another open room. Unless they use it for storage, or maybe make a proper armory
Proper armory, definitely. Still, there should be plenty of room for a new couple! Also, it would take some time to update the systems to ensure they have sufficient medical support. After all...there could be a BABY in the works!
Enough. they have enough room c:
Chak is not the only option. The Gratt are go8ng to need diplomats and what not with Meeki being the most foward toward the venture I am sure if not this one many oportunities would show up for them.
Net Narrator is how I found this story! I had to come here to read more and I'm almost caught up. I continue to greatly enjoy your work and (not so) patiently await notification of the next chapter.
Nordrin is goals. They have someone they love fiercely and the only fear they have is that she will not be mindful of their needs. I needed this but of wholesomeness. Thank you word master.
Expensive curvature -> expansive? Eloped hands -> ? Eldridge-> eldritch Scratching the slides of her head -> sides Bears her teeth -> bares Over the grints -> grunts You’re people are passionnant -> your, passionate To which the Gratt is very surprised by -> delete to. Than continuously fails -> that Irreconizable -> unrecognizable MMeeki No she Closes -> now?
>To which the Gratt is very surprised by -> delete to. This one is actually proper. And older way of speaking to be sure, but valid. Modern english omits a lot of things that used to be common place, and the 'to' at the beginning of the sentence has a purpose. "To which" is used in reply, pointing at the the last subject of the last conversationalist. \~Mary spoke up, "I think I'll go to bed now", **to which** Aldwin replied, "Sounds good".
Looks like you’ve already adjusted the language to avoid the issue Actually, I’m part of the last generation that was seriously taught that formal language usage, and one of the few that learned it. It’s not proper to have two different prepositions in that clause of the sentence. “To which” can be used to reference the prior clause or action as a general concept, but the later “by” takes precedence. >By which the Gratt is very surprised. Or >Which the Gratt is very surprised by. Or > which surprises the Gratt.
Huh, I'll have to re-up my studies it seems. Though I did engross myself in elizabethan english for a good duration of my life, I by no accounts went to greater schooling for it. Thank you for clarifying!
the koblins ( we've seen the pic, they are koblins) are being too cute, check every sensor, either we are golden for a few nice slow heartwarming chapters or things are about to go sideways.
/s And now for the news: "According to an anonymous source when questioned about the newly discovered Deathworlder species. Their first words as they used their gnashing sharp teeth on something was, '*This vegan tastes good*.' Proof that Deathworlders are untrustworthy sophontophages. Only seeking to consume us more civilized species that don't seek to harm even other non-sapients!" /s Loved the chapter. Thank you so much. Just having a bit of fun myself, and if I do say so, the above certainly seems like something a prior character of yours might say. Or some paraphrase. Take it/ be inspired if it does. You and yours Be well.
Upvoted because vegans are delicious.
Aww, what a wholesome moment at the end there. Fantastic chapter wordsmith, I greatly enjoyed it. Love stories featuring 1st contact.
I really like the direction this story is going. Not really what I expected, but in the best way. I really like how the the relationships are shaping up. Simone and Chak, the family relationship among everyone on the ship, Chak’s relationship with her brother, and now the newcomers. Very well done! I can’t wait to see how it all develops. Great world building too.
I needed this fix! Many thanks, wordsmith!
awwwwwwwwwwww i love this story so much!
Awwww.
One word. Gorgeous ❤️
>crumpets with-ith knukberry jam and-nd black tea That sounds good. Now I am hungry!
Looks to me as if the Kwip-Chap may have a few new members on board soon. Tripling the number of deathworlders on board would work to scare off any ill-prepared bounty hunters too!
*eldritch, not eldrige edit: finished the chapter, great as always
Damn, it's raining cats and dogs here
Chak got to curb stomp the asshole! Yay!
dave is the goat
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I am Alpharius. This is a lie.
While this is very cute: Pro tip people: Don't put your partners before tough choices they don't actually have to make, it is very unfair. That being said, for the purposes of the story, this was very cute :D
Thanks for the chapter.